A Record of Our Trip (Nebraska)

There was wind
between the clouds and the earth
when we argued on the beach
an easterly
		cloud darkened day
that whined past our ear holes
and picked up the sand
that covered our ice creams
our teeth
whipped the skin of the son and the daughter
and made the baker
nag customers 
to close the door when they came into his shop

                             *****

Things I said to you
into your sunglasses
went unheard
by the kids
or maybe they ignored 
for the ecstasy of the wet mud-sand 
that they could cover each other with
free of consequence

                             *****

The son pointed to an albatross 
that swooped on a crab
the size of a meat pie

                             *****

Wind noises
between my words
	from a nail gun
		I hate you
		I’m going to pack 5 shirts
		And leave
you threw sand
that was hard to gather
it was so wet and thick
so 
only a sprinkle hit me
which made you madder

and you sat away
in the easterly wind cocoon
to soak up the hate
to move the clouds
the water, the sand
seagulls
following the albatross with the big crab in it’s beak

people all around
walking dogs
kissing
children thrown in the air
like it is was all fantastic
in this wind

                             *****

Later in the surf at Skene’s Creek beach
I helped the son
ride a board
for the first time
	something unforgettable that belongs to me now
like the black cockatoos
above the surf
the mountain behind
your hands on hips, smiling at the son on the wave
		that belongs to me 

                             *****

At night
outside the beach house
reading quietly
old people inside with all lights on
loud air conditioner
louder television

drowning out the crickets that flew into your back
my face
making the night hotter

six small flashes of lightning
in an hour
showing a pocket of horizon
orange
		silver
	grey
	orange
	orange
		yellow


way 		away

                             *****

In the morning
I didn’t tell you how beautiful you looked
on purpose

                             *****

on the walk
with the son and the daughter
we saw the sea urchins
the dead penguin
and 
starfish
shark shaped rocks
caves with couches
a bolt drilled into the rock

the wind gone then

                             *****

Back at the house
the old people
talking over lunch
about
how they could buy as many toilets as they wished
 from the second hand barn
you could also get shoes
orange juice
chain
crucifixes

                             *****

You, the son and the daughter
slept all the way home
through the flat farms 
between Colac and Ballarat
pines, oaks dead, from World War I
no music in the car
all the way home
replays of the argument on the beach
and old people in the second hand barn
interrupted by a slow tractor
a trailer with a bag of wool
a hawk
crows
everyone asleep

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Q&A with Liam Ferney

Liam Ferney is a Brisbane poet. He works in politics. His collections of poetry include Career (Vagabond Press, 2011) and Popular Mechanics (Interactive Press, 2004). He is a former Poetry Editor of Cordite.

Can you describe your typical day at work?

I am a political staffer in the education and industrial relations portfolios for the Queensland Government. I am responsible for media management and with more than 1200 schools spread across an area more than nine times the size of Nebraska with 50,000 teachers teaching almost half a million students with just under a million parents who all get their news from 14 daily newspapers, four television networks, five radio networks and the incessant mosquito swarm that is social media, it can be a huge job.

The average working day usually kicks off around 6:30am. Before I get out of bed I’ll scroll through emails on my Blackberry to find out if anything has happened overnight and to take stock of the morning papers.

However, if I’m especially unlucky my day can start closer to 5:00am with some obnoxious radio producer wanting an interview on some breaking issue. If this happens I have to pretend that a) I’m already awake, b) am completely across the issues and c) didn’t think it was a good idea to have half a dozen G&Ts the night before.

If there are urgent morning issues I’ll generally try and write talking points and handle enquiries from home before heading in, however, if it’s a light morning I will be in the office before 8:00am to read the rest of the papers, scan the office diary and brief the Premier’s staff on key issues. This is all fuelled by mugs of strong black instant coffee.

What follows can be hard to predict. There is no real typical day or even rhythm to a day. Some days are completely taken up by talking to journalists and public servants to handle breaking media issues. Other days are completely consumed by writing speeches, media releases, tweets, talking points, statements and updating websites.

If there are media events I am heavily involved in planning them and often accompany the Minister to schools, worksites or other events across the state. This might even involve taking a 6:00am flight in one of the Government planes to open a school 2000kms away.

Other days can be full of meetings with Departmental staff, politicians and other political staffers, external stakeholders and community groups. There are always documents to approve, Right to Information applications to manage, briefing notes to approve and all of this while keeping an ear on the radio and an eye on twitter to stay ahead of the media cycle.

While there are no typical days, generally my day begins to wind up around 5pm with the first of the evening news bulletins. This is the time to finalise media enquiries, prepare talking points ahead of tomorrow’s news items and try and clear the email inbox. Generally, if I’m lucky I’m out of the office by around 6:15pm.

It doesn’t give me a whole lot of time to write but it is a tremendous finishing school for a communications professional and while writing poetry is my heart and soul, professional communications is my bread and butter and I am working hard to build twin careers in both areas.

Do you consider writing poetry to be a form of work?

Poetry is a passion however it is also an art and, as such, it is like anything you want to improve at, you have to work at it. This means reading poems, writing and drafting poems, reading other critical material and immersing myself in other art forms that impact upon my poetry. This is something I need to approach with a certain amount of discipline because without discipline there is no way I would be able to find time to write.

The other side of the coin is what I call the administrative side of writing poetry. I am responsible for promoting and distributing much of my work which means there are always accounts to be maintained, receipts to be filed, publishers to be invoiced, submissions to prepare and track, readings to arrange and grants to apply for. Even this interview is just another one of the things that needs to be done and sitting here typing up my responses when I could be sitting at a cafe have breakfast make it feel like work.

How long do you generally spend writing an individual poem?

Five or six years. The initial composition generally only takes about fifteen minutes (I write short poems) but the polishing and tightening and drafting can take years. One of the reasons I am able to balance a demanding professional career and poetry is the fact that I write predominately short, experimental lyric poems which I can scribble off in a lunch break or in the couple of free hours I get an evening. If I was writing The Iliad I might struggle to find some balance but I’m not.

I think it might have been Ashbery who was lamenting the fact that O’Hara had to sustain himself with his job at MOMA throughout his writing career. However, I don’t think O’Hara’s work is any poorer for his professional life. In fact, it was this life that gave him something to write about.

Is work a preoccupation or theme in your poetry?

Work isn’t really a theme in my poetry, however, politics are and I work in politics. I also find that the language of work informs my poetry. By this I mean the jargon, the turns of phrase, the expressions, that are part and parcel of any work environment. I like to collect this language and play with it in my poems. In one sense I see my poetry as a record of language and speech so obviously the language of work is something to record alongside the language of art, the language of sport, the language of social situations.

What is your attitude towards unpaid publication?

I care more about the journal, the editor and who else is publishing in it than whether or not I get paid. Obviously I prefer to get paid but money doesn’t really dictate where I send my poems. I want to find my readers and my readers are often other poets whose work I admire so it makes sense to publish where they do.

At the moment you’ve got great little magazines like Steamer out of Melbourne that are really fun and really innovative. They don’t pay but that’s something exciting so I want to be a part of that.

What is the smallest amount you’ve ever been paid for the publication of a poem?

Probably $15 but it might have been $20. The most in one go, aside from grants, was probably about $500 which I promptly went out and bought a kayak with.

Describe your poetry writing work environment.

I have a small desk in a small office in my house with a laptop on it. I used to have a bigger desk but I sold it when I moved and I haven’t gotten around to buying a new one. Sometimes I’ll take drafts to the park or to a café but generally I’m in my study at my desk.

What do you think is the (ideal) monetary worth of a single poem?

Poetry doesn’t have an intrinsic financial worth. That’s the beauty of it. It costs very little to produce, very little to distribute and therefore it falls outside the tentacles of economics that can strangle, or at the very least, hinder art.

Ultimately, I think the market is the best mechanism for setting the financial value of any good, service or work of art so what the market pays for a poem is what it is worth. Of course the market can’t determine aesthetic value (if there is such a thing) but it will tell you exactly how much people are prepared to pay for something.

Should I be paid more for poems? I’d like to have a ski chalet in Wyoming and a shack on a beach in the Caribbean and oscillate between the two depending on the season. But if I did get paid that much for writing poems I’m sure it would impact on the way I think about my audience and ultimately impact on the poetry.

