untitled

home made vegan snickers
nails open caught napping
twice & the problem is?

brought anne carson & tim cresswell
back from london wasn’t harassed
in security the witch is dead as

they sat quietly writing in my backpack
but the curse lives no unaccompanied
adults or children turkish christmas

buffet in a joint run by kurds & besides
the point is on vacation in the vatican
he sacrifices his shoes for the green

light the moon settles on your left shoulder
a minute later he walks in the sunset barefoot
& smiling mind properly blown

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WILD TYPE

toward weather shifts
this ligature

flowers harden into radical act
eastern salve escorts to black

choice rinse tertial arrangement
in rebellion nominally

spills (dawn) across
to stoke, its very cloth figures

the hemisphere pulls close
the coast in declension




the bird who ekes it out, school air, tonight oar-thick, chiggers lost through grid, the green cools down, everything visual can still happen, after Kathleen's bright papers start, pleat to peruse


macadam wholesale, durable kiss, the moil helms the dreamer, mammal- urgent you for scallop song, in all whittled inflammation around vegetal interview with animals always taking the brunt
enough mineral fact, garden into a season, the illustration amasses lettuce, choir little electrical smear over apple harvest patient as hip shot through with gold alights particular declension: disaster supports the body (Brian) so sufficient difference is succulent, spondee


the body its interstice a macadam illness narrows light into root sheds its particular tenet a characteristic : recur contingencies in ink


summer tuned machine of photograph pursues sun an array of thought into view a copse discontinuous branches of efts assist radiance sermon scraps grid of light late the hymn the rosaried weather


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Sonnet6

“I walked on the banks of the tincan banana dock and sat down under the huge shade of a Southern Pacific locomotive to look at the sunset over the box house hills and cry.”


When daddy slaps the water, baby laughs. Stocks split the gods from their stormdoors. Your necessary warnings, my beauty, are an occupiable space, a storage place about the body an hour before bed. The hero’s tongue is also a sunflower. Which drives like a Nyquil buckboard, a fractal beauty product, a Charles Bernstein poem called “Strike!”, a Bichon Frise. Knit. Sock. Love. “Under ciliated moon shake off floatings / Of soap; strike code on oxidised zinc.” My beauty is an MGTC. Questions evaporate off the pavement. Lines enfolded into lines cause social change. I could never be publicly intelligent for that long, your dailiness assemblage. When I hear “aesthetics” I reach for my body. My beauty isn’t a beauty thing. Affects happen in public. Jenner just puked up a leaf. Etruscan ethics, an eternity of ambiguous belief, light propagates in zones outside the body. Bunnies in the ethereum. Bride analyzer, an internal decor, dialectical behavior therapy. Can you see our dialogue boxes in the dark? If I leverage myself under the vinyl into the gondola with the mud/turf roof.

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Finally

Finally, a pinkish glow crept in
The sky merited all the love it had received
That day, all the walking
Colors as they darkened and were lit

As down a cloudy highway we ambled
In direst harmony, evening’s next of kin
Under flocks of color learned
That blue is fatal, a note with slow vibrato

There is a city with no color in it
Just a long expanse of trees and hollows
When one has stayed in it, one knows
The paintings flow up to its edges

A gray horizon and glimmering
Molecules within it we glimpsed
All colors are all other colors
When bitten by the teeth of feeling

The day was an accumulation of fears
Caresses in the past cannot be changed
Now a girl flings out reddish laughter
An overage of yellow casts out eyes

Paintings welcome source and target
I caught the accent of her hair
But to make its document sallow music
All sentences must read like wine labels

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T.R.E.E. (Total Rare Earth Elements)

Written by: Carol Watts
Sound production by: Will Montgomery

[audio:http://cordite.org.au/audio/TREE-improvisation.mp3|titles=T.R.E.E. (Total Rare Earth Elements)]
T.R.E.E. (Total Rare Earth Elements) (8:59)


inoculate me

1

rare e  arth
rare       rth
r   air earth

It is a simple life under the sun all day without decent water to drink or to wash in / but I never had a sister / the nature of daily life and the coming on is not dramatic / what would a mother do / and yet you do not take it in / what is the occasion for / and rain coming on / I had no advantage in this timing / this timing / without pointing to it before / as much death as anyone could handle / its musculature / taking a skinful and it would not / take / our growing immunity is of the wrong kind / perhaps you did not take it in / she said /

