Candelo Speedway

Going bitch-kegs at it
After our Demon Tweak
Seven thousand pistonlicks per second

B.now I have stolen my own weight in pork products
Reader, self-annihilating and semi-devine! Do this in memorium of me.
As revenge against the ones who gave us a taste for infinite things

All our love of Australian Aeronautics
Is concentrated in the corvid crow corby
A kind of songfoul and airborne Satanic Pastie

Half Cornish Half Irish me ma
Has a taste for Scotch Greys
In the Celtic League it maketh me
A treble cleff’d bastard
Familiar t’all loyal
To not
One.
Fornication aplenty
Of Lies? A great cov’rage
Barbarism we try and we try

Unlike Juptire we want to effect a more delicate lechery
Appearing to Leda as neither Bull nor Swan but as a declasse Candy Baron
Having a vivid little roister behind the kirk at Bellbrae

To make mushrooms burst on the side of the blood oven
An organical democracy where every cell might think for itself
And is at war with every other.

In this messy era of the rule of the South Gundagai Molls.
Giddy up.

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A House for Hanne Darboven

I’m not.
I’m not, I’m not, I’m not.

Describing.

And.

Sundial.

Three nine seven one five.
Drei neun sieben nul funf.

And.
No.

She spent her childhood in Hamburg.
She spent her.

Five zero zero zero one.
Plus.
Funf nul nul nul einz.

And.

Not describing.
Zero.
Or.

Even the most ingenious.
Alone.
More alone.

Moonlight.

A leap year.
And.

No.
Strike that.
No.
Not that.
The other one.
The next one.
No.

The power of.
Of one.
Accumulated.
Of property.
Of winning.
Of one winning.
Of having won.

Repeat.
She spent her.
Accumulating.

No.

And.
She spent her.

Sechs sechs vier sieben fünf.
Six six four seven five.

And.
Next.
And.

A graph.
A history.
A technical development.

March.
She spent her.
June.
Moonlight.

Accumulating.

Even the most.
Alone.

One.
Gas mask.
One.
Day.
One.
Skeleton.
One.
Month.
One.
Photograph.
One.
Year.
One.
Toilet chair.
One
Century.
One.
Radio.
Two.
Day.
Two.
Preceding.
Two.
Digits.
Two.
More.
More.

In Hamburg.
In Harburg.

She spent her.
Inventory.
She spent her.
Childhood inventory.
Her in.
Her nnnnnnnnnn.

Next one.

Five zero zero zero…
Plus.
One.

Not one.
None nnnnnnnnnnn.
Not one more
than.
Neither.

And.
At the end.
At the &.
In Haha burg.
In the end.

Nnnnnnnnnnnn.
Not describing.
Not.
Not who.

Aware.
A warehouse.
A working method.

Not her.
Other one.
Other next.

Three.
And.
Nine.
And.
Seven.
And.

Not.
Absent.
Still one.
Not a still one.
Not a Leibniz.

One.
Nnnnnnnnnnnn.
Answered.

She was.
Born.
She was.
In Munich.
She was.
Not.
Nine.
Nineteen.
Nineteen forty one.

And, &.
Strike that.
Discount that.

For the sake of.
For the.
No comment.

Three five. Three five.
Zero zero zero.
One.

Next one.

For.
The sake of.
His.

One five seven two eight.
One five seven two eight.
One five seven two eight.

Story.
And.
Not.
Describing.

In Munich.
In New York.
In Hamburg.

One thousand five hundred & ninety.
Thous. And.

Dead.
And.
She spent.
A leap year.
Alone.
And she.
A bend.
A band.
Good.
And she.
Soon.

A white
band.
On a
white.
Evening.
And she.

No.
Or not.
Even.
No one not even.
Even one.
Less or.
Beginning.
Et
cetera.

And.
So on.

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Trove

Young men 18 to 35
caucasian defendants naked or partly clothed
variously posed Statue of David style

around the yard and inside the judge’s home
bending over aluminium cans shot from behind
in positions amounting to forced labour

A light spanking for minor violations
or misdemeanour citations for example
Person A: marijuana Person B: traffic

The paddle appearing in 4600+ photographs
under pretense of documenting community service
and identified by multiple witnesses as belonging to the judge

was deployed for personal gain
in return for an adjudication of not guilty or dismissal
(do not destroy or otherwise dispose of this paddle)

To the charge of using the robe for benefit
Cross County District Judge Joe Boeckmann answered
I do not want to speak on those matters and stepped down

Shelba Ward lifelong resident of Wynne Arkansas
interviewed while shopping in a downtown thrift store
said everyone knew his court was like a TV show

He’d talk to them like they were a dog
then give them his number
she’d grown up with him even hired him a few times

Mayor Bob Stacy said it was sad to talk about it
sad for him sad for the victims
sad for the city with a smile

Taxpayers had been deprived of fines and fees
but revenue was through the roof now
it was a good day for the Delta

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The Pharmacokinetics of Paracetamol

A paracetamol tablet
                                                  won't hurt
you; it will alleviate
                                                  your aches.
That white tablet’ll
                                                  move down
your GIT and swiftly
                                                  disintegrate.
Within an hour, it’ll
                                                  virtually all
be absorbed into the
                                                  bloodstream.
                                                                                     The [paracetamol]-

                                                                                                                                  time plot will


                                                                                                                                                                reach its max


                                                                                                                                                      then


                                                                                                                                  drop by half-


                                                                                                                        lives.


                                                                                     The area under


                                                                           the


                                                  curve will


                                   then


capture the drug’s
                                                  kinetics.
Particles will’ve gone
                                                  through fine
branches straight into
                                                  most tissues.
This paracetamol
                                                  won't hurt
you; it will alleviate
                                                  your aches.
It will metabolise
                                                  in your liver
to produce inactive
                                                  metabolites.
The chemicals will
                                                  move between
two compartments:
                                                  blood & urine.
                                                                                     The [metabolite]-

                                                                                                                                  time plot will


                                                                                                                                                                reach its max


                                                                                                                                                      then


                                                                                                                                  drop by half-


                                                                                                                        lives.