Can I stress again that I think one of the strengths of poetry, as an art form, is the fact that the market doesn’t value it highly. It isn’t expensive to produce or distribute therefore it does not need to be constrained by the need to find an audience.

Have you ever worked as an editor? Describe your experience.

I edited Cordite for about six issues back in about 2004 returning for a one-off guest editing slot again last year. It was a fantastic experience. I enjoy reading poetry, I like talking about poetry and I find it rewarding to champion poets whose work I particularly enjoy. I have pretty clear ideas about the poetry I enjoy and the poetry I value and I am keen to promote this. It was fun seeking out new poets to promote as well as boosting Cordite’s profile by soliciting contributions from higher profile poets.

It can be a lot of work and you’ve certainly got to read through a lot of terrible work but it’s great finding a jewel somewhere amongst the flotsam. Then you have to keep track of the submissions, whose is, whose out, etc. which can be quite an administrative burden but you’ve just got to be reasonably disciplined and get it done.

When asked your occupation, do you reply ‘poet’?

Rarely. The label doesn’t sit comfortably with me. I don’t mix with too many poets socially and if people know I write poetry they want to know what it is about and that is a question I always struggle to answer.

When you were a child, what did you want to be when you grew up?

At age five I wanted to be an archaeologist or an anthropologist but I think that was more because of Indiana Jones than anything else. I’ve wanted to be a writer for as long as I can remember and I have been writing poetry since I was about twelve. I remember standing up in a Year 11 English class and saying I wanted to be a poet and the teacher replied by saying that wasn’t a real job.

Liam Ferney’s ‘Millennium Lite Redux’, first published in Cordite 31: Epic (2009), has now been republished as part of the Cordite / Prairie Schooner ‘Work’ feature.

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Q&A with Tom Clark

Since 2006, Tom Clark has been an academic in the School of Communication and the Arts at Victoria University, Melbourne, where he teaches and researches in political rhetoric as a family of performance poetry. Previously he completed a PhD, writing his thesis on irony in Beowulf, which Peter Lang (Bern) published in 2003. He works intermittently as a political speechwriter. He has a prose book on poetry and truthfulness in political speech due out in April 2012. ‘Why be a delegate?’ will be included in an anthology of his political poems, also due for publication in 2012.

Can you describe your typical day at work?

Leave home at 8.00. Catch tram into city. Delete unwanted emails on iphone. Catch train from city to my campus. Delete more unwanted emails on ipad. Read up on all the urgent things before arriving at work. Trip takes 65-75 minutes from door to door. Arrive in office. Try to get writing done, whether that is creative or scholarly, but in fact spend most of the day responding to queries from students and colleagues. Teach a class somewhere in there. Take a half-hour lunch break somewhere in there. Make espresso for favoured visitors on my electric Bialetti. Typically afternoons are taken up with a couple of formal meetings. When they’re over, typically between 5 and 6, pack up and read on my way home. Delete more unwanted emails on ipad.

Do you consider writing poetry to be a form of work?

Yes. Both because I do it for work (i.e. my university encourages me to write) and because I work at it. When the poems are just OK, I would call them workmanlike, or trying hard. When they’re really working, I find more idealistic epithets.

How long do you generally spend writing an individual poem?

Drafting can be quick – maybe as little as thirty minutes for an 8-line lyric – but revision typically takes 10-20 times as long, and spreads out over several years.

Is work a preoccupation or theme in your poetry?

Often it is, especially the politics of the workplace. I love the banality of work language and trade union activism as a vehicle for poetic transcendence.

What is your attitude towards unpaid publication?

I have the luxury of a salary for writing and teaching, so I don’t feel driven to sell it — nor do I want to judge others for whom the money is less discretionary. If poets really want dough, though, they should write for advertising. Plenty of scope for versification there!

What is the smallest amount you’ve ever been paid for the publication of a poem?

$10.00, several times, paid by the University of Sydney Union.

Describe your poetry writing work environment.

Varied. Often I write in an aeroplane, working in the back of the boarding pass, before I type it up at home or in the office. Longer pieces need the dependability of uninterrupted time, but travel is often good for that too. Revision is typically done by iPad on the train to or from work.

What do you think is the (ideal) monetary worth of a single poem?

AU$820.00 per page (standard consultancy rates).

Have you ever worked as an editor? Describe your experience.

I have edited a few publications at the less professional end of the scale. It was great for the discarding skills. Editing gives you a very keen sense of the difference between people who actively read poetry and those who just write it.

When asked your occupation, do you reply ‘poet’?

No. I am an academic, so that’s what I say — but I’m really glad to be in a job that recognises and supports creative work.

When you were a child, what did you want to be when you grew up?

A politician.

Tom Clark’s ‘Why be a delegate?’, first published in Cordite 26: Innocence (2007), has now been republished as part of the Cordite / Prairie Schooner ‘Work’ feature.

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Q&A with Ivy Alvarez

Ivy Alvarez is the author of Mortal (Red Morning Press, 2006). Her poems feature in anthologies, journals and new media in many countries, including Best Australian Poems 2009, and have been translated into Russian, Spanish, Japanese and Korean. In May 2011, she was invited to give readings in Seoul, Korea, as part of Cordite’s Oz-Ko Poetry Tour. A recipient of several awards and prizes, she has received funding towards the writing of her second book of poems from the Australia Council of the Arts and from Literature Wales. Previous writing residencies include MacDowell Colony (USA), Hawthornden Castle (Scotland), Fundación Valparaiso (Spain) and Booranga Writers Centre (Australia).A visiting lecturer in Creative Writing at the University of Chester in 2010, she is the series editor of A Slice of Cherry Pie and We Don’t Stop Here, poetry chapbook anthologies inspired by David Lynch’s cult TV show, Twin Peaks, and his film, Mulholland Drive. She also writes reviews and articles, and has guest-edited for Cordite and qarrtsiluni. Born in the Philippines, Ivy Alvarez grew up in Tasmania, Australia. She acquired British citizenship in 2010, having arrived in Wales in 2004.

Can you describe your typical day at work?

Previously, I have worked stints in retail (bookseller), features writer for a commercial magazine, researcher for a university professor and administrator/grant writer for a dance company. My recent work as a visiting lecturer in creative writing (University of Chester) feels like the closest intersection of my poetry life and the academic life I once thought would be my path. As a freelancer nowadays, work can vary from delivering poetry and writing workshops, to poetry readings all over the UK. In the current climate, this practice is getting harder to continue, so I am again beginning the quest to find other sources of steady income.

Do you consider writing poetry to be a form of work?

Writing is the lens I polish again and again to see the world. When I’m lucky enough, I can trace the line from thought to hand, easily, and the words appear on the page, needing hardly any editing. Most of the time, however, my drafts do require editing, which is the part that might be considered hard work. Though even this has its pleasures.

How long do you generally spend writing an individual poem?

I don’t really time myself when I write a poem. I would guess, if I have all my ideas and triggers set up, I can draft a poem in about half an hour, type it up and finish it (or close enough) in another half hour. When I work on a formal poem, it can take me days. A long poem can take months. Almost finished poems can beckon me to complete them years later.

Is work a preoccupation or theme in your poetry?

I’m between thematic obsessions at the moment, although I have been consistently interested in writing about or around the relationships between people.

What is your attitude towards unpaid publication?

I used to favour paying publications until I realised they were working with honorarium amounts. With print publications, receiving a contributor’s copy as payment is always nice. A journal (print or online) that showcases writing beautifully and thoughtfully is my prime consideration now.

What is the smallest amount you’ve ever been paid for the publication of a poem?

I think it may have been AUD$5, back in the 90s. What would that be worth now, I wonder? I don’t think I even cashed the cheque. It’s probably somewhere among my papers, in storage.

Describe your poetry writing work environment.

I’m most comfortable writing on a bed (or, failing that, a sofa), in a well-lit room, with a window from which to gaze.

What do you think is the (ideal) monetary worth of a single poem?

A poem is worth three meals a day, a bed, a desk and chair, and a roof, for a month — which is a steal, really, since it does not take into account the books read for study and research and absorption, the hours daydreamed (the chores completed) or the conversations gathered in the years previous to the writing of the poem.

Have you ever worked as an editor? Describe your experience.

