Early
 Morning
 Music


5.03

First
 scribble 
of 
birdsong

scrabbles 
the 
edges
 of 
sleep

it’s 
cold
 I 
hunch 
the 
sheet

higher 
over 
my 
shoulder

you
 sleep 
silent

and
 warm 
beside 
me


5.17

A 
double
 thump 
on 
our 
drive

the 
newspapers


cylinders 
of 
babble 
and 
shout

whisper
 nudge 
and 
lament

huddle
 under 
their 
flimsy 
covers

until
 that 
first 
coffee


5.29

Wide
 awake 
now

the
 good
 news 
the 
all
 clear

is
 like 
your 
warmth
 beside 
me

I
 want 
to 
shout 
it 
to 
the 
heavens

but
 who 
wants 
to 
see 
a 
silver 
haired 
man

barefoot
 and 
in 
a 
dressing 
gown

skipping
 down 
a 
still 
dark
 street

hollering 
his 
hallelujahs?
–

besides
 it’s 
raining


5.36

chip 
chip

chip
 chip 
a 
thin

chirp 
in 
our 
garden

chisels 
the 
darkness

a 
chink 
of
 first 
light 
creeps 
in

some 
insistent 
bird 
poking 
and 
scraping


shut
 up 
you 
idiot 
chiseller

you’ll 
wake 
the 
wattlebird


5.44

Oh 
no! 
here 
it 
comes


its
 first 
tentative 
notes

harmonious
 as 
a 
broken

crank shaft

now 
it 
goes
 hammer 
and
 tongs

whatever 
it 
might 
be
 expressing

splattered 
over 
the 
sunrise

the
 only 
way 
to
 stop 
it

to 
chop 
its 
tree 
down


6.03

I 
can 
sleep 
another 
hour

then
 I’ll 
hear 
you


stir 
turn 
and 
stare 
at 
the 
clock

the 
birds 
have 
gone 
silent

nudged 
out
 by 
a 
ground
 base

of
 traffic 
and 
sunlight
‐

time
 to 
make 
our 
own 
music


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Coffee at the Palace of the Great Hoon

hoon |huːn| Austral./NZ informal; noun: a lout or hooligan, especially a young man who drives
recklessly. the whole family was wiped out because some drunken hoon had to drive his car. ORIGIN
1930s: of unknown origin.

His beard tangled around his shanks as he descended
the rain-wet stairs, and from the garden a macaw called
In a red tongue. There were two of me, I was beside myself
As I helped untangle the Great Hoon’s beard.
‘Shall I speak?’ spake the Great Hoon. ‘Oh, I’m all ears,’
I replied. Spittle everywhere. Jewels here and there
Scattered on the gleaming stone, opals rained
On the glowing marble, and I thought I heard
Between the Parrot’s paragraphs of speech, a distant sea
Murmuring on a granulated strand, and thought I saw
Among the glittering foliage, in the mirror of myself,
The Gaudy Hoon made immeasurably strange.

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The House Went Quiet

a nebula of flowers has self-abased,
its spent petals circle a jam jar,
their genus lost.

i’ve been instructed on the
benefaction of decay—
the merciless cues.

i read birthday letters with
my eyes closed and pack
postcards from Spain into
shoeboxes crypt-tight.

in the kitchen sink a blushing
cork locates north and a stale
paddock as empty as a punch line.

i wrap chipped plates in headlines,
let one break into alien continents,
its own atlas.

i enter a room with a made bed.
the ivory sheets remain an effigy
for buckled limbs and midnight cake.

outside, cars play their games.
the neighbour’s grey dog lets itself be known.
Summer carols on, indistinct.

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Archaeology

1.
In a mythical demountable
we are students of the sword,

cotton-gloved rabbits,
a few aeons late
to taste the blade’s full thrust.

Creeping green curdles bronze,
suckles the edges off. It sleeps

in its labelled, cardboard
coffin – one eye open,
aching to callous palms,
aching for salt and bone.

Bronze molecules grit
their teeth at tender reverence:
millennia of students
who stroke away
the knife’s last trace of blood.

2.
I shaved my legs before I came over.

You noticed, and said
they were whitewashed pillars,
artful ruins beneath the lights.