                                                                                     The area under


                                                                           the


                                                  curve will


                                   then


capture metabolic
                                                  kinetics.
Within a day, it’ll
                                                  virtually all
be excreted via the
                                                  urinary tract.
There will be nary
                                                  a trace of the
paracetamol left in
                                                  your system.
Your pain will’ve
                                                  become
a distant memory.
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Venn diagram

There is the set of living creatures in the house with two legs (all humans?), those with four (dog and cat and an unknown number of mice and possibly rats), those with six (an unknown number of insects), those with eight (an unknown number of spiders) and those living creatures in the house who are not known to the writer and whose legs have not been enumerated. Centipedes? If we count creatures that inhabit or visit the back yard, there are also varying numbers of birds (two legs). bats (two legs) and lord knows what else. Over and under ground.

There is the set of female creatures (one human, one cat and an unknown number of insects, arachnids, arthropods etc.), and the set of males (two humans, one dog and the smaller creatures as before). Among the smaller creatures, possibly other sets.

Two sets of creatures living in this house don’t overlap. The set of creatures that barrack for the Dees and the set of creatures that reread several of Jane Austen’s novels every year. The set of creatures that have killed another creature in the previous month does not include either of these sets, but includes a four-legged creature and at least one female, along with arachnids and other small creatures. The set of creatures that have died in this house in the past month includes one creature with two legs that did not barrack for the Dees or read Jane Austen: an Indian collared dove, gender unknown. It lies in the compost bin shrouded in jasmine prunings, overlaid with scraps of rotting food. Also several mice, four legs, gender unknown. If you include the residents of the compost bin in these categories you could probably add several million each to the categories of male and female plus another category which you could call neither of the above. Numbers of legs unknown. The numbers of killers unknown. The numbers of creatures killed also unknown. Both these sets in the millions. And as for the set of creatures that exist within the bodies of other creatures: doesn’t bear thinking about.

The number of creatures running around on a wide area of grass pursuing a ball, as shown on the tv in the house: thirty-six, all two-legged, all male. Plus a few more adjudicating or sitting on the sidelines. The number of creatures packed into the stands around them: approximately sixty thousand, an unknown mix of male and female. The number of creatures watching the tv on which the game appears: three, all of them with two legs. The number of creatures in the room who are sleeping: one, male, fourlegged. 

Although the set of creatures that barrack for the Dees and the set of creatures that constantly read Jane Austen do not include the set of creatures that have killed another creature over the last month, both sets are included within the set of creatures large and small that have consumed part of the corpse of another creature within the last hour. Pig, never resident in this house. Its flesh, packaged, carried into the house by a creature, two-legged, female, reader of Jane Austen. And stir-fried. And eaten.

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The Idea Takes Place As Place Itself, Expanded and Revised Edition with a New Foreword by the Author

“From where did topos theory come?” that is

the question.
Usually God
Alone
poses rhetorical questions
that answer
themselves unlike
logic.
Also: self-answer, self-slaughter.
It came
from an unblessed contingent confluence
of algebraic geometry and category theory
given further decisive impetus by P.J. Cohen
who developed the technique of forcing to show
the independence of the continuum hypothesis
in 1963. Luckily
no one was writing
poetry that year; it wouldn’t have come off well;
what poem can compare
to something like that? Still.
Forcing is when you take a duck or goose and ram
fat and grain down its throat many
times a day till its liver deduces itself foie gras. Yum,
yum! and iff you kill less than 50 birds a month you get
a bonus. Now there’s a wff. Cruel? Perhaps, but
is there any other way to prove
2N0 ≠ א1 [or at least that that ain’t necessarily so] ?!
Element by element we force by conditions
a gavage of Being
to accept a generic extension that no

longer ratifies the semantics of the ground
model. Law is veer. Live liver dead duck. Booty proof.
These days
it’s all about Cartesian-closed categories with subobject classifiers
oh yeah.
O geologies of the infinite which burrow down
through uncountable (this is a terminus technicus fyi & btw)
infinities to smaller and smaller kinds! What is the smallest
infinity there is? Is it smaller than numbers? Where’s there? Where’s not?
Too soon to say they say
but we do know for every object a
there exists an object p(a), object of subsets of a
and a monomorphism that maps the Cartesian product
of a x p(a) so for every object b and every
monomorphism onto a x b there is one arrow and one
alone that, etc., etc. This is the net, this is the krill,
I am
in a state of permanent becoming
a complete Heyting algebra
a sheaf over a topological space
a more general categorical structure
an embodiment of a correspondence
between the canons of deductive reason
and a divergence of grammatical functions
uniquely determined by the values
given to their arguments by choice

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thought to

I thought to
write about the ocean
I had been
thinking of places of aloneness
enclosed places
come and go as I please

write about
the ocean
address what
she said
−sovereignty of
mind
capacious darkness
flat light
liquid of living
and dying
things reflecting
in more darkness
space and matter in
between fluid skin

becoming airy
thinning out
things in between one
thing and another
surfaces change and
mix
restless folding into
each other

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A Penelopian Gasket

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Extraction

On the news:
the body of a woman has been found.
I am disarmed by the neat calculation
of her personhood, as though
she was human minus mind
divided by immaterial.
My child asks how they will remove his tonsils,
looks at the cut on his hand and feels
he is opening up dangerously.
The surgeon will use—
I am lost for words; how not to frighten him.
Tweezers? he offers, and it sounds less like cutting
so I say, Yes.
At night he sees venomous toads
piercing him with spears:
a liminal translation of the frog in his throat
that will be executed;
or, is he thinking of creation?
After the question about the tonsils
he asks me how the sperm gets into the egg
and I start to say,
When a man and a woman love each other very much,
but I recognise in his surprise—
in my desire to answer with
cartography or mathematics—
a wilful misdirecting of us both
away from
the dark lake of his dreams.