I have served as editor for my university magazine, reviews editor for Cordite, guest editor for qarrtsiluni and APWN, and series editor for The Private Press (a micro-publisher of poetry).

A good journal issue (or publication) is when everything comes together, it is as error-free as possible and the work selected gets people talking and engaged with the writing. The editor’s work is necessarily invisible. Any recognition for this work usually comes after the job is done, she has moved on and readers can have the incoming editor’s work for comparison.

When asked your occupation, do you reply ‘poet’?

I say ‘writer’ if I want to continue the conversation. The querent will then usually ask, ‘What do you write?’ to which I can respond, ‘I write poetry.’ The thought of calling myself poet makes me squirm. ‘Writer’ feels the most apt whereas ‘poet’ makes me feel like… I don’t know… like I’m trying to rise above my station. For me, it’s an honorific title.

When you were a child, what did you want to be when you grew up?

I wanted to be a movie star. I was very shy, though, and really, I was happiest reading and writing. I just wanted to be near books as much as possible. Not much has changed.

Ivy Alvarez’ ‘Curing the animal’, first published in Cordite 29: Pastoral (2008), has now been republished as part of the Cordite / Prairie Schooner ‘Work’ feature.

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Tara Mokhtari Reviews Jamie King-Holden and Koraly Dimitriadis

Chemistry by Jamie King-Holden
Whitmore Press, 2011

Love and Fuck Poems by Koraly Dimitriadis
Self published, 2011

Jamie King-Holden is the 2010 winner of the Whitmore Press/Poetry Idol Manuscript Prize and this is her first collection of poetry. I am reminded, upon finding this out, of a series of miniature chapbooks published by the Australian Poetry Centre which I reviewed for Cordite a year ago. Whereas those prize-winning new poets were underrepresented by poor editing and production quality, Whitmore Press have done King-Holden’s poems due justice by publishing a tight little collection that boasts charming presentation for a limited edition chapbook.
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An interview with Benito Di Fonzo

Born into an Irish-Italian working class family in Sydney’s inner west, journalist, playwright, poet and performer Benito Di Fonzo has written for, and been profiled by, the best and worst of publications including The Sydney Morning Herald, The Sun Herald, The Australian, CNN, and Bardfly Magazine (where he was editor). Benito has performed his narrative neo-beat poems and spoken word in London, Edinburgh, Sydney, Melbourne, Rome, Adelaide, Perth and Indonesia. As well as writing radio serials and plays for 2SER and 2FBI he has had two plays broadcast live from The Sydney Opera House. He has also performed on ABC 702 & Radio National, 3RRR (Melbourne) and Resonance FM (UK) amongst others. In 2005 Independence Jones Guerrilla Press published Benito’s free-verse novel Her, Leaving, As the Acid Hits to positive reviews. Benito’s 2010 stage-play “The Chronic Ills of Robert Zimmerman, AKA Bob Dylan (A Lie)” was a hit of Adelaide Fringe before several sold-out seasons in Sydney and a litany of glowing reviews, resulting in the show being awarded the 2010 BITE (Best of Independent Theatre) award. It is still touring Australia. Benito’s second Fonzo Journalistic show, “Lenny Bruce: 13 Daze Un-Dug in Sydney” will premiere at Darlinghurst Theatre in November 2012. Benito holds degrees in Literature and Creative Writing from The University of Western Sydney. In 2001 he was awarded the Inner City Life Literary Award by The NSW Writers’ Centre. His favourite colour is irrelevant.

Can you describe your typical day at work?

Waking in the middle of the night I begin what Les Murray famously called ‘The 4am Show’ in which I lay and sleeplessly panic about my career as a writer and where it is and isn’t going and why such-and-such an editor seems to suddenly hate me so. I can’t sleep now so I will read Lao Tzu or Somerset Maugham till dawn, when I will promptly fall asleep.

Rising again I will suffer Capitalist Guilt that I should have been up and writing hours ago so, after ablutions, cold leftovers, and much Bushells Australian Breakfast Tea, it’s to my writerly cockpit where I will ignore the vampires of Stalkbook and warm up by tweeting a quick western haiku or tanka waka as ‘Jack Kerowank’.

Now I work at whatever is my current article, poem, story, or play until lunch. After lunch I may wander the streets somewhat, then read some more, play guitar, or just worry about all those unpaid invoices.

It’s here I may have to suffer at some day job for a few hours. If I’m not working I may have to review a play to for 2SER-FM (where I co-host ‘Stages’ each Saturday morning) or I go busking – playing drums on King Street, Newtown to John Maddox’s dobro bass and Tug Dumbly’s guitar. Untypically this coming January 2012 I may be playing a live guitar score in my Short & Sweet Festival spoof “One Day In The Life of Keef: The Human Riff” at Newtown Theatre.

Eventually old Mr Moon will raise his watery head over the early hours and I will fall in a stupor in my garret next to Eveleigh Railyards, just waiting for my stage-call for the 4am Show, and some Somerset mourning…

Do you consider writing poetry to be a form of work?

Yes and no. I mean, ‘work’ means slaving away in the factory that towered over my street as a kid. Being an artist of any kind is a flukish gift. So it’s work, but it’s not work in that ‘work’ to me is associated with something you don’t want to do, dig?

How long do you generally spend writing an individual poem?

Anywhere from a fifteen minute scribble in a notebook, to weeks going over and over it. There’s no rule – it’s not like baking a cake or manufacturing amphetamines.

Is work a preoccupation or theme in your poetry?

It does come up, particularly in my earlier work. I think I suffered a sense of what I called ‘capitalist guilt’ for a time, it’s like catholic guilt but related to work instead of sex. Basically I felt guilty I wasn’t stuck in the factory at the top of my childhood street like my dad had to be.

What is your attitude towards unpaid publication?

It should be exchanged for paid publication.

What is the smallest amount you’ve ever been paid for the publication of a poem?

I’ve either been paid nothing or paid between $50 and $100. There doesn’t seem to be anything in between. Readings on the other hand can range from $250 to a beer.

Describe your poetry writing work environment.

Usually my flat by Eveleigh railyards (the steam-train shed to be precise.) Although the seed of some of my best poems happened in some pub or party, or at least I think it did, and was jotted down in a notepad.

What do you think is the (ideal) monetary worth of a single poem?

Whatever my rent is that week.

Have you ever worked as an editor? Describe your experience.

I have, and it is humbling to have to look at a poem from a more critical point of view. It’s much like being a reviewer, which I’ve also been. Suddenly you empathise with all those folk you swore at over your mailbox or news-agency.

When asked your occupation, do you reply ‘poet’?

My business card says “Writer Extraordinaire,” whatever that means…

When you were a child, what did you want to be when you grew up?

It was more what I didn’t want to do, i.e. a proper job, like at the factory at the top of the street. Discovering that there were people who actually made a living (of sorts) as artists, writers, and musicians was quite a joyous adolescent epiphany.

Benito Di Fonzo’s ‘What For? (Epic Triad Version)’, first published in Cordite 31: Epic (2009), has now been republished as part of the Cordite / Prairie Schooner ‘Work’ feature.

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An interview with M. F. McAuliffe

M. F. McAuliffe was born and educated in Adelaide and Melbourne, and holds an Honours degree in English and some graduate stuff in photography and anthropology. She has taught technical writing, media analysis and basic TV production to engineering and applied science students, Business English to business students, and Film Study to high school students. Since moving to the U.S. in 1982, she has worked as a political pollster, technical editor and crypto-librarian. She made her US publishing debut in Damon Knight’s Clarion Awards, published fiction and verse in The Adelaide Review, Overland, Australian Short Stories, Cordite, WORK Magazine, and in Tema and Poezija (Zagreb).

Can you describe your typical day at work?

A typical day at work always begins with the 11-mile commute along the Columbia River: canadian geese, wood ducks, bald eagles, red-tailed hawks, crows, cranes, Pacific gulls; low-lying islands with Mohawks of cottonwoods and dogwoods; growing marinas of houseboats; pale current-patterns in the water, water-skiers in summer, feathers of fog rising from oily stillness in autumn and winter. Mt. Hood walks slowly across the horizon.