Maybe you should buy dimmer bulbs;
I wouldn’t want to you to surmise
too much. I’m here to forget.

You shine your torch
and chisel and brush, and
chalk an X over certain parts.

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Lesson

‘Tell me about despair, yours, and I will tell you mine.’
‘Wild Geese’, Mary Oliver

Over the empty distance between continents
we transmit facsimiles of affection. Your daughter,
the elder, has learnt to count. She can list the things
I have sent her: dresses, toy cats, a tent, picture books

about Australia. The younger has no words yet, but you tell me
she sometimes points to a photograph of Rob and myself.
I have seen her exactly twice. I do not yet know her smell,
the stretch and tangle of her limbs, her shifting weight in my arms.

My grief is also anger at death; at my inability to create,
sustain and free. Meanwhile, your girls grow: now they stand,
now they walk and talk. One day when we were alone I taught her
a new word: silver. She tried it on her tongue, the word taking shape.

Later, when we passed the sculpture, silver, of her own volition.
We could not now unlearn what we had carelessly, lovingly been taught.

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Hunter-gatherers

for Amber Beilharz

We wrestle bone-shapes from sand
too quick to crumble. The landscape heaves
and trembles at your touch. Air bruising from the
wet brush of our words.

I pry molluscs from shallow rock pools
and you liberate them
from their calcium-bodies with the lip of your knife.
Their soft underskin reminds me of kidneys:
innocent and eel-ugly.

Your red bucket with its chipped paint
becomes almost too heavy to hold.
The sun folds itself behind the sea and we make
our way home like old philosophers driving in the dark.

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Palm—Reading

After Louise Cotton’s Palmistry and Its Practical Uses

My reason curls around—possibility—the practice
of cheirosophy—the prediction of character as demarcated by the hand—

each line & mark—sparks a meaning that deepens
as the reader traces the heart line towards—Jupiter’s etching.

There is a game I used to play—my pale hands
clasped in fists—held heavy by my thighs—see if you can meddle them apart—

I’m masking a gleaming wonder—light bleeding between
the spaces of my spindly fingers—breaths dampen as the knuckles

whiten & the fingertips tingle—numb.

I am going to play this game again—rereading
myself against the yellowed pages of my Mother’s palmistry book—my hands

spread wide—exposing the left palm—moist with memories—
a long Apollo finger denotes an appreciation of beauty & a tendency to bend

the truth. My hands are always on the edge—
of conversations—their hushed syllables morph into snarls—hanging for a cliff

to grip—fortunes aside—the lines of a hand
reveal traces of a more cutting explanation—when Death knocks—a person

covers their thumbs—inside the fingers & palm.

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Linen Closet

The two men snarl across the sheets, a Babel tangle.
He runs his tongue along the weird word of his body.
He wraps his skin in moans behind a stack of towels,
forgets his name, digs down to where delight is buried.

Later, he’ll bring the borax, brillo, bleach. He’ll scrub
the sense back into language. Him and her. And it—
inanimate. No sweat, no stains. He’ll stick the bubbles
back in his mouth. The monogram will speak the truth.

What of his lover? Steamed away. And who can prove
his limbs were more than rumors, his whispers more more than vapor?
A magic trick: you wrap him in a pillowcase
and tap your wand. Abracadabra rabbit rapture.

Midnight. He cleans his mouth with whisky. He can’t sleep.
He takes another shower. The house is full of soap.

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Suggestions for Lady Macbeth

Try vinegar. Our grandmothers trusted
its knack for stripping back
organic matter. Try bicarbonate of soda,
try lemon, try tepid water spiked
with alka seltzer. Work before the fizz
dissipates. No success? If the affected area
resembles a spilt cabernet, dunk it whole
in semillon – those most alike know best
how to dissolve one another. Still no luck? Go
to the cupboard under the sink, try sugar soap,
hydrogen peroxide, anything with a caution,
an exclamation mark, crossbones in a diamond.
Should any telltale trace remain, light a flame
under the hotplate. When the smoke
begins to rise, stretch your fingers out
like a concert pianist – then come, come,
come, come, come
– give me your hand.