2

washed up / I was washed up on this / shingle / what perfect information / where / but I see you / nothing is invented / in neural pathways / I am queasy and emotional / what is redundant about a way forward / without decent water to drink or to wash in / is it actively managed / he’s here / how do you know / what is on my plate / the cycle is almost complete / my father was too young / this is not happening exactly / us / you’ve been trained well / April / held together by / rare earth magnets / damaged a digestive tract / gradually I grow / darker / I can offer few examples / letters obtrude / there is no need to change / I have many sisters but no mother / what would she / think / it spread so fast / her scalp was alive with it / take it in / she said you do not take it / in /

3

small inhalings / would have protected for centuries / without surgical intervention / this daily life / inter / venes / the hawk adjusts / the marshes were rank close by / but there was clarity / it is too late for / me / words have talked their way / so superficial when / such violence / obtains / I think what is next / where do I / walk / what jetty extends / silence / no do I walk / this jetty / because something / will / follow / I / take it in to myself / this jetty is / on my tongue / is / my tongue / I hurried elsewhere yet / what was in my bones / repeated close to the skull / look look / a pale light / I was born into this / uh – o uh – o / I do regret not seeing you / while you knew / asking / what a move / I must learn to ‘take it in’ /

4

I’m scared to ask / if you are just going / to / interrupt / there goes angel! / and my jetty / runs out from the shore / sunshine / let me choose to live / and roar / in leaf spoil / sunshine wins / sound of crying birds / it took tremendous fortitude / to survive this / elimination bout / we leave tomorrow / and off it goes / coffee in the sun / I will walk the marsh / one more instance of / regret / without paragraphs / syllabic / procedures / and groups of other women / look look / I am / one / among bones / the world isn’t an equal place / it is a simple life / disappeared and working / at that time / what delivers disembarks / at last / pieced / where I am in rewarded / my tongue makes / gatekeepers / turn on their / confessions / causing / her death / look look /

5

spoken / flayed truth / burnt / eyeless / he said ‘it’s beyond me’ / ‘are you dumb’ / we watched it me and my wife / dealt with abuse / and made proposals / any reasonable / storm arriving / get the money / she was beaten in the streets / it was Beirut / her bag / on the peg / paying / wilful act I / would be observed / under nine hours’ time / I escalate / requiring Russia / I stockpile / clinical data / my heart is swollen / there is a problem of openness / what are my charges / all that to be decided / my walk along the jetty / is a frightening scenario / my child was sleeping / workers and guests / evacuated / unscathed / a hawk adjusts / over state television / over buildings and mudflats / over unemployment / black spots / of body weight / this footage / is a frightening scenario / my children do not / ‘know she has gone’ / colder for all of us /

6

clouds will build / now the real battle / still a mixture / of sinking caught on / tv last month / it comes back to attack / my heart / beats a black earth / so rare / it is so rare / to speak it / something fails / thickens / by caesarian section / sterilised / it is a kind of stealth / too many words / he says ‘will you pick me up’ / it was Thursday / unsanitary conditions / insane conditions / pertain / do you remember / your key / what might depart from here / how do I / depart from here / waggling tongues / are thickening meat / like hearts / long streams / she carries her child / there would be no others / her voice was indistinct / the recording carried by / mule / how her bones would / know it / in pelvic / reckoning / I / lay / me / down / in rare earth /

7

yes words sink / as shit does / without circulation / the place he wrote it in her book / I / rub / rubbed it out / we rubbed it out / while learning number / the shame of number / lay under the bridge / or / ‘I feel like a ghost’ / she said / get off the train / it went over the bridge / he was / preaching / hate / I was preaching / hate / the state / liked me / ‘he can’t get off’ / ‘it’s still moving’ / free speech mounted in larks / I will report you / get thee to caesarians / she smuggled her belly / over borders / yes the sun / came out / but caves were full of / snakes / low drone of Antonin / irked my femurs / clavicles rang / in the night / you might find / rest / comes up in a rash / or in / redistribution / how shrunk am I / by daybreak / if you are ‘one of them’ / in time / I come to know / extent /