And then I: let myself in through the security-door, write the daily and weekly work-schedules, unsnarl the printer and the Word docs and the resumes and the term-papers; process new books, de-process the old, make lists of books to order; answer the phone, help download ebooks, lend laptops, process returned laptops; answer the phone, unsnarl the printer, direct people to the programs, sign people up for classes; sign for deliveries of federal tax-forms and store them for the New Year; unsnarl the printer; see everything’s secure, alarm the door on my way out.

The 11-mile commute: home ahead of me, away, warmth, food; the great white triangle of Mt. Hood behind me, an unbelievable snow-cone in a small, ovoid, oblong mirror; ahead of me, beside me, behind me, the long, out flat to both horizons, the trafficless, tempting, pseudo-asphalt of the river.

Do you consider writing poetry to be a form of work?

At the beginning it is a rush & a joy. when the inspiration runs out, or when it falls apart and I have to make a complete thing of it, then it’s work. Painstaking. I don’t want the seams to show, or the several tectonic plates of “first” and “patching up” to be discernibly different in cogency & intensity.

How long do you generally spend writing an individual poem?

It depends. It took me from 1979 till 2003 to write Orpheus because I couldn’t finish it in 1981, and I lost the manuscript for 10 years. I can wait 10 years to fit a 3rd line to the first two. Or I can wake up with a complete poem in my head.

Is work a preoccupation or theme in your poetry?

Sometimes.

What is your attitude towards unpaid publication?

That depends very much on who’s not paying me. Local anthologies of spoken word, financed by a couple of the better-off poets – fine. Croatian magazines devoted to poetry/ photography/ literature – fine; it’s a poor country and the writing there’s so good I’m just happy to be included. If I am publishing something myself, I do it to make money. I make very little, but still feel as though I’ve successfully laid seige to some stronghold as I count the dimes.

What is the smallest amount you’ve ever been paid for the publication of a poem?

I can’t remember. There are so few paying outlets I think the only time I am paid is when an Arts Council funded Australian publication takes something. I sell my own mini-chapbooks for $2 – they usually contain about 7 poems. (Orpheus is $3. It’s long.)

Describe your poetry writing work environment.

Usually my office. (A narrow room downstairs, somewhat under the stairs. I have a very long desk which leaves me free to lay out a short book of photographs, for example, or the Xmas-cards in varying states of completion, or lists, bank-statements, or longer-term projects at the other end. I work at the window end. I’ve set up the room to face east (the blank wall), but the light comes from the window, the north, the river.

Sometimes I write in my head, driving to work. Sometimes in my head, sleeping – I find myself having written long pieces of prose or shaped entire novels in a particular contemporary style. The prose fades on waking. I suspect I’m testing modes, doing asleep what I don’t have time to do when I’m awake. Or perhaps they are things I will never follow up because of some other limitation.

Sometimes I have written things at work, a couple of lines scribbled to be worked on or out, later. During the mid-late ’90s I wrote a lot of very short poems at work & hid them in my pocket. We worked in a big open room, at desks which could be seen & scanned from the supervisor’s office (it really was supervision). So the things I wrote then fitted onto 3″ x 5″ pieces of scratch paper.

Over the last few years I haven’t written much. I will be able to concentrate on writing in 2012, as older projects move to press. I might take the computer & stuff upstairs in the early mornings. My office is getting to be too cold in winter.

What do you think is the (ideal) monetary worth of a single poem?

Depends on the poem. Don Juan made Byron’s fortune, but Byron was a genius. I like the current payment structure of Cordite, for example – the money is enough to make your work feel valued, without being too onerous for the Council. With small or very small, truly independent presses, I think the principle of payment should be the widow’s mite.

Have you ever worked as an editor? Describe your experience.

I have done a lot of editing over the last 10 years. Again, that experience varies. I’ll never forget the day Venus Khoury-Ghata’s Words arrived at the Gobshite Quarterly office, as a mailed fax from Marilyn Hacker. It was a delirious experience – they were so good and so far outside the realm of English poetry; it felt like a life-changing moment.

The next best Gobshite Quarterly experience was getting “Sirens,” a short story by Frederic Raphael that wouldn’t place in England. It’s a great story. I couldn’t believe it’d been good luck with placing it elsewhere’d.

The 3rd experience I will always remember was getting an email from Palestine (long after we’d given up hope), giving us permission to reprint some of Mahmoud Darwish’s poems. (Typesetting the Arabic was an adventure – it was eventually done by one of the partners in a local printing business, who’d studied Arabic and been to Syria for a year as a Fulbright scholar. As we didn’t have the right font at the time we turned the page into a jpg and InDesigned it that way.)

Marilyn Hacker also brought us the French poet Marie Etienne; on a visit to Portland Julienne Eden-Busic chanced to see us mentioned in The Oregonian, and brought us a treasure-trove of new Croatian Slovenian and Bosnian poets – Tomica Bajsic, Barbara Korun, Dubravka Oraic-Tolic, and Ferida Durakovic, as well as prose-writers Edo Popovic and Gordan Nuhanovic; from a copy of Gobshite found in an Algerian café we got Algerian poet Amari Hamadene. & last but not least, Les Murray sent us a batch of pre-publication copies from Poems the Size of Photographs.

In 2007 I co-edited Broken Word: The Alberta Street Anthology Volume Two, which was a very small publication co-financed by two or three people. The open mic at the Alberta Street Pub was uncommonly good; arlo Voorhees, the MC, was that rarest of creatures, a catalyst, as well as a lively and tolerant host. So over the course of 2 years or so the reading just kept getting better; community radio exposure attracted people from southern Washington as well as the Greater Portland area. Volume Two contained at least one poem by each of the regulars, 50 poets in all. Editing that meant taking the best from each person and carefully orchestrating the flow of the whole. Colours and shades of language were very important there.

Broken Word 2 was a very different kind of publication from Gobshite in that everyone who read more than once (& who responded to the call for submissons) had to be represented. BW2 was a showcase and a commemoration; it was an inspiration to local writers; it completely outsold everything in the small-press poetry section at Powell’s that year – partly because it was local, and partly because so much of the work in it was good. The editorial committee was composed of 6 of the people who’d read consistently at the pub, and whose work qualified them to examine & yea or nay others’ work. The photographer on the Committee also discovered he was a good book designer.

The other end of the editing scale – submissions to Gobshite which need, well, editing. If R. V. Branham (the founder & editor of Gobshite Quarterly) is swamped with other work or in two minds about a particular poem, he will hand the matter over to me. If I’m lucky it’ll be a matter of picking one from a bunch – I look for completeness of thought, internal consistency of tone and mood in the poem itself, and whether I feel as though I’ve felt or seen something new, something I didn’t know, or hadn’t thought of before, by the time I’ve finished reading. I remember once I suggested that the writer cut one word from the last line of a longish poem. My reason was rhythm, and the fact that it was unnecessary to the meaning and its very lack of necessity pulled the reader out of the poem. He declined, and so did we. But we did publish another of his submissions.

The worst-case scenario, and the one I really dread because it is so fraught with consequent email, occurs when something is submitted and the submitter asks for editing. This almost never ends well; the submitter hates the cuts or the title and storms off in a huff, electonically speaking, having wasted everybody’s time… This happens very rarely, but I doubt we will accept anything on that basis again, simply because it does waste our time… But this is why having extra material on hand and being able to plug a sudden gap is one of the most basic survival techniques an editor must have.

When asked your occupation, do you reply ‘poet’?

No, I never do. I reply “I work at [XXX]” the name of the org that signs my paycheques. Saying “I’m a poet” seems odd to me, because it’s not something people will generally find useful, or even immediately graspable, such as being a plumber or dentist or lawyer or carpenter or nurse or even a policeman, fireman, actor, singer, songwriter. We are the very unacknowledged legislators of very little – though good poetry can still cut through the asphalt of conventional thought, mood, perception, dullness like nothing else, like mental and spiritual lightning. Rock/pop songwriters occupy the spot Byron and Keats used to, shaping the sensibilities of their time. But then, written poetry was an always abstraction from song. Technology has simply let song take its old place back.

When you were a child, what did you want to be when you grew up?

I didn’t know, but I always felt a quick, hot jolt of awe and longing (and the furtive, secret shame of incomprehension) whenever we visited our distant cousins the Dutkiewicz family, who spearheaded the Modernist movement in Australian painting and sculpture. When I lived in Australia I always knew a disproportionately large number of painters.