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3 Poems

i. of fullness

fill me up on foreign words so that I might,
in meaning,
feel full.
and play me music, absolute; though map-less,
goes farther
still.


ii. pointing

your largeness larger, larger than, larger than large-less, ab-largely, ab-ending, loosely
large but largenesses-extra leave this largeness less than large, in moreness large but
lesser so, by largeness large
by largeness larger
by largenesses larger
though a-largest, dis-largest
by largenesses larger
and

inter-;

ad-largeness but ab-largest;

though extra
though hyper
though super

though

inter

and
pointing

pointing

always

pointing.


iii. mud

red

seen it
see
saw

through the mire
on foot
on thong

itchier, still
pinches left
right foot, no

I see a tree’s tree
timber, timber
knots and limber

Jordan 4 Arian;
a carving that speaks
of falling silver

humidly; a lofty light
a madness drove them in
a madness drove them in

they catch the caught and never fear
see to live another year
seek the hunt, the catch is near

more rusted ‘shrooms, Aerogard forgot
all stuffed behind the mounted rot
and pondered more and bearing not.

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Dale and Fleming on as Commissioning Editors

Dale and Fleming

Cordite is chuffed (once again) to announce that, joining Rosalind McFarlane as Commissioning Editor, Collaborations, Amelia Dale and Joan Fleming are joining the Cordite Poetry Review fold as Commissioning Editor, Experimental Literature and Commissioning Editor, New Zealand Literature respectively.

Amelia Dale is the ‘author’ of the book CONSTITUTION (Inken Publisch) and the e-objects Tractosaur (Troll Thread), METADATA (SOd) and Grumpy Cat 2 Reads Sanditon Chapter 2 (Gauss Pdf). She co-edits SOd Press, and is the poetry reviews editor of Southerly.

Joan Fleming is a poet living in Melbourne where she is working on a PhD in ethnopoetics. She is the author of Failed Love Poems (Victoria University Press) and The Same as Yes (Victoria University Press).

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Owen Bullock Reviews A Transpacific Poetics

A Transpacific Poetics
Lisa Samuels and Sawako Nakayasu, eds.
Litmus Press, 2017


Lisa Samuels’s introductory essay, ‘What Do We Mean When We Say Transpacific’, begins with a quotation from Pam Brown that is particularly well-chosen for this volume. Brown claims that the ‘authentic’ pertains to someone who isn’t manipulated or being alienated from their context. There’s a good deal in this book about alienation relating to identity and culture; many of the authors have had to fight to preserve authenticity. Samuels proceeds to discuss use of the word ‘transpacific’. She describes the way use of the name was influenced by seeing trucks in Oceania with that label, a word that denotes interactions, adding that ‘trans’ alone indicates the transitive and ‘internal difference’. She stresses that her contributors’ cultural understandings also rely on the fact that Oceania is a positive place.

Likewise, the ocean has location, but it cannot be grasped, it’s too big. Further, ‘the ocean is one example of the challenge of perceiving what exceeds single identity’ – a wonderful metaphor for the cultural diversity that this book represents. The ocean is one massive being, but rather than seeing its symbol as marginalising everything else, Samuels prefers to ponder what she calls ‘distributed centrality’. She’s a writer who likes to generate her own terminology. Invariably, her terms offer new ways of thinking.

A more familiar idea is that the ocean connects us. We are also connected by the internet, but Samuels describes the danger of likening the internet to the ocean, since the internet is English-dominated. Alternatively, she wonders what happens when the universal digitas – which she defines as ‘digital performativity with constitutive perfusing by the techne and humans involved’ – is imagined at the same time as multi-lingual, multi-local, even ‘multi-here’ variations. With this guiding thought in mind, the editors sought out writing which inhabited ‘at least two zones’ of Pacific life. Rather than being exclusionary, she wants this anthology of ‘inclusions and lacunae’ to foster other such collections.

Among other new terms, Samuels favours ‘transhuman’ over ‘post-human’, since the former seems to render the human obsolete at a lexical level, whereas ‘transhuman’ emphasises ‘the interfacing body’ and connects and ‘holds open what it means to be human’. The experiments with genre in the anthology are examples of ‘empowered re-mapping’, indicative of a cross-pollination of cultures.

Colonisation and later related manifestations brought by tourism are anterior to such desirable fusion. Extracts from Jai Arun Ravine’s ‘The Romance of Siam’ are laugh-out-loud funny, rhythmic and demotic, yet retain the undertone of concern about cultural appropriation. They employ a disingenuous technique which captures a state of mind, though it might seem at first glance to be a vernacular which is insufficiently stylised: ‘I, I have never owned the place of my, um, mother’s birth. I, I visited there once, twice and I, I want to apply for the, uh, Fulbright, too’. Later, the voice of the poem describes having pretended not to know English and suppressing everything ‘non-Thai’ just to get some sense of belonging. Ultimately, this voice feels that everything it owns is owned by a white person.

‘The Romance of the Siamese Dream’, is a short play in three acts, with overture and finale. Yul Brynner is on stage for the 4,634th performance of The King and I. But he’s dreaming. A rice cooker named Tiger appears on stage, and wants him to put his head inside. In the second act, Tiger is replaced by Anna, who is keen to teach Yul to act. She also fantasises about leaving Britain for America from the same port as the Titanic – this detail reflects a note informing the reader that the actress who played Anna falsified her past, pretending she was of English extraction. In the interest of surprise, I’ll leave the summary there, but Ravine’s work is an alarming and attractive piece of writing, which emphasises the preoccupation of the first.

By contrast, Ravine’s, ‘Under Erasure’ is a series of diary entries from Doi Saket, Bangkok and Chiang Mai during the period of a residency to make a film titled ‘TOM / TRANS / THAI’. This work seems much less engaged with its environment than one might expect, but at the same time that’s part of its point – it wants to remain detached, even if the writing runs the risk of failing to resonate. On one level, I feel that the writing needs to take courage and go deeper into its subject matter by using more detail, especially of gender-related issues – the author identifies as transgender and uses the plural personal pronoun – but part of its quite deliberate stance lies in a resistance to any expectation to foreground reflections in gender. Effectively, then, the series of diary entries embodies an important concern.