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Biography of Elvis

(after Mark Leidner)

They say Elvis could shoot a hoop from twelve metres out.
They say it was because he was missing a tiny bone
in each of his wrists.
They say that when he sweated the inside of his clothes
became gilded, and if they happened to already be gilded, became
like rainbows or supernovae.
They say that Elvis had a way with birds.
They say that this explains the mob of ornithologists that tried
to kill him in Georgia.
They say that once, after observing the flight of a group of grey
pigeons, Elvis predicted the rise and fall of the Spice Girls.
They say that if you listen to Blue Suede Shoes backwards, that’s
what it says.
They say that when Elvis was a child he often saw the ghost of a dog
that had been shot in the head.
They say that when he was older he drank dom peringon just to
forget it.
They say that he once lived in Alaska, in a spare log cabin with a
potbelly stove, and watched movies about pilgrims on
the television sets which he collected to people his
home with presidents and game show hosts.
They say that he once visited Sydney, Australia, but I’m not sure
I believe that one.
They say that Elvis never told a lie.
They say that he married for love.
They say that when his heart broke for the first time he created a dance move
so sad that it would break all other hearts forever, but that it made
him so afraid that he died without ever showing it to anyone.
They say that Elvis was a born a Leo, but that in end
it didn’t matter.
They say that if he had been born an insect he
would have made a great bumble bee.
They say that if Elvis had been born a fruit-bearing tree
he would have been a Santa Rosa plum.
They say that if Elvis had never been born at all, Michael Jackson
would have been forced to invent him out of plasticine
and chux wipes and to breathe the breath of life
into his puny open mouth.
All in all, they say that Elvis was sometimes a very sad man.
They say that after Michael Jackson brought him to life
Elvis cried and cried and cried.
They say that to this day, he has not moved in a very
long time.
They say he had a twin brother who died at birth
in a shack in Mississippi, about that one
the biographers tend to agree.
They say that whenever he checked out of a hotel
he would write the cleaners of that hotel a heartfelt
message on the special hotel stationary and sign it
with a flourish of the special hotel pen, which afterwards
he would sometimes, but always absentmindedly,
put in his pocket.

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Meridian

Catalogue everything in the garden
by outlook and trope. Both daylight and
shoulders can be broad

remember, but are leaves defined by veins
or diameter? How many stones have been
unturned? And what things are not, apart from
holes and shade?

If my eye connects points in space
we know it’s the vector that defines
where we are
and where to from here.

Walk the garden again, it says. Think your way
toward the moment. Beneath the grass:
a dynamic play of boundary and shape.

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Cantone 5a. ‘Core’

music book
for the study
of voice, piano
& choral word chor
a Dickinson Family
Library copy.
EDR 469. copy mss
Houghton Library.
Harvard University
(Cambridge, MS). —

Pianoforte; Renaissance
revival square piano;
floral and scroll carved
legs and apron. Hallet,
dooms Davis & Co., Boston, as it
redeems
Massachusetts; c.1845.
Brazilian rosewood,
Brazilian rosewood
veneer, spruce, ivory,
iron; height 93.9 cm.,
width 207.0 cm.,
depth 99.0 cm.

E. Dickinson
received this
piano from her
father in 1845,
when she was
fourteen.

Piano stool; pedestal-
based with hexagonal
seat upholstered in
plush; hexagonal
pedestal flares to ring
and base with three ball
and ring feet; screw
mechanism for raising
and lowering seat.

unknown

American
maker;
circa 1845.

Brazilian rosewood,
Brazilian rosewood
veneer, upholstery;
height 49.5 cm.,
diameter 35.5 cm.