So I suppose I really wanted to be an artist.

M. F. McAuliffe’s ‘Epic, Untitled’, first published in Cordite 31: Epic (2009), has now been republished as part of the Cordite / Prairie Schooner ‘Work’ feature.

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Q&A with Brendan Ryan

Brendan Ryan grew up on a dairy farm at Panmure in Western Victoria. One of ten children, the themes of farming and family have influenced his poetry for over twenty years. His first chapbook, Mungo Poems was published by Soup publications in 1997. His first collection of poems, Why I Am Not a Farmer, was published as part of the New Poets’ series by Five Islands Press in 2000. A Paddock in his Head was published by Five Islands Press in 2007 and A Tight Circle was published by Whitmore Press in 2008. His latest collection of poems is Travelling through the Family, which will be published by Hunter Publishers in 2012. He has had poems and essays published in newspapers and journals such as The Age, Australian Book Review, Meanjin and Heat. He has had poems published in the Best Australian Poetry series (Black Inc.) and The Best Australian Poems series (U.Q.P). He has been awarded three Australia Council grants and in 2008 was awarded a Varuna Longlines residency. A Paddock in his Head was shortlisted for the 2008 ACT Poetry Prize. He teaches English at a secondary college in Geelong and lives in Geelong.

Can you describe your typical day at work?

It is a ten-minute drive to work through a leafy suburb, which also takes me over a single lane bridge where drivers have to wait for each other before they can pass over the bridge. A great exercise in democracy in the early hours of each day. Once at work, I walk up to the school library, collect my copy of The Age newspaper, glance at the headlines and front-page articles and make my way to my staffroom. I am lucky to have a desk that overlooks a lawn and small garden of Clonard College where I teach English and Religion in the lower years of secondary school.

Once I have worked out that I have the lessons of the day planned, photocopying is done, school emails have been checked, chatted with other teachers who sit nearby, it is off to the classroom. What happens in the classroom varies from week to week, but a lot of the teaching involves explaining different ways of writing, be they essay writing, poetry, reflective writing, short story writing of 100 words or 600 words. There is also a lot of helping students within the class, walking around to their tables to offer help, having a word to the students who may be distracted or want to muck around. We have two 50-minute lessons, which start at 8.50 and continue until morning recess at 10.35. Period 3 begins at 11.00 and period four ends at 12.40 when it is lunchtime. Twice a week I do a yard duty for a ten-minute interval. The afternoon periods begin at 1.35 and the teaching day ends at 3.15.

At the end of each day I decide what work needs to be taken home and what can stay until the next day. I usually have to pick up my children from their primary school straight after I finish, so I don’t have a lot of time to hang around after school. I mark essays and other school work each weekend and sometimes twice a week. But the marking varies…. Throughout the day I will have many short informal meetings or chats with teachers and usually correspond with parent enquiries as well.

Do you consider writing poetry to be a form of work?

Well it is, in the sense that it is something that I return to as often as I can. Discipline is needed to get back to the desk as much as I can. It can’t be quantified in terms of hours put in and payment for those hours, so in that sense I guess that it is a hobby. I prefer passion or obsession, or nagging urge that makes me want to write poems. Also, editing a poem is like work, skills that I have picked up over the years.

How long do you generally spend writing an individual poem?

This varies of course. As a general rule, a poem may take up to a month to be written. This includes the time after first draft that I leave it sit for a few days, then weeks, tinker with it, sometimes make big changes. The initial drafts are generally done over one or two days. I always write the first drafts in pen, this may be three or four versions before I put it on the computer. I have to be happy with it before I put it on the computer where I play around with the layout and spacing etc. But may of these decisions have been made in the first drafts. I often have ideas or lines come to me when I am driving, in the shower etc, and so I will think about the poem before I write it. Sometimes poems are inspired by other events or poems and the poem that I intend to write is more or less planned in my head in one form. I just have to get it down quickly before it disappears.

Is work a preoccupation or theme in your poetry?

It isn’t intentionally, although I wouldn’t mind if it became one. I think work doesn’t get written about enough in Australian poetry. It takes up such a large part of our lives and time, it is amazing that we don’t read poems about a variety of jobs, be they bricklayers, teachers, nurses etc. This issue of work poems does relate to the jobs that poets have done of course and that the people who take time out to write poetry may not be in the thick of a job that demands all their time. I have written a few poems about work indirectly and may do more so in the future.

What is your attitude towards unpaid publication?

Naturally, we’d all rather be paid for our efforts, however there are instances that I think it is worth doing something if it raises other people’s interest in what I write. I decided long ago that poetry wasn’t going to make me rich.

What is the smallest amount you’ve ever been paid for the publication of a poem?

I think that the smallest amount that I’ve been paid is $10.00 from Famous Reporter, which considering all the work that the editor Ralph Wessman does in bringing out the journal, which has now folded, I don’t complain about. However small the amount, it is still a recognition of the poem that is being published.

Describe your poetry writing work environment.

I moved with my family, this year and I have a room where I write at the back of the house. I also had another room in the previous house where I wrote. In this room, is a big old desk, acquired second hand years ago, two large bookshelves, one stacked with poetry and some biography, the other fiction and non-fiction, biography etc. I look out to trees and the awning which hangs over part of our back yard. I can hear birds, sparrows and hummingbirds, crows. During the day, the sound of cars on a nearby road rises and falls to the rhythms of the day.I am lucky to have this space away from the rest of the family as it is mostly quiet, however, I don’t get back here as often as I would like because of work and family commitments. On my desk are various notebooks, a journal, one or two poetry books and a quote from Thoreau- Live the life you’ve imagined.

What do you think is the (ideal) monetary worth of a single poem?

Well, at a least a grand! I guess that it depends on the length of a poem. I think for publication in a journal, it should be $200.00. There are many poetry prizes around now, and $10,000 does seem to be a bit unreal as far as payment for a single poem. I guess the recipients of prizes like that have to pay tax on it. I think that two or three thousand is enough for a poetry prize. I would like future poetry prizes to have a social justice element to them, where by the winner accepts say $1000.00 for the poem and another thousand goes to helping alleviate poverty in Africa or Asia, or contributes to health programs. When poets enter the competitions they would have to agree to these conditions. This could also give poetry greater recognition.

Have you ever worked as an editor? Describe your experience.

No, not on other people’s poems or for a magazine. Only on my own and I have enjoyed the experience. I have given plenty of advice to other poets who have sent work to me, but that is different, I guess.

When asked your occupation, do you reply ‘poet’?

I used to when I was younger and more full of myself. I have since seen the error of my ways and now I’d be embarrassed by such a moniker. I tell people that I write poetry and that often receives an incredulous smile and various questions. Often other people call me a poet and I have been introduced as a poet, which usually embarrasses me.

When you were a child, what did you want to be when you grew up?

Not a poet, as there wasn’t any real connection to poetry in our family beside John O’Brien’s Around the Boree Log. There weren’t a lot of books in our family. Most people around me were working on farms, in local factories or leaving the country to go to uni and work in the city. For awhile I wanted to be a footballer, then a singer. Once I started working I was happy to be a labourer and earn a wage so i could go out and get drunk. One of the reasons that I moved from the country to the city was to be a dj in a radio station. Well that didn’t work out, but I did pick up something about writing, through copywriting ads for supermarkets that I was practising. Once I went to uni. in Melbourne and became exposed to books more, the direction that I wanted to follow became clearer. In short, I guess I have stumbled along to find my own path. Now I am teaching part time and writing when I can, which is generally good enough.

Brendan Ryan’s ‘Factory Boys’, first published in Cordite 27: Experience (2008), has now been republished as part of the Cordite / Prairie Schooner ‘Work’ feature.

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Work: A Cordite-Prairie Schooner Collaboration

Cordite - Prairie Schooner Work Feature

Cordite is excited to announce a special collaboration with Nebraska-based literary journal, Prairie Schooner. The collaboration, entitled ‘Work’, is the first in what promises to be an exciting ‘Fusion’ series, wherein Prairie Schooner teams up with innovative journals from around the world. ‘Work’ consists of fifteen poems from each journal’s archives, as well as artworks, audio poems and interviews.