As with Ravine’s work, Don Mee Choi’s series of short prose pieces, ‘Freely Frayed’, makes its points with deft and inventive uses of language. Its first concern is the influence of American culture in Korea. ‘Hanky Yankee, are you frayed?’ it demands, and it goes on to prove itself as:

… a mimicker of mimetic words in particular. Doubled consonants or certain parts of speech that are repeated on certain occasions, which can be said to be nobody’s business, but they are since everything in English is everybody’s business. Farfar swiftswift zealzeal … In my world of nobody’s business I twirl about frantically frequently farfar to the point of failure feigning englishenglish.

The doubled words are used as a motif to open subsequent paragraphs. The author is revealed as a translator, with translation described as ‘a process of endless displacement’. Inevitably, the ‘displaced poetic identity’ of a translation in progress – of the poet Kim Hyesoon’s work – must ‘failfail’.

I confess that despite having written haiku for nearly twenty years, I am new to the form of Hay(na)ku, discussed by originator Eileen Tabios in her essay, ‘The History of Hay(na)ku’. It’s an intriguing, short form comprised of three lines of one, two and three words. Tabios claims it retains the ‘charge’ of haiku whilst including paradox evocative of Filipino culture. For me, it looks to have something in common with the cinquain as well as the haiku, with the same attendant difficulty of overcoming such arbitrary limitations. Tabios describes the origin of the name as she negotiated the reference to haiku and historical cultural implications for Filipino writers. She humbly suggests that other poets have been more successful with the form than she has herself, an idea which she accepts with the statement that any poetry ‘ultimately transcends the poet’s autobiography’.

As suggested, Samuels’s idea of ‘empowered re-mapping’ finds significant expression in many of the works. Melanie Rands fuses found text and vernacular lyric – ‘he said tell your fulla’s fulla / to talk to my fulla’ – with text and image, experimental typography, photocopied notes and drawings in a sequence which narrates passage to New Zealand on the steamer Matua (‘South of the Line [“Aloha Activities”]’). This embodied uses of page space is especially compelling:

atoll


                                      lagoon
             date line






                        Musician

Much more densely, Ya-Wen Ho’s text builds up markers of identity – ‘a zinester; a fosterer of cats; a lover of sunny days’ – by repeating and adding to them over five pages before the first descriptors are printed over and effectively erased (‘This List is Written by a List-maker’). Initially, the new additions continue, but then whole phrases are blocked out before a final reiteration of the whole of the text with a few omissions. The sequence conveys a reiteration of story and language and a contrasting fading away, perhaps of memory, or relevance.

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20 Poets, a Free Anthology from Cordite Books

Get 20 Poets here

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Cover design by Zoë Sadokierski

20 Poets features poetry from all the authors from series 1 & 2 of Cordite Books. It’s free, and it’s intended to be given away as widely as possible.

The geographic barriers that can, at times, hinder Australian literature are no longer relevant, and poetry communities around the world must be enlightened by the commanding, demanding and exciting trajectory of contemporary Australian poetics.

This anthology is a mélange of the experimental and the lyrical, written by poets in all stages of their careers, and reflects the cultural vibrancy that fuels contemporary Australian letters.

While 20 Poets, including its translations (into future Hindi and the Spanish), may have a once-off print run for a given festival or event, it will predominantly be distributed as an electronic book in portable document format. Central to Cordite Books and its authors is the visual appearance of the work, and the ways in which positive and negative space are engaged across a verso–recto spread. Read it on as large a screen as possible, in two-page view display, to deliver the intended look of the poetry.

Each poet included here is represented by four pages of poetry and the preface from their Cordite book. Many of the publications are book-length poems, and this inclusion provides a greater context for the work. These four pages are allotted to display the range and style of each poet.

Without question, future iterations of this book will see new titles – 30 Poets, 40 Poets – but here we are at the beginning: you, me and the twenty authors collected here. Enjoy the work, and please seek out a print book or two if you are particularly bewitched by what you read.

A note on the cover

Says Zoë Sadokierski …

I was looking for ways to represent 20 and was stuck on mathematical things – grids, lines, counting – which resulted in patterns. Poetry book covers often end up with patterns on them, and I didn’t want that.

I thought of 10 fingers and 10 toes, but feet and hands can be ugly. Then I thought about hands signing 2 and 0 – I remembered seeing a typeface with hand signs, so I found it to see what typing out ‘20 poems cordite 17’ (20 letters) looked like on a grid.

Although the anthology is not about deafness or signing in any way, I made a fleeting conceptual link between poetry and sign language – each demands close attention to the rhythm and pace of the signs / letterforms, and the spaces and pauses between them. I’ve always been fascinated by how important the facial expressions are in sign language – if you ignore the emotion expressed, and just look at the hand signals, you risk misunderstanding the nuance. Likewise, if you read poetry literally … you miss the nuance.

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Review Short: Jill Jones’s Brink

Brink by Jill Jones
Five Islands Press, 2017


It’s a neat twenty-five years since Jill Jones’s first book, The Mask and the Jagged Star, was published and in that time she has built for herself a reputation as a serious and ambitious poet whose work demands, and generally rewards, close reading. She is certainly not a poet of easy gestures or flashy effects.

As with Jones’s earlier collections, Brink is not a book to be turned through quickly in a coffee bar (though this may well be a good place to take it in slowly, to let yourself be absorbed in its world despite the incidental hubbub around you. It’s divided into three sections which share overlapping concerns and techniques. There’s a recurrent preoccupation with weather (indeed, climate change) and with language, its quirks and difficulties which she often, with varying success, embodies in the poems themselves.

‘The Lagoon’, the collection’s third poem, is reasonably typical of the book as a whole and has the tones of desperation and urgency that are detectable throughout. ‘The names of the gods are in the clouds,’ says the narrator, ‘and on each numberplate. / I’m counting on you wherever you may be … / Lists extend from scraps / and packages waterlogged with the moon. / The car tyre is without companions. / The lake sings a little. My consonants drown.’ Despite the negatives of the details (‘scraps’, ‘packages waterlogged’ and an abandoned ‘car tyre’) there is also a strong urge towards lyricism — literally in the case of ‘The lake sings a little’.