This stool most
likely was acquir-
ed by Ed. Dickinson
when he purchas-
ed the pianoforte
for his daughter
Emily in 1845.

a bottle of otto
of rose to go
with it, a sheet
of music, a china
mug with Forget
me not upon it
from S. S.,—
Herself and not her
music was what we
seemed to love

One of the make sweet
mortal musics music.
Jupiter denies Pussy
I stop the birds to listen. goes
These behaviours down
of the year hurt there
almost like music, too,
shifting when
it ease us most.

these core
materials
this mooSic

H. Vendler: ‘The
FAScinat-ing
CHILL that
MUsic LEAVES.’
‘The FAScinAting Anton
CHILL that Rubinstein
MUsic LEAVES.’ eared h

but not to
our Creator —
earthly estrangement
worlds Core. —

Chorus: My raft is by the shoreshe's
shoreshe’s
how? read s

light and free

timid &
tumultuous
germ soul

cRealt or I
and now am
I have very
a pia happy
issi played
m o & sang

him hymn Father Father psalm

I want a Piano
I want all together.
I prefer Rosewood
3 pedals—and a
stool. Stun with
Bolts of melODE!
study time in
lyric (choral) time

could our we might
thoughts be in fact shatter
pitched as time with
the lyric’s, the deter
mined voice of our
musings

To Susan Gilbert, 1853:
‘Dear Susie – I send
you a little air – The
‘Music of the Spheres’

The ear
is the
last face.

E. Dickinson
included in
this lettre
a sketch
ascending
musical
notations (scales)
and puffs of
ascending clouds.

This then is a book.
And there are more
of them. Why is
any other book needed?
and the open leaf
of the book makes
the tears come

We hear
after we see,
which to tell
you first is still
my destiny.

open me carefully

Put up my lute!
Lines lyres
sole line

y M sic

Notes to Cantone 5a.

  1. The Dickinson Cantone. Sharon Cameron, in the remarkable book Lyric Time: Dickinson and the Limits of Genre (1979) writes that the contradiction of lyric speech arises from a new reality emergent in distinct as well as collective (harmonised) voices: ‘At the center of the contradiction rises the lyric’s choral voice, however disguised under the cloak of a customary first-person speaker’ (207).
  2. Private lyric (accomp. lyre) in contrast to public choral odes (kithara), but both may be deployed as lyric, broadly defined. Dickinson as a choral poet, a social poet in recluse. No ‘pure’ poem.
  3. Dickinson’s piano. Cantone takes interest in a bound volume of Dickinson’s miscellaneous sheet music. Books: Carolyn Lindley Cooley, The Music of Emily Dickinson’s Poems and Letters: A Study of Imagery and Form (2003). Notation letter to S. Gilbert featured on the 1990 cover of Judy Jo Small’s Positive as Sound: Emily Dickinson’s Rhyme. 3 registers.
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Review Short: Beyond the Ohlala Mountains: Alan Brunton, Poems 1968-2002

Beyond the Ohlala Mountains

Beyond the Ohlala Mountains: Alan Brunton, Poems 1968 – 2002
edited by Martin Edmond and Michele Leggott
Titus Books, 2014

The mask on the cover of ‘Beyond the Ohlala Mountains’ suggests that there’ll be some odd theatrics inside the book. It’s a plain papier-mâché mask of a slightly jowly head with a bulbous nose and a pair of puckered, pouting, full red lips. What does it express – is it a superior sneer? Is it bourgeois disdain? Is it about to say ‘oh là là’? The mask was made by Sally Rodwell, the now-deceased partner of the New Zealand poet collected here, Alan Brunton. It was made for a theatre work called Cabaret of the Unlikely that was performed three years after Brunton had died at 55, in 2002.

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Review Short: Valerie Volk’s Passion Play: The Oberammergau Tales

Passion Play: The Oberammergau Tales

Passion Play: The Oberammergau Tales by Valerie Volk
Wakefield Press, 2013

What are their stories?
what compulsions bring them here,
to this small village in the valley
beneath its towering mountains? (21)

Invoking Chaucer’s Canterbury Tales, in structure and with a ‘motley crew’ of pilgrims, Volk’s Passion Play: The Oberammergau Tales assembles a cross-section of modern society cloaked in secrecy and scepticism. Where Chaucer’s travellers are drawn together by a story-telling competition, Volk’s pilgrims are united by a four-day bus tour to the German town of Oberammergau for the ritual of the Passion Play. Continue reading

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Notes from Mandalay, Burma

Jennifer Mackenzie visited Mandalay, the second largest city in Burma, and its last royal capital, to attend the second Irrawaddy Literary Festival, where she was a featured poet.