Prairie Schooner editor Kwame Dawes’ introduction expounds some more on the Fusion concept:

Fusion is an opportunity to create dialog across geographical spaces and cultures through the sharing of art and writing. It represents an effort to create bridges between the many silos that separate us, and to do so by asking writers to think about the very things that connect us and distinguish us in different parts of the world.

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Cordite editor David Prater reflects upon work in his editorial:

“I got my first paid job while I was still at school, working as a milk delivery boy in the suburb of Wollongong, an industrial city in Australia where I lived with my family in the 1980s …”

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Poets from Cordite whose works are featured in the issue include Tom Clark, Lorin Ford, Derek Motion, Brendan Ryan, Adrian Wiggins, Jennifer Compton, Ivy Alvarez, Barbara De Franceschi, Liam Ferney, Peter Coghill, M. F. McAuliffe, Benito Di Fonzo, Esther Johnson, Geoff Page, Emily Stewart and Margaret Owen Ruckert.

Poets from Prairie Schooner include Hedi Kaddour (translated by Marilyn Hacker), R. F. McEwan, Ander Monson, Linda McCarriston, Toi Derricotte, Marvin Bell, Marcella Pixley, Ted Kooser, Moira Lineham, Sandy Solomon, Jenny Factor, John Engman, Gary Fincke, Dannye Romine Powell, John Canaday, James Cihlar, Nance Van Winckel, Floyd Skloot and Roy Scheele.

Special features include audio poems by Sean M. Whelan & the Interim Lovers, Maxine Beneba Clarke, komninos zervos and Benito Di Fonzo; illustrations by Michelle Ussher and Watie White; and interviews with Derek Motion, Jennifer Compton and Nance Van Winckel.

Over the coming week we’ll also be featuring eight more interviews here on the Cordite site. Then, to round out the collaboration, and in honour of Prairie Schooner‘s prairie roots, we’ll be presenting a special Nebraska tribute, curated by Liner Notes star Sean M. Whelan. More on that soon.

For now, head on over to the Prairie Schooner site to check out the goods, or else do so indirectly by visiting the Cordite mirror page.

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Submissions for Cordite 38: Sydney extended

Cordite 38: Sydney will be guest-edited by Astrid Lorange, and is due online in May 2012. Out of the goodness of our hearts, and due partly to our own confusion about the correct closing date, we’ve decided to extend submissions for the issue for another two weeks.

Submissions will now close at midnight on Tuesday 14 February 2012.

For full details, head on over to our submissions page or, if you’re ready to go, simply submit your work using our nifty online submission form.

We’ve now also updated our

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NO THEME Editorial

The young PhD was applying for a ‘Theory for Practising Writers’ teaching position in a Creative Writing degree.

He had devised a three year course, the first year of readings, lectures, tutorials and essays which though extending as far back antiquity would really take off circa 1848 … with various strands of Western (and even Eastern) thought and literature, culminating in the final lecture of the year, which would be on Eliot’s The Waste Land.

The Waste Land?’ queried one of the interviewers, himself a poet, editor, publisher and teacher, ‘The Waste Land? But that’s a bit way out, isn’t it?’

Yes, this did happen and the question was not asked by some Georgian crackpot from 80 years ago. This is still a spirit-of-thinking that although not completely swamping this country’s poetry unfortunately flourishes. This very true tale follows me around most days, it is an enemy, just around the corner that propels me constantly onto my front foot, as reader, poet, teacher, critic/reviewer and editor.

Australian Poetry still has to suffer this and other kinds of inanity, ranging from daggy subeditorial puns (‘Bad or Verse’) that often headline the few reviews poetry is lucky enough to snare, to confessions from ABC Radio interviewers that they don’t actually read the stuff (it happened recently to Luke Davies on Ramona’s Book Klub) to the occasional wince-making piece of ignorant, opinionated Murdoch broadsheet bile, of which a recent effort entitled Only greatness, not popular appeal, can restore poetry as the nation’s memory will attest. (Pardon me, but doesn’t that title ring more like some weird kind of Chinese Cultural Revolution wall poster?) And beyond all this there is the sheer mustn’t-be-too-way-out mustiness which backs so much of our writing attempts. I ought to know, I had to plough through a huge amount of the stuff to finally arrive at a solid enough short list from which these Cordite poems were chosen.

An editor’s task should be exhilarating of course, and if I hadn’t have thought it possessed this potential I would not have said ‘Yes’ to Cordite when approached. The attendant risks of course are very often those of ego, an editor’s true, but particularly of those you reject. How well I recall when as poetry editor of Meanjin under Judith Brett folk would send accompanying letters to the actual editor beginning Dear Sir … Well, since they didn’t bother to check we couldn’t be expected to publish could we? Mind you since a woman was now editor there were a number of female writers who sent in the kind of verse that assumed that Meanjin was now the flagship of sisterhood, mid 80s style. When one contributor received a note from me suggesting that her work might be shown to better effect as a sonnet I received a furious reply lecturing me as to how the sonnet was a patriarchal verse form, this amusing both the editor and myself.

The first review of the very recent Lehmann and Gray Australian Poetry Since 1788 that I will fully trust will be by someone who has read this volume, every word of it from cover to cover. Something of 1090 pages surely deserves that amount of (let’s call it) devoted work for its assessment. So far there have been on-the-run reviews, a certain amount of interesting publicity (thankfully little verging on mere ‘puff’) and a degree of controversy, particularly through the agency of Peter Minter’s doubtless sincere attack on the particular absence of certain contemporary indigenous poets. Well meaning though this complaint might be it can really only be fully assessed by that critic mentioned above, that one reading the book cover-to-cover. It is my belief that in the end he or she (and let us hope there are a few hes or shes) will have to decide wether this is a volume centred on history or on art (well at least the editors’ vision of art).

I trust to the fact that Lehmann and Grey were as sincere in their judgements as Peter Minter was in his condemnation: they knew the risks involved as editors and ran with them. Some of their absences annoyed me, some inclusions annoyed me, some inclusions I cheered, some exclusions made me extremely delighted. Doubtless it could equally be said that many of the contemporary indigenous poets (and others) were excluded for the same reason that a whole slew of poets that I admire, from Ken Bolton to Peter Skrzynecki via Kenneth McKenzie, Pam Brown, Joanne Burns, Rae Jones, and yes Peter Minter etc etc were excluded: because the editors didn’t regard their work highly enough, that it didn’t engage them, that their poems lacked what on earth it was you were supposed to have.

I know what it’s like on both sides of that divide. Up till circa forty I was excluded from far more ‘grand survey’ anthologies than included, the editors of which (whom of course I forgive) included Robert Kenny, Tom Shapcott, Rodney Hall, Geoffrey Dutton, Vincent Buckley, Les Murray, Geoffrey Lehmann and Robert Grey (in their previous existence) and (though I better check on this) Dame Leonie Kramer! Even later, as a sonneteer I was rejected from an Australian Sonnet Anthology! On the divide’s other side, with my Meanjin stint, with my editing of UQP’s The Best Australian Poetry 2009 and now as guest of this journal I too know what it’s like to give actions to my belief that ‘This certainly passes muster, this probably does, this possibly does and this one certainly does not.’ In the end (and here Cordite’s demand for anonymity of contributors sure assists) it surely must come down to an editor demanding ‘Does this work? Am I engaged?’

Certain poems weren’t merely rejected of course, they were disqualified; and here are a number of criteria which would result in automatic disqualification with first off the use of clichés and clichéd terms. There might be an excuse in using such sarcastically or ironically, in modifying a clichéd phrase or sending it up, but in the batch received I saw no such examples. There are no excuses for using them, clichés are lazy English, and if there’s one thing poetry should never be it’s lazy. Moreover, as Australian writers let us have as little ‘truck’ as possible with certain Americanisms: all those ‘bros’ and all those ‘dudes’, whose use is as regressive as the forelock-tugging towards the British Monarchy still employed by sections of our wider community. Of course ‘mate’ and its somewhat more sinister derivation ‘maaaate’ may be a bit dreary, a bit arch, but at least it is ours. You can’t exactly legislate against lazy English and lazy Australian English, though someone in the position of poetry editor can at least be a de facto law-maker.