In a sense, ‘The Lagoon’ is also a political poem, almost an activist one, but subtle nevertheless. Its main intention is to generate a disturbing, even disorienting mood rather than to mount a case. Jones is not concerned with a line of argument from line to line but rather with the poem’s final effect.

‘Fruit’, another early poem in the book, seems at first reading an orthodox ‘nature’ poem in praise of fruit bats. As its fourteen lines of blank verse develop, however, it’s plain that the narrator doesn’t know as much as she feels she ought to about the bats and is slightly nauseated by them. Their noise is a ‘painful ache’. In the sonnet’s sestet, the implications broaden. The bats become emblematic of loss, all kinds of loss (‘ “I have to go” and people go. I have gone. / One day I shall already be gone.’) The poem ends nevertheless with a defiant optimism: ‘But the tree / still breaths, kerchak kerchak — bats / feeding their god in the guttural dark’.

At times throughout Brink, especially in poems such as ‘Speak Which’, Jones pushes her sense of what language can (and can’t) do to the limits. Syntax is contorted or suspended. Words operate as single, freestanding units. Punctuation is left to the mind of the reader. If all poetry is an attempt to ‘speak the unspeakable’ — or ‘eff’ the ineffable — Jones’s poetry in ‘Speak Which’ is an extreme example. ‘form / is tested / as leaves fall // not itself / but what it / does // shapes in / the mind breath / unsaid // don’t say / never trees move / fates // water / sings on / consonants and grain …’

The enjambment here is extreme and at times reminiscent of the more philosophical poems of William Carlos Williams. The short lines are an attempt to slow the reader down and make them think about what is not being said as well as what is. The poet could write ‘don’t say never’ and ‘trees move fates’ but it’s significant that she doesn’t. Some readers may be impatient with such niceties but they would be foolish to dismiss them as needless.

Quite a few of Jones’s poems in Brink also have a dystopian context, seemingly brought about by climate change (and related events). They can be almost scary but they are not without positivity too. A good example is ‘Our Epic Want’. Near its beginning the narrator says ‘We were somewhere in the torn fabric, parting the seams. / We’d given up on claustrophobia.’ Later ‘We found a world of foam and fug and acetylene. // The rain rattled us but it was the wrong size, too big, too grey. / There was nothing between it like love or even its simulacra.’ Despite all this, at the end of the poem the narrator and her companion are still walking: ‘We’d dreamt of last things first, getting behind ourselves, like an urge, or a fault. / But there was plenty more, and we still had the air around our skin.’ Some may find the last line ironic but I prefer to see it as optimistic (or at least courageous).

Poems like these (and there are a number of them) are certainly admonitory but they are far from the overly-insistent fulminations that disfigure much ‘environmental’ poetry essaying similar objectives.

More directly enjoyable perhaps is the small scattering of love poems recurring throughout. One of the most memorable is the collection’s antepenultimate poem, ‘More Than Molecules’. Derived from Catullus 48, ‘More Than Molecules’ is a loving and delicate balance between the physical and the metaphysical. Its middle stanza (of three) is worth reprinting in full.

Even if I counted the air
in all its nonchalant molecules
or the ways everything
grows after it dies, the grass
waving at us, if I could count 
each shiver it makes 
I’d still wish to touch you 
ten thousand more times
kiss the time that’s left
the time that leaves the grains
as we sit down, out in the field
which is dying, the trucks
the lands, the malls, the litter
the nuclear waste, all those
molecules too, everywhere.
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Review Short: Shane Rhodes’s Dead White Men

Dead White Men by Shane Rhodes
Coach House Books, 2017


From the title of Shane Rhodes’s collection Dead White Men, we know we are in fraught if familiar territory. Those men are the subjects to be critiqued, argued with, taken down in light of today’s history. Read alongside the recent debate about Confederate statues, which includes actions such as painting Columbus’s hands red, Rhodes becomes an ally in an intersectional coalition that seeks to engage the higher faculties without neglect of the bodily drives. In that way, Dead White Men is as reasoned as it is passionate. Myths are skewered, words re-appropriated, archives punked, records reclaimed, origin stories destroyed. This is not only at the level of content, but language, form and page. In a beautifully produced volume, the text varies in font, size and scale. There are images scattered throughout, all in black and white, including some silhouettes and some photographic reprints. In that way, Australian readers will recognise similarities to Belli Li’s recent release Argosy.

Rhodes proposes that the changes from the past to today through small gestures that have structural implications. He often uses the technique of accumulation, whereby poems becomes lists and phrases repeat giving one a structural account of change over time. The pyramids of those times, and of ours, are the skulls of our own and many other species as well. This is there in ‘Imports into the Ports of London and Rochelle in 1743’, which states:

153, 830 Beaver
110,005 Racoon
45,055 Martins
16,832 Bears
13,058 Otters and Woodshocks, or Fifhers
10,280 Grey Foxes and Cats
3,117 Wolves
2,330 Cates, i.e. Lynx
1,710 Minx
692 Wolverenes
451 Red Foxes
440 Deer
130 Elks, i.e. Stags
120 Squirrels

Colonial exploitation, conquest: discovery is as mercantile as it is ecological. A simple list becomes a solemn reminder of just what happened on the frontier. If we know anything then, it is that we know that colonialism is a litany of violence, blood and gore that is specific, taking in the metropolis and the frontier alike and animals along with people.

Reading about Alberto Cantino, James Cook, Jacques Carrier, Robert Boyle and others as they ‘explore’ new lands; ‘discover’ new words’, ‘seek out’ gold, one cannot help but think through the politics of repatriation, treaty, occupation, unsettlement, place, rights now. There are, of course, variations among these engagements. Linguistic engagement is not the same as resource extraction, which we see by comparing the poems ‘Linguisticers’ and ‘Gold’. The former reads:

: a boat
: go fetch

:come hither
: I meane no harm

: kiss me
: my sonne

: go to him
: give it to me

: no
: will you have this?