Thursday 13 February 2014

Stepped out at Mandalay airport, a good 40 minutes’ drive to Mandalay.

Bare dry landscape with the odd splash of colour from planted flowerbeds.

Shared the bus ride into town with Jung Chang, author of Wild Swans, Sudah Shah (The King in Exile), Peter Popham (The Lady and the Peacock) and Dr John Casey. Casey is from the renowned mentor of Pascal Khoo-Thwee, author of the exquisite From the Land of Green Ghosts. As we motored past the road posts, John said here they measure not miles or kilometres but FURLONGS! He said he’d once been directed to a local post office as being ‘two furlongs away’. A large friendly town dominated by the moat-encircled Mandalay Palace grounds and Mandalay Hill awaited us.

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Sally Evans Reviews David Prater

Leaves of Glass

Leaves of Glass by David Prater
Puncher & Wattmann, 2013

David Prater’s latest collection Leaves of Glass is based on three years’ correspondence in the late nineteenth century between young Australian poet Bernard O’Dowd and the ageing master Walt Whitman. The epistolary material between these two men, a collection of twenty or so letters currently archived at the State Library of Victoria, forms the skeleton for this collection. Prater deftly plays with these two personae, offering a kaleidoscopic vision of their relationship alongside a number of poems that experiment with the ambiguities of written language and the shifting levels of intimacy revealed by the O’Dowd–Whitman letters. Continue reading

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Feature Poem with Judith Beveridge: October

What strikes me as most compelling about Nadia Bailey’s poem ‘October’, is the way in which she portrays the horror of the October bushfires in the NSW Blue Mountains by telling it ‘slant’. The poem is redolent with suggestion and resonance, all achieved through her judicious word and image selection. Over the centuries, the moon has appeared countless times in poems, but Nadia Bailey’s portrayal of it seems fresh and unique. The phrase ‘A harlot moon’ immediately sets the tone of the poem and diffuses any clichéd notions. It alerts the reader that this is no ordinary night and the moon becomes a portent of loss, and an indicator that strange things are afoot. The red moon, the yowling cat, the clouds of ash ‘occulting the moon’ all suggest black magic, picked up beautifully in Miles to go// and no rapture in sight — the reference to Frost’s, ‘Miles to go before I sleep’ is a charming touch in the poem. The cat’s synesthetic ‘dull scream/ swaying like a thurible’ adds much to the poem, cleverly suggesting smoke, ritual and the inversion of normality.

The poem is dramatic, but not melodramatic; the poem’s brevity and intensity are a direct result of the sonnet form. The enjambment creates a sense of urgency, the running lines mimetic of fire. I also like the inversion of scale. The city with its ‘seashell resonance’ seems an ineffectual whisper against the cat’s ‘long yowl’, and the moon, ‘shrugged from the shoulder of Orion’ gains mythic proportions. Yet by the end of the poem, we know it is the fire which is the genesis of all these strange happenings. The ending phrase, ‘ash clouds occulting the moon’ delivers enormous emotional and symbolic power. All in all, a finely crafted and rewarding poem. – JB

October


A harlot moon: the fires
burning in the west turn the light

bloody before night takes its lease
of the sky. A red moon, shrugged

from the shoulder of Orion, rises
to the seashell resonance of the city and

the night is thick with dust and sweet-mouthed
promises, baby, it will be over soon.

A long yowl cuts the heat, incoherent or
spoken in tongues – a cat, fighting

for its piece of the world, dull scream
swaying like a thurible. Miles to go

and no rapture in sight, just the slow
ash clouds occulting the moon.
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Review Short: Jill Jones’s The Beautiful Anxiety

The Beautiful Anxiety

The Beautiful Anxiety by Jill Jones
Puncher & Wattmann, 2013

Frank O’Hara has a poem unambiguously and humorously titled ‘You Are Gorgeous and I’m Coming’. As pastiche or homage – even incidentally – the first two poems from the six-part sequence that opens Jill Jones’s stunning new collection The Beautiful Anxiety are titled: ‘1. Hold On’, and ‘2. I’m Coming’ (‘My Ruined Lyrics’). The present continuous tense of the verb ‘to come’ is thematically apt everywhere in this collection. Not only are poems throughout The Beautiful Anxiety sensual and frequented by moments of desire or quiet ecstasy, they are constantly ‘coming’ in the sense that they are arriving.