8

he was blocking the way / she began / to / panic / age had come on / beforehand / that worm of memory / ate / out / holes / she could not recall / why she stood there / her eyes were taken / he pulverised / her good intentions / and here comes the plane / over the rocks / here comes the train / over the bridge / hide hide / among the clavicles / something was made and / eaten / the jetty was / too far off / it was Saturday / and stilled / there was no reply / I did not answer / this man / will be reported / behind me / he / was / drab / ethical talk / does it / oh / it is a simple life / under the sun all day / these / total / elements / I take them / in / where / where / to walk / without / water / I lay me / down / inoculate / me / do / you / find / immunity / in / rare / earth


A text score for vocal performance originally generated through pencil drawings of wood from a cold shore, the latter now an artist’s book.

Prompted by a phrase from Jackson Mac Low’s ‘It is a Simple Life’, and in collaboration with processed field recordings of tree creaks made by sound artist Will Montgomery.

T.R.E.E. is an ongoing collaborative process. It was exhibited as an artist’s book and audio work in the exhibition Time, the deer, is in the wood of Hallaig in 2013. The text has had numerous iterations, including an improvisatory performance at the Sounds New Festival in 2014 by Carol Watts and ‘neolithic soul drone collective’, Hand of Stabs.

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I’ve Been Living

I’ve been living off my toaster
I’m a cold Italian poser
Could run for president
Or take a dive in the dark

These girls are still over me
Their mute abstraction of disco
A voice alive in a jar
At least until seconds ago

Tossed down on a peel
For the harried eye to slip on
That’s what I call drawing now
Hurried past, on a blinker

These maladapted muses, my women,
Their polite responses in tatters,
Either one of us might be number seven
On their hit parade of sweaters

To repose, their acquiescence
To even one of a number of vain requests
Turns to silk, kitten, the force of logic,
Perpetual pizza, a dim admittance,

Operation at most of a minute
A serried promise, mixed martini
To the end of the table, the meal
Somehow over, I didn’t see any food

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Buzzkill

In the constant tramline motion of his trainers
He took the third and added a choice amendment
To their wish fulfilment; but don’t doubt he loved —

He did, big time and strong, the tall buildings wavering.
Sneaker rocker ripping holes in the velvet sky
Beards howl hoot spurt in any/all directions

Celebrate dystopia and delirious freefall!
Knock, come in, close curtain, breathe, slap
And tickle your way — his way — to joyous

Occasional relapse. We are all too fallible,
He noted, riding high on subway vapours, trapping
Phonemes from their speech bubbles, making

Debauched art in the depths of his positronic
Spectacle of sound and deathwish. Drag him
Out of bed, straddle him and know the mosaic

Is riddled with grace and temptation, take a leaf,
Take his better judgement, and heap praise on his
View Down Town — those ticket stubs of pleasure,

those cars stacked high as pheromones;
those lads with eyes on buttercream girls;
those idols with sonic points of reference;

those wizards who sense the coming collision;
those wisps that excite the heart, music spreading gold;
those clotted needles in trash cans searched out again;

Remixing the mess of his days, he checks out of the city
And makes itinerant on country roads, a crossroads
Judgement, a falling in with good ol’ boys
Who’ll take him down.

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In Newcastle, In Tokyo …

Skye is a 2 bit whore:

“The Nomads Motorcycling Club are inviting local residents”
jumping castles on Chinchen Street filled with April fools.
Walking down the drain as a form of object oriented ontology (ooo)
eventually finding every piece of a child’s rubber jigsaw mat,
as the local kids obliviously, trick or treat their HQ.
When I need to flatter it I reference South King Street twenty years ago:
the pebblecrete poles of the East End speaking to an historicist melancholy
plastered all over Instagram. The soundtrack still Bob Hudson in the 70s,
‘eh geday’, or mythic 80s youth working at The Waratah Philadelphia
Cream Cheese Factory listening to ‘How Soon Is Now?’
These days you can catch a straight-edge punk food-blogging his morning eggs
Benedict or a container ship called ‘Fiction’ loaded with speculative realism.
The newspaper tells me that, in America,
nine little baby girls called Pistol were born last year.