: music
: iron

: a knife
: a fog

: a tongue

The threat is here, but it is contained – one must infer that the music is used, that maybe the tongue is cut out. But in ‘Gold’ we are told in the opening line, ‘For it is beaten and we are beaten for it’. And that is where language differs from action, where the engagement of the word is not quite the same as the shovel, the pickaxe, the railroad. Both, though, are critical parts of narratives of exploration, invasion, colonialism.

In other words, you must read between the lines, connecting the dots to make a structural critique. Given its stylistic variation – from erasure to aphoristic asides to lengthy narrative – Rhodes’s work is often subtle, which gives it the strength of reinforcing how insidious these historical realities were. With a similar gaze applied to our own time, one cannot help but speculate on how poets will be regarded in the future. What is the responsible path to take? How might we undo the machinations of history that are unfolding as we speak? What of the living white men who head our systems of power?

Universal suffrage, interracial marriage, independent governance means we read Rhodes’s historical work as just that – history. And yet, these legacies extend to our everyday, which is why this work resonates. From its language, to its style, to its content, to its form, to its experiments, this is work that stay with you for a long time after you have been released from their strangling grip. This is work that articulates a higher consciousness of poetry and history, interrogating who we are and why we must continue to critique where we have come from, and the spaces we continue to occupy with an enlightened dialectic that knows that it too, even in the harsh light of day, is also barbaric.

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Introduction to Jeanine Leane’s Walk Back Over


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In Walk Back Over, Wiradjuri woman – read: poet, academic, historian, teacher – Jeanine Leane takes off our wallpaper to reveal the personal and political layers of a nuanced history.

With Leane, we walk back over history pages, walk back over the night and find what was always there, trip over the wires of dissent and denial. It’s a walk we need, a good one for the legs, across a country whose landscapes are haunted and fragile and tragic; there is no place that is benign. ‘What piece’ (what peace)? – the question asked in the second poem, ‘Piece of Australia’ – becomes an echo in the reader’s mind throughout the collection.

We know the past speaks, and Leane personifies history. Lady Mungo has a voice, the archives have a voice, the ancestors have a voice. She grew up in Gundagai in the Wiradjuri (meaning: of the rivers) nation in central New South Wales and her Country and the legacy of the women who raised her on it are central to her vision of Australia.

Walk Back Over is an accomplished poetic dissection of the country’s problem – an embodiment of an inability to move on from a colonial terra nullius mentality that minimises massacres and denies the theft of land. We represent communities still looking for lost ones. Trauma is in many rooms and still we survive. To demonstrate this, Leane shows the personal effects of assimilatist policies. In ‘Real Australian girl, 1975’, the young narrator pictures conforming her body for the white gaze in visceral terms ‘… a fillet knife / slicing through those thick lips until they are / wan, white and bloodless like Friday fish’. This is matched with the resolute, defiant identity: in ‘Unassimilated’, ‘Your assimilation failed to break / black lines flowing from the heart / my Grandmother, my Mother, Me, my Children.’ A desire grows to put them, the colonisers under the microscope – we’ve been under there too long.

Hot water is always hot. It keeps being refilled. The words continue to be direct, calm and clever. The timing and sequencing delivers, the collection flows and ebbs like – I imagine – the author’s often-mentioned ancestral Murrumbidgee River (a life source, a document) used to before white intervention.

Leane continues to question what is ‘outside history’ in poems about visits to other countries. Like the beautiful ‘Sunrise to Sunset in Yangshuo’, where the narrator moves with the sun through the city and does not drop her gaze. I will return often to this scented writing. When we absorb knowledge, we become larger.

Close to the end, tenderness comes in. Through the length of the collection, Leane has carved a hole in the rock of us and that’s where I have saved my tears, for they are gathered in the tiny pool of a beautiful poem, ‘Child’, about the relationship between mother and son and the slippage of time. ‘You clung to my hand like / I knew the world.’ The emphasis on love in Walk Back Over brings a reminder of responsibility. If you love this country, truly love it, understand what has been taken, talk about it, don’t flinch, don’t cover your eyes.

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Introduction to Anne Elvey’s White on White


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What is happening in these poems? Or do I mean what happens to us, the readers? But which ‘us’? And what reader? I am not really talking about feeling, although who couldn’t, wouldn’t, feel when ‘School Days’ – a poem that records every detail of white skin and soul, sun-warmed government-issue school milk and British ritual in one colonial Australian home – has another child, likely an Indigenous Australian child, stolen ‘while waiting for a train’. This is a crystalline evocation of the public secret of the removal of Australia’s Indigenous children from their homes and communities, which began as a sporadic technique of settlement in the early days of the colony, became an official policy of assimilation in the 1900s and continued right up until the 1970s. But White on White’s point isn’t empathy or sympathy, it’s unsettlement. And I don’t mean discomfort. I mean the unstitching – through the interrogative deployment of one uncanny image after another – of white Australia from the idea that we ever ‘settled’ anything.

Although I have identified a connective theme, don’t for a moment think there is a sameness to the poems that follow. Rather, they operate with the necessary mix of adaptation and surprise that tactical warfare demands. Elvey’s poems use the spatial possibilities of the page: hiding some words within gaps, sending others to the raw edges and pushing yet more into compressed packages as if an introduction to something greater … closed fragments fallen from another tomb. They show their sources and, in so doing, march us in to ask complicated questions of historical ‘truth’. What more than ‘report’ does any report do?

In White on White, Elvey uses words. And I mean uses like how I imagine them personified, waking up after she’s had her way with them – no morning-after pill, no realigned chakras to help them back – wondering if they’re still the same symbols they were before their appearance in this project of acknowledging, perhaps even dismantling, white privilege. Although they lent their use willingly – took drugs, gave permission – they’ve awakened to an unmoored feeling not anticipated.