Another disqualification involves the ‘centring’ of poems. Plenty of poets take a great deal of alternating pain and delight in laying out their work, in the use of fonts, spacings, the complete typographical gamut. Being something this poet cannot do I thus find myself envious, applauding and above all supportive of these never lazy poets who think so intricately about their work’s shape and design. But when someone just presses a button on a machine and the result is ‘centred’, well no matter how quirky, no matter how pretty, this editor ditches the result.

Poems with any hint of scatology were also ditched. I have a strong aversion to this area in writing and thus relished my editorial chance to pass this prejudice onto the world. The misplaced demotic too captured my ire. For example we have a piece of plainly written English, written perhaps as she might be spoken, though with nothing of the colloquial, the dialect, the creole; and then from out of who knows the writer decides to use ‘gonna’ and ‘wanna’. They might not be serious though in disqualifying I sure am.

Sometimes I really wonder if those purporting to be poets actually read their pieces aloud to themselves during, let alone after composition. Sometimes I even more than wonder if some of those who do read aloud ever listen to themselves, or in doing this imagine someone else doing the reading or listening. All poetry on the page invites recitation (if not exactly ‘performance’) which is where of course we have it so much over prose; though with plenty of the work received you wouldn’t reckon on it. More than once I got the impression of someone going into the bush, a backyard, their study with a lap top (my god, a lap top!) and sitting under a tree, in a pergola, at their desk and tapping a splurge onto a screen about nature or relationships. Well nature, relationships or what have you, there’s far too much tapping splurge onto screens (says he who has always used keyboards as the machine of last resort)! And don’t tell him that we are better off ‘digital’: when a true test of a poem is its being read aloud…like hell we are!

If there is one thing that unites the poems I’ve chosen it is that I believe their authors composed them through the agency of reading aloud. Okay, I’m sure that keyboards played their parts but I cannot imagine ‘the lap top splurge’ being part of their composition. But then as I have indicated I have an aversion to that mode of composition and if this selection I have chosen presents certain of my positive prejudices, so be it. After I had made my choice I realised I had a number of other prejudices bustling their way to the fore. I love poems about people being alive, that’s right alive, and let’s face it in poetry plenty (most?) of the dead are more alive than much of the living. I love poems that go-for-broke re language, syntax, lay-out; I also love poems that relish economy and refinement. Of course I love those poems that I immediately grasp (if you get me laughing for example you may already be over the line); I also love those poems that are very way out (recall ‘way out’?) that are going to annoy those kind of folk I too would want to annoy. Was there a watchword? Risk, risk and risk again (the editor’s as well as the poets’).

Choosing those in particular who engaged, challenged and who could quite possibly annoy me, I thought of those great words of Dmitri Shostakovich to Sophia Gubaidulina sometime in the 1950s: ‘I want you to continue down your mistaken path.’ Is there anything truer a teacher or an editor can say to an emerging poet? And look at whom he was backing: someone who today would be amongst the very greatest living composers and most probably the greatest living female one. Those still recoiling at the ‘way out’ will never appreciate such an attitude.

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What’s possible between us

As another Spring begins, the bird’s
brain cells bloom. New songs.

Fingerprints return after the hand is burnt.
Who knows what we’re capable of?

I part the vertical ocean of clothes
and find you there. Spider,

it is almost terrifying to me – suspended
only by the work of your own body.

Too often, I surface with handfuls of air,
thinking the connecting threads were within.

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Thoughts

What do you think when you kill a man?
Nothing, as crosshairs move to the next target.

Nothing, that night when you’re sunk in your hole,
ears focussed for the prick of noise.

Nothing at week’s end back at base,
head filled with rum, The Stooges and The MC5.

Nothing next month, when your round comes
and one of his mates knocks you over.

No, years later, when you’re kicking the ball
to your son, you think “What if he … ?”

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Things Wong Kar-Wai Taught Me About Love, Part 2

for Kerry

 
Everyone needs a hole in a tree in which to whisper secrets.

                                                  Some of my most erotic experiences have been in my imagination.

Waiting for someone to become available is the ultimate torture.

                                                  Most of your life is spent wanting rather than having.

The future is a train station named Love.

Red is the colour of love.

Nat “King” Cole is the soundtrack of love.

Cigarette smells, in the shape of love, curve towards the light.

27 pears is a banquet.

Love is holding hands in a foggy taxi to a symphony of neon.

The most passionate love doesn’t always end in sex.

                                                  Everything is temporary.

The departure lounge is a rehearsal for when someone leaves you forever.

                                                  A hole in a wall is the imprint of unrequited love.

Love cannot be captured in an aphorism.

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The Goulburn Cricket Club Love Song

The cricketers’ girlfriends lounge beyond the boundary
They are smoothing their summer dresses over their long tanned legs
Lounging with a long glass of beer and lemonade
One smoothes the blonde hair of a batsman waiting his turn

The fast bowler dashes and stamps his way to the wicket
The keeper crouches and squints behind the stumps
The hooked red ball dashes eagerly away for four
The fielders are squinting in the low sun to follow its course

They find it behind the pavilion in the long green grass
The spectators trample the grass down to spy where it’s hid
Finding the ball near the dress of the team captain’s girl
Hid in the trampled green grass near the young vice-captain’s boots

Black southerly storm clouds tumble across the ground
The fielders race to the pavilion and sponge cake and tea
Tumbling in the green bushes the captain’s girl
Races to remove the young vice-captain’s shirt

The young vice-captain lounges between the thighs of the captain’s girl
She smoothes the damp black hair from his flushed red face
They are lounging damp in the warm summer shower
That smoothes the wet white blouse on her quieted breasts.

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The Garbagemen of Rome

Such sprezzatura they have in their orange jumpsuits!
With their well-coiffed hair and agile movement

and gallant asides to the ladies, they might
as well be fencing on the battlements

of the Castel Sant’Angelo, or dancing a quadrille
on the marble floor of a palazzo, as going round

collecting trash. This Wednesday morning,
the driver of a streetsweeper noses down

the cobblestoned street, singing an off-key aria
out the open window. His partner —cornetto

in one hand, a twig broom in the other — jabs
distractedly at trash beneath the tables and chairs

of the sidewalk cafés. They miss a lot,
but together they manage to nudge most

of the wilted lettuce and trampled fliers
and cigarette butts out of the way. Che importa?

What they don’t pick up today will be here waiting
for next week’s bravura performance. Encore! Encore!

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Temperature

if the weather clears
she will take the sea road
walk along cliffs
hang out near rocks
where seals swim with purpose

if the weather clears
she will tie a line
behind the chook shed
hang dirty washing
in the sun

she will smother weeds
walk to a neighbour’s house
slide her heart in her pocket
hide it under a red jacket

if the weather clears
she will smell the last rain
tie her hair in a scarf
catch the last train
leave a letter behind

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Tales Out of School (2): A Gift for Teaching

The Guru, Mister Whatsup, Oblomov, The Sleeping Beaut,
and Madame Lash and the Vampire Bat

are ensconced in the Common Room
when Mrs Ick Deen harrumphs in with the Pickled Dill

and the Human Egg for the Weekly Discipline get-together
that will gouge out ninety minutes of each life-

form locked in here with the Banshee Queen,
but no one’s counting anything but the slabs

of cake that the Sleeping Beaut can put away
before lunch. The business is the Excellence

in Teaching gong: who’ll get the colour-photocopied
sheet with the space (add name) and the Old Firm’s logo.

But each one here is convinced no other has what
the German language in its wisdom calls the Gift.

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Tales Out of School (1): He Says, She Says

‘I’d like to know’, says the girl who intends
to be married in autumn, ‘if heaven is true

and it’s made up of people like us’.
And she got married too. And the boy sitting next to her

says, ‘I don’t reckon there’s any such place. If there is,
it’s geometry, shapes’, while he eyeballs her shape.

‘You won’t get in anyway’, says a girl who’ll be smashed
before midnight tonight,

‘you’ll be standing outside’. ‘What do you mean’,
says the boy, who will soon be on night shift,

and noting each businessman who comes and asks for Room Six.
‘I saw the way he was looking at her’, says the girl

with the big night ahead; ‘I’ve heard boys who strip girls
with their eyes will never see heaven again’.

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Swimming with Sharks

I never met the poet Francis Webb, who lived in my hometown of Semaphore when I was a child, but I later concocted this fiction for
another Webb-gripped poet, Richard Hillman.