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Review Short: Tony Lintermans’s Weather Walks In

Weather Walks In

Weather Walks In by Tony Lintermans
Hybrid Publishers, 2013

I think of plainsong when I read Lintermans’s poems, of cadences unadorned by instrumentation but satisfying in their sound and rhythm. They are by no means Gregorian chants, but they still offer the calmness and sonority of such songs. This peacefulness begins with the physical appearance of the book. A yellow cover with blue type: the typeface like a manual typewriter. Apostrophes are rain drops. It’s a simple but effective design. Inside, the poems are laid out equally as simply and effectively. Continue reading

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Ella O’Keefe Reviews Claire Gaskin

Paperweight

Paperweight by Claire Gaskin
Hunter Publishers, 2014

In Paperweight, her third full-length collection, Claire Gaskin shows her talent for observing fluctuations in the state of things – personal, political and environmental. Within this, she does not turn from the darker corners of the human psyche. ‘Just do the best you can’ opens with a frank acknowledgement of mortality: ‘your death keeps growing/or your life keeps contracting’. Continue reading

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Review Short: Rose Lucas’s Even in the Dark

Even in the Dark

Even in the Dark by Rose Lucas
UWA Publishing, 2013

Rose Lucas is a name often found in anthologies, awards and shortlists, so it is no misnomer to call this first collection of poems long-awaited. Time calibrates the scale in Even In The Dark, which span detail in lives from pre-conception and birth to the discovery of a cremated woman’s body 40,000 years in the earth.

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Review Short: Vanessa Page’s Confessional Box

Confessional Box

Confessional Box by Vanessa Page
Walleah Press, 2013

Australian poet Vanessa Page’s latest collection, Confessional Box, is equal parts personal and critical, examining emotional relationships with a terse, engaging style. As the title suggests, there is a strongly self-aware element to Confessional Box. The poems are relatively open, encompassing a range of points of view and personas, but these are not wholly simple reflections of human relationships. Rather, Page presents a series of evolving sections, embellishing on memories and balancing broader criticisms against more personally orientated notions of access and invitation.

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When they Come for You: Poetry that Resists

‘This machine surrounds hatred and forces it to surrender’ were the words inscribed on the banjo of American folk legend and activist Pete Seeger, who died at 94 in late January 2014. Reading the tributes to Seeger, I was struck by a recurrent theme: his moral courage, which he lived out unrelentingly across a lifetime. Commenting on the ‘not common behaviours’ which made his life exemplary, a New Yorker post by biographer Alec Wilkinson wrote of ‘his insistence on his right to entertain his own conscience’.

That ‘insistence’ began early; Seeger preferring to face jail rather than invoke the Fifth Amendment defense when called to testify before the House Un-American Activities Committee in 1955, and refusing to name personal and political associations. He avoided jail only on appeal in 1962. In October 2011 he was among the leaders of the ‘Occupy Wall Street’ march.

The tributes also led me to think of the ways in which other high-profile figures in popular music – Bob Marley and Bob Dylan – have in the past century harnessed, insisting on their same right, the active, lyrical power of poetic language to express moral and political dissent.

This is one of the reasons for the diminished audience for poetry in the 21st century; its audience, lean as it has often been, has been further subsumed by other arts. Of course, at the same time, the meld of lyric and instrument harks to the days of the lyre, the bard and troubadour, lyric’s origins and tradition.

Yet there is an essence in poetry, where a poem can be a pure or unique instance of language (to use Paul Celan’s thinking), giving it the capability to be a stand-alone language of resistance. It has been often, in the works of accomplished poets, a language of essence, able to name what is essential to the fully lived human experience, and what depraves it.