Sometimes the words are simply left to bleach in the sun, marooned by the impasse they produce. Look carefully at ‘Five ways of graphing colonisation’ and see how the lines

Terror nullius of empire, imprints my retina, 
press, 
of moisture,
on a cheek

effect a very different politic of white distance when distributed across the page like forgotten huts on unused hills. Other words are made to churn up the gaps between colonial and Indigenous Australian philosophies, and between ideas of Country and notions of land owned, settled, fought for, inherited, mined, farmed, schooled and stolen.

Listen to these sentences removed from the whole of their original poems: ‘What ticket is inherited for title?’, ‘the unhurried hazard of the banksia counters / the raised pulse of the dash’ and ‘I put my hand to the twitching rod / lend my ear to the ochre ground’. Tiny phrases that worm their way under our suddenly very noticeable skin. This collection is not the bomb or its blast in an old-fashioned war; it is an attempt to unsheathe the non-Indigenous from the idea of an ordinary skin. Perhaps all of these poems can be explained by the poet’s admission that there once was a time she mispelled ‘seperation’ and on her ‘desk the whiteout / is shelved beside the pens.’

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Winners for the Val Vallis Award for an Unpublished Poem 2017

Run by Queensland Poetry Festival, and named in honour of a distinguished Queensland poet, the Arts Queensland Val Vallis Award for an Unpublished Poem is committed to encouraging poets throughout Australia. 2017 Selection panel: Stuart Barnes and Michelle Cahill.

Winner

In ‘Quietly, on the way to Mars’, Bronwyn Lovell opens a space for the discussion of human evolution and the unknown. This dazzling lyric and narrative poem courses a similar trajectory to such oth er transformative feminist poems as Adrienne Rich’s ‘Diving into the Wreck’. Lovell’s poem houses shadows, a sense of the past and a curiosity concerning them; it sustains a speculative quality and maintains a fascination with the psychology of law and relationships; it is compelling for its wit, its command of striking language, its sense of quiet achievement. The speaker wryly notes: ‘The medi-display won’t quit winking / on my wrist. I worry what tales it is telling, / how long till those monitoring suspect / my duplicitous condition. That’s the trouble / with sending humans—we’re not so loyal / as Labradors, nor diligent as DNA. / People are bound to disappoint.’

Runner up (tie)

His Master’s Voice’, by Jeff Guess, is addressed to the poet’s father, and this spare sequence of five contemporary sonnets in couplet form takes for its subject a work tool or a writing instrument. It achieves a rare lyric accomplishment of characterisation and transgenerational narrative expressing regret and devotion, infidelity and compassion. It is a honed and quietly thoughtful sequence.

Highest QLD entry

Laurie Keim’s ‘The Future of Music’, with its trance-like focus and enigmatic dialectic, elegantly argues for the possibility of a lyric space in the technosphere.

Highly commended

(after) HER: dating app adventures’ by Rebecca Jessen
Buying satin dresses at Yu Garden’ by Ella Jeffery

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Buying Satin Dresses at Yu Garden

I buy them like fruit,
my body

still on the bike,
one foot grounded.

This one like a wedge
of lime on my lip.

Idiot machines
clench these colours

together in some grainy
province,

craft
ravelled down

to whatever thread’s
cheapest, raw cord

around the waist,
three cuts: head, arms.

This one slides
from its hanger, a ripe

weight in my hand,
crazed yellow strung

from the machine’s
tropic mind.

The street slings past.
A man pushes

his fruit cart, calls out.
I lay the dress

in my basket, hand over
blanched banknotes,

and though I know
this appetite can’t be met

by a dress
it is so delicious

that both my feet
are already off the ground.

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(after) HER: dating app adventures

how do you say
how you doin??
without evoking Joey from Friends?

I’m only here because I want
to find a girl to ask
wanna Netflix and chill?

I filter out
the over 40
silver-haired
broken embrace
that was
you

swiping through
so many:
nose rings
(the new lesbian signifier?)
pics of you and your Burmese kitten
(how original)
tit pics
long-haired lesbians
(maybe The L Word was realistic after all)

Lucy liked you!
hit the ♥ to start a conversation

how do you say
to the 20 year old
I prefer older women

I’m looking
for a straight-up lesbian
to raise my puppies with
r u down 2 clown m8?

I’m not surprised to find
none of these girls are you

you’re like a movie usher dude
but more stylish 😉

how do you take a compliment
when the last compliment was
you are good and tender and kind
and I don’t want you

how do you say
I mate for life
in text speak?

is it wrong to click ♥
because I think your Burmese is cute

a sparky sparks up a conversation
didn’t you say
you wanted
to date someone good with their hands?
I was good with my hands once

I’m one of those people
who’s like
arts degrees
what’s the point?

laugh out loud
and back away quietly
you have someone else to be

how do you say
I had two hearts once
how do you say
I only came here to forget
her

what happens when the girl says
I’m looking for that special someone
and some unburied feeling
ruptures you

I am not looking for that special someone
I am not looking for that
I am not looking.

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The Future of Music

1.
Is it the sound of rain, or rain
Distorted, a downpipe, the pitch
Of blue harmonics in a score of blue?

There, the sound, and then there’s you,
Grand arbiter, the governor of loops,
By whits, you pulse, you impulse to the drip,

And there, you hear, in time, everything,
Everything imparts reverb, everything,
Birthing stars, volcanic blips, the mind.

Is it enough to hear your voice pause,
A multiverse away, like TV news,
Heard, streetwise, in prophetic riffs?

To hear you move, by tonal raps against
Yourself, hear you drawing nearer,
Hear you in silken sound-scapes, repeat,

Each step within the biosphere, repeat,
Can you hear me now? The harmony,
Never before heard, in allied time.


2.
Where, exactly, in my future mind,
Will you be playing? In gabled woods?
Shall I prepare a festival and shake

My tambour to your drum-machine?
Wave on wave, waterbirds surf
The heavens, for the end is always,

Timelessly, beginning the next curve
Of justice. I don’t wish to march, no more,
But soar, the pinion in a curving wind.

By the sound of it, we dance closer,
In reverberating essence,
Polar, we press our hearts, only, ahead.