 

Frankly i didn’t know if Jim was
telling the truth
or simply weaving a web
laced with lies & deceit
but as i sat there smoking
cigarettes in his Semaphore backyard
he pointed out the Jacaranda tree
where Francis would hang his red Speedos
out to dry
he’d just sling them over that low branch
just above head height
& he talked about how the colour contrasted
wildly with the green
& he described in detail the aqua blue
full-face diving mask he’d wear
& how it was slightly frayed
around the edges & how it left red welts
across his face that lasted for an hour or more
making him look somewhat grotesque
& i drifted with the smoke . . .
& thought of nothing but him

i was jolted when he said that Francis
had the biggest snorkel in Semaphore ––
i laughed aloud & commented
that i thought Francis was definitely gay
& went on to say how he’d smashed
chairs to toothpicks in the past when
challenged on that point
but i was told smartly in return
that Francis loved a challenge
& how they’d dive the Semaphore reef
& harpoon sharks on steamy summer afternoons
& how Francis could swim for miles
with an ease & natural grace that most
sporting men envied

but he told me too of his dark side ––
one incident that quickly came to pass
was how one broiling January afternoon
when too many long-necks had been emptied
& thrown with wild abandon into the overgrown
buffalo grass
that the landlord had appeared looking stern
& began a lecture on moderation & temperance ––
it was all too much for Francis
who waved his harpoon in his direction
& screamed desist you bugger desist
& began to chase him around the backyard
with a stream of other even more foul
& cutting obscenities
& how within the hour two coppers
arrived on a motorbike & sidecar
booting it up the driveway & waving their
truncheons at Francis who by this time was
staggering exhaustedly around the backyard
in his once white ‘y’ fronts & wielding
his own weapon
calling the landlord a cunt repeatedly
(& rather loudly it should be said)
much to the utter disgust of the
woodcutter who lived next door
(who was always thought to have called
the police but who of course ––
on later questioning
would never put his hand up ––
though some did suggest it may have been his wife

it was shortly after this event that the
harpoon was strapped to the last pylon
on the northern side of the Semaphore jetty ––
just below the waterline at low tide
(suffice to say that the charges were
subsequently dropped perhaps due to the
lack of substantial evidence)
but they say too ––
that sometimes when the water clears
& the Semaphore sun is bright
that if you swing out far enough over
the jetty railing
you can see a leather belt with a brass
buckle about a metre below the waterline ––
but as for that harpoon
it is no-where to be seen.

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SUB AQUA

 

/////////////
NOW HEAR THIS
////////////////////////////////////////////
WE ALL LIVE IN A YELLOW SUBMARINE
/////////////////
CERTAIN CREW MEMBERS MOTIVATED BY EXTREMISM AND THE DESIRE FOR PERSONAL GAIN
////////
WOULD RATHER IT WERE GREEN
/////////////////////////////////
LET ME ASSURE YOU
////////
HOWEVER
////
THAT UNTIL SUCH TIME AS A DEMOCRATIC MAJORITY OF SUBMARINERS EXPRESS A DESIRE FOR CHANGE IN A PEACEFUL AND DEMOCRATIC MANNER
////////////////////////
IT WILL REMAIN
/////
A YELLOW
///
SUBMARINE
///////
THAT IS ALL
//

 

///////////////
NOW HEAR THIS
///////
MY FELLOW SUBMARINERS
//////
YOU ARE
///////////////
YOU JUST ARE
////////////
AND THIS IS IT
/////////////////////
ANY SUGGESTION TO THE CONTRARY SHOULD BE REPORTED TO THE DUTY OFFICER
//////////////////////
A WIDE RANGE OF FOOD, BEVERAGES AND ENTERTAINMENT DEVICES IS AVAILABLE IN THE MESS
////////////
THAT IS ALL
///

 

NOW HEAR THIS
////////
GOD IS ON OUR SIDE
///////
TO GIVE THANKS FOR HIS SUPPORT
/////
EVERY SPENT CARTRIDGE YOU DONATE
///
WILL GO TOWARDS THE SMELTING OF A SHINY CHROME CATHDRAL
///////////////////////////////
FOR WHAT WE ARE ABOUT TO CONCEIVE
/////////////
MAY THE LORD MAKE US TRULY BASHFUL AMEN
///
THAT IS ALL
//

 

////
NOW HEAR THIS
/////////
IN THE JUNGLE MY FELLOW SUBMARINERS
/////
THE MIGHTY JUNGLE
/////////
YOU KNOW THE REST
////
THE JUNGLE DWELLERS WILL BE GRATEFUL
//////////
WHEN WE INVADE
////
AND BOMB THIS BEAST INTO OBLIVION WHERE HE OR SHE BELONGS
////////////
THAT IS ALL
///

 

//////
NOW HEAR THIS
///////
KNOCK KNOCK
/////////
WHO’S THERE
/////
WE’LL ASK THE QUESTIONS SON
///////
DOCTOR DOCTOR
///
IS THERE SUCH A THING AS A BRAIN ENEMA?
////////
THAT IS ALL
///

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Shock To The Screen Door

You can hear it banging in the wind, or
when someone delivers something and lets it
‘have its will’. It causes you to jump, inevitably.

“Trouble in your bubble, mate?” is what Dave
says when I look morose. Which might be
a large part of the explanation. Maybe my locutions

affect him equally. In fact we bear each other no ill will.
It is “a letting of the screen door slam” – to quote this translation, into
English from the Japanese, of Rilke –
not Rilke’s Japanese, as Dave would point out,

Rilke wrote in German. But I think you see where I am coming from.
And going? Going? Dave’s poster of Che Guevara
is dog-eared now, and Voyager might whistle to him
for another thousand years.  I expect that I’ll be listening.

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Settlers, Regurgitated

Victoria’s first settlers were whalers as well
as prostitutes. They were hale, they drank
ale. They were whalewrights, sexwrights –
they were Whites. They ate a lot of pasta
too – well before the Italians put in an appearance.
They didn’t call it pasta, they called it boiled
hay. The famous hay-twirlers of that time
have unforch been forgotten, their names deimagined.
By the way, citizens, to give them the retrospective
respect they so often misreceived in their
day, were often waylaid by hayrides heading
to sexpots to prosecute a beached whale for
trespassing. There were lists of such carryons
and possibilities: if you could read and they
could write. The punning laws were the most
like a minefield, to keep in mind. Requirements
and avoidances, speeches and acts: regarding
choir mints, or boy dances, peaches under
the axe. Our most senior writers were born
out of this malaise. You might substitute
scenic and or mayonnaise at this point – but
don’t hurt yourself – and don’t fall – history
isn’t worth it. We had a septic tank once,
but who has them or wants to hear about
them now, when society is so shit-free? How
they produced any progeny escapes me like
a three-footed convict, that is, awkwardly,
that is, confusingly, with so much seafaring
and the unreliability of work. The big stations
where the trains never came. Where they
were forced to invite the black milkman and
the black mailman in in order to enjoy company.
The settlers used to receive a lot of Aboriginal
people back then when wages were more
conceptual (as they’re becoming again). There’s
something about this narrative that doesn’t
make sense! It’s like the old days when the
fruit from the sheep got mixed in with the
sultanas: I think I’ve been talking about New
South Wales half the time – and that’s the
most actionable law in the book.

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Saving 100 Chickens

We argue about whether saving 100 chickens
– their feathers to be patted
by a sentimental lesbian –
will help to save their million brothers and sisters
on the conveyor belt line.

This was after eating two pink lamb cutlets,
and maybe drinking too much wine.

She said it was a significant gesture.

I wondered in the shower this morning
about people who choke up
when their cats and dogs die.

Am I just a hard, heartless person?

We keep going to dinner parties with vegetarians.

As a farm boy, I killed rabbits. I didn’t exactly like it,
but I didn’t mind that much either.

The best part of my family was meals.

At that time, chicken was
occasional Sunday roast best.

I’m too poor to buy free range food.

And I’m greedy, which you are too.

I remember Trixie, our Australian terrier,
and Trigger, our sheep dog, indeterminate breed,
and I loved them.

But when it was time for them to die, they died.

We’ve got a lesbian friend, who keeps her cats in a cage in the backyard,
so they won’t get hurt.

As a country kid, I was close to cemeteries
full of persons I knew the name of.

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