There are abundant examples. Celan himself – in the words of translator Katherine Washburn, after being earlier a ‘pure poet of the intoxicating line’, and in the steep of the Surrealists – became ‘heir and hostage to the most lacerating of human memories.’ As a Romanian-born Jew, Celan worked in a forced labour camp for 18 months from 1942-1944. Both his parents died in Nazi camps. Just one excerpt here, from his 1952 book, Poppy and Memory:

Black milk of daybreak we drink you at night
we drink you at noon death is a master from Germany
we drink you at sundown and in the morning we drink and we drink you
death is a master from Germany his eyes are blue
(trans. Michael Hamburger)

And another, from the Palestinian poet Mahmoud Darwish, from ‘Victim No. 48’:

He was lying dead on a stone.
They found in his chest the moon and a rose lantern.
They found in his pockets a few coins,
A box of matches and a travel permit.
            He had tattoos on his arms.

His mother kissed him
and cried for a year.
Boxthorn tangled in his eyes.
	And it was dark…

(trans. Abdullah al-Udhari)

Both poets wrote other poems with dissenting force rising from more opaque and abstracted language. This is a cardinal point: the poetic force is not reliant on a singular poetic or only poetry that has an immediacy or transparency of meaning. It can be present in all kinds of poetry, including those whose language is complex, or difficult to access and decode. In fact, a capacity for ambiguity and subtlety – and an interrogation of the ability to speak at all – might be exactly what is required in such a poem.

This force is pressured by the complexities of linguistic play; pressured by the porous intricacies between poet, poetic voice and subject; and between the poem and the reader. Where it is calculable about political dissent, it can be pressured by multiple, insidious forces which need to be traced. A lucid and intelligent essay on this subject, ‘Poems from Guantanamo: Testimonal Literature and The Politics of Genre’, by Nina Philadelphoff-Puren, is part of the selection by editors Ann Vickery and John Hawke in their 2014 Poetry and the Trace (Puncher & Wattmann). It is worth reading.

The audience for poetry of moral witnessing has not always been, as it is usually today, small. During many socially traumatised times in history, in fact, the ability of poetry to express human conscience has seen it embraced as significant to a massed community.

The poets of these territories and events have also been embraced as public figures whose poetry and project is important to their community of origin: Yannis Ritsos, Pablo Neruda, Anna Akhmatova, Federico Lorca, Nazim Hizmet, Darwish and Miroslav Holub are 20th-century examples. Poets such as W.H. Auden (in poems which include ‘Epitaph on a Tyrant’ and ‘Refugee Blues’) or Wislawa Szymborska (‘Reality Demands’, ‘The End and the Beginning’) exemplify the duty and capacity of a poet to respond to their world, as human community, at large.

Also important about these poets’ contributions is their works’ reinforcement of humanitarian values – their insistence on nobler attributes against a certain era’s atrocities is distilled for the record. The poems are not only for their times. In these cases, the poet is not just a poet, but also an auditor of communal memory. The hook of poetry into the greater communal, in times where a society is embattled and pervaded by the injustices, remains alive.

The communal uptake in recent years of a traditional folk-couplet form, the landay, by Pashtun women in Afghanistan, demonstrates this. An extensive 2013 article in Poetry Magazine relays the story behind the contemporary adoption of this short, oral poetic form –its only rule is syllabic count, a first line of nine, 13 for the second – among Pashtun women living in Taliban strongholds in Afghanistan.

The author, New York poet and Guggenheim Fellow Eliza Grizwold, in her research collected examples of these modern landays on trips beginning in 2012 and interviewed their disseminators. These women create new landays or re-write existing ones, and go on to share them, at the highest personal risk.
Translated by Grizwold, with the assistance of Pashtun speakers and translators, some examples:

You sold me to an old man, father.
May God destroy your home, I was your daughter.
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I dream I am the president.
When I awake, I am the beggar of the world.
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The drones have come to the Afghan sky.
The mouths of our rockets will answer in reply.
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Libby Hart Reviews Kate Middleton

Ephemeral Waters

Ephemeral waters by Kate Middleton
Giramondo Publishing, 2013

For her second poetry collection Ephemeral waters, award-winning poet Kate Middleton followed the course of the Colorado River. The Colorado’s 2,330km journey begins in Rocky Mountain National Park. That journey should end at the Gulf of California but, as Middleton explains, ‘the river has so many hands dipping into it that it no longer reaches the sea’ (‘Reflection, after’).

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