Drips of rain falling on paper,
Eternal exclamation marks,
How each, the incidental holds to you,

How the particular is first out
Of phase, and before too long, we rely
On it, to bring the music to the future.

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His Master’s Voice

for my father

Shovel
i.

Beneath a trademark
rust – spendnought

the worn calligraphy
of work – still

stamped on the shaft.
The work ethic

of his generation.
Not replaced

but repaired,
over and over again.

The patchwork
of so many years

made stronger always
at the broken place.


Fishing Sinker
ii.

Making with him as a child
spoon-sinkers for the dragging surf

of Christmas beaches.
Molten lead – poured

into his workman’s thumbprint
into sharp wet sand

a metaphor that might turn
base metal into something precious.

Handing carefully
the small crucible to me,

that first time – to make my own,
after his fashion. Lies now

within my grasp. The alchemy
of all that I once had from him.


Lino Knife
iii.

The blade
a small silver crescent moon

of tempered steel
honed to a razor:

he might test along
the dark hairs on his hand.

And then the cut and slice,
a secret pact

between his eye and fingers.
The sharp smell of new

yellow linoleum. The dark red
inlay of swirls and shapes

and then the quick fish
that swam beneath the knife.


Golf Spoon
iv.

A khaki canvas bag
of wooden sticks

he shouldered across
the bare earth and stony

golf course
at Tumby Bay

raking the sand
as an auxiliary for grass

always a birdie
on the fifth

an eagle on the ninth
and who used to say

the best wood in his bag
was his pencil.


Fountain Pen
v.

For four years
in Darwin after the Japanese

poured his heart out
in a river of love

the blood transmuted
into blue ink

through the small black
Bakelite pen

one for every day
to the woman who was not

my mother then
a marriage in only words

burning them all after he died
before she got too old to forget.

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Quietly, on the way to Mars

i.
There were things I was sorry to see fade:
the haze of Earth’s atmosphere,

the last soundwaves from home,
and his fingerprints on my skin.

ii.
They sent him to sprinkle seeds
like fairy dust, to thaw frozen soil

with the warmth of his touch, to unfurl
green tendrils, rouse a dormant season

and remind life how to grow: stubbornly,
despite it all. But seven months is a long

stretch to travel somewhere—long enough
for the smallest kernel of regret to swell, turn

sour and sprout. If only it were just that.
Wildflowers have sprung from our garden bed.

I want to scream, kick, pummel my fists
but that would only waste oxygen, damage

the ship. I sit tense as a tightrope, silent
as a land mine woken with a click.

iii.
I harbour a stowaway, knees tucked
snugly under chin, silently floating,

curled inside flesh — cushioned and
weightless. The most natural thing

in our world is now worldless, blindly
travelling toward an unnatural fate

too late to terminate. I should have
listened to my mother, to every cell

objecting to the centrifuge, the deep
sea dives, all those times I thought

I would die if I had to live through
another day of training. But I was too

stubborn to give up. Couldn’t see
then, I was giving up everything.

iv.
I used to read the seasons scrawled
across the sky, watch patterns

track in arcs, look to clouds for cues,
spy cumulus gathering low and thick,

heavy on the horizon. Hear rainbirds
screeching overhead, question the air

to gauge the weight that threatened
to fall upon or shudder through me,

fathom how long I might have left
to shelter, or risk a last-ditch run.

Space wears no clouds, has no cockatoo.
No storm-scent stirs the soul awake

on stuffy afternoons. No change in wind
swings in to prickle pale, goosy flesh.

No cicada chant fades to hush
as raindrops hit the rusty tank.

No crickets thrum their tonal tide,
trilling me to sleep. Your small feet kick

me conscious, cramped in my cold,
climate-controlled bunk. Quietly, I weep.

v.
Hard to concentrate on anything other
than those cells multiplying within,

performing set functions without
questioning—crafting the lovely, tiny

skeleton our blueprints dared to sketch.
The medi-display won’t quit winking

on my wrist. I worry what tales it is telling,
how long till those monitoring suspect

my duplicitous condition. That’s the trouble
with sending humans—we’re not so loyal

as Labradors, nor diligent as DNA.
People are bound to disappoint.

vi.
I am pregnant. And day
by day, the I falls away,

becomes vessel, protective
layer for my successor—

all mucus new.
Bearer of bloodlines,

turning in womb, feeding
on me, making me sick.

vii.
Without gravity holding us together,
nobody knows how a foetus will grow.

They’ll have to scalpel the child
from me, of course—our bones

too weak for a vaginal birth.
My body has changed

since leaving Earth—
defying its own evolution.

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Submission to Cordite 84: SUBURBIA

Suburbia

Poetry for Cordite 84: SUBURBIA is guest-edited by Lachlan Brown and Nathanael O’Reilly.

Send us your latest and greatest poems about the suburbs, the immense variety of life therein, and whether your suburban experience is inner, outer, middle-belt, beachside, exclusive, inclusive, multicultural, bogan, hipster or something else together. We want to read your poems about sprawl, diversity, quarter-acre blocks, subdivided living, Maccas, Woolies, drive-through bottle shops, abandoned shopping trolleys, graffiti in alleys, storm water drains, milk bars and 7/11s, kids walking to school, the elderly waiting at bus stops, slow trains to the city, skate parks, footy fields, rubbish-filled creeks, mosques, temples, churches, shopping centers and your first kiss behind the bike sheds after school. Interrogate and refashion those stereotypes about conformity, consumerism, homogeneity and boredom and surprise us with your explorations and excavations of SUBURBIA.


Submit poems (prose, comics, visual, concrete) or works of microfiction (500 words maximum). Read more about submitting to Cordite Poetry Review. Please note:

1. We will only read submissions sent during our official submission periods.

2. Cordite maintains a hybrid submissions policy. This means that the guest editor may invite five (5) Australian and five (5) overseas authors directly to submit to the issue. In addition, the guest-editor will anonymously select an additional 30-35 works from Australian authors and use their discretion to select further overseas works. For each issue, the guest editor does not know the identities of the online contributors (via Submittable) until after the final selections have been made.

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