pj harvey

c’mon billy. you said
something. (down
by the water.)
in chinatown, hungover.
so i draw a line.
baby, baby. (bad mouth.)
kamikaze. i want a pistol,
i want a gun.
parked in ultimo.
wait, what? brutalist.
up past fox studios,
that thai place. coogee.
new year’s eve
(on a rooftop in brooklyn)




one nation

misato is serving drinks & miyuki
is waiting tables & haru is at
her second job & kohei’s in the kitchen
but miki took the day off & miu hasn’t
been seen in weeks. clive is on a call &
chris rolled out early & mikey’s playing
hockey & haruki’s getting his knees
checked out. i’m in the basement,
mixin’ up the medicine. it’s all so political.
(so poetic. much artifice. the doge, like in
venice.) search & destroy, kids,
search & destroy. pauline was our palin,
a few years early. so aussie, so bondy,
karma considered as a credit card statement.




brisvegas misremembered

wish being et cetera to the excess
there’s no lack completely
lactose tolerant &
moderately middle-aged half
the wardrobe full of lycra
the rest is mostly uniqlo &
triathlons are best left to those who
can swim, lifeguards in a panic &
what a job description, what a lark,
collecting sisters & cousins until,
at the end of an eight hour
spreadsheet binge, you have to wonder
if frank saw it coming & decided to
simply embrace it, not that we need liquor




Caliope sits:

While Shok busks on Maitland Road, you feel better knowing he’s out there
doing it for all of us. The ghost of Leo Malley, shaking a fist like earthquake
damage to an awning. Tonight I’m watching the Chinese dating show
If You Are The One on SBS 2, and missing Fu Manchu.
Sympathy for Sydney’s poor cousin: the rough & tumblr
of a Lucas Grogan tea-towel and outside the gallery Brett Whitely
has laid a mothra of an egg. The aesthetic is a form of white primitivism
— who knew when I read those sonnets in the library, that I’d later be writing
them in situ, from an office in a world-class ‘gumtree’ University.
While you, the anti-Don Draper of Tokyo, can’t even enjoy a blade of grass
without a whisky handy. It must be Suntory Time, or bedtime (for democracy,
if not the kids). Oh public transport envy! But here the beaches
are over-exposed and under-developed, the surfers are analogue
and I still call all the pelicans at the Cowrie Hole, Mr Percival.




chinese signal

a baby designs a shovel & so he digs, courtesy
japan agriculture, as the climate of shame
elicits amnesia constantly, like yeats.
modernism read backwards is a prelude
to the victorians, & should we go to
the night markets again there’s more than
one hand she’d like to be holding, as if
the beach wasn’t a series of problems,
liminal, fluid, not set in stone & barely
a requirement, operators transcribing the
latest chinese signal, & to elicit a
dependency is a fine thing, among tokens
of her regard. she said / he said. they were
in the shower when the earth quaked




evidently absent

after you finish the re-org, that is, after you
write a last sonnet, that is, after the kids have
grown up, that is, once we’ve had enough of
each other & agreed it’s best to part, that is,
once you can read the newspaper & fill in
all the necessary forms, that is, after you’re
tired of waiting & hopelessness, that is,
if you feel hopeless on occasions, well, why
not, you’re not an idiot, that is, before
the minute hand sweeps around to begin the next
cycle, but just as it announces the current
cycle’s end, that is, after the regrets &
bitterness have aged to a sheen, that is, then,
& only then, capriciousness permitting.




religious

as the buddha said,
we’re all out of our fucking minds!
& later, relaxed into groundlessness,
returned again & again,
to the breath, to a slightest motion,
pissing everything against a wall.
& wrapped quietly, giggling,
as the buddha said, relaxed,
into groundlessness, again & again,
returned, pissing everything
out of our fucking minds!
& later, the breath,
a slightest motion.
a wall, as the buddha said.




Paleo:

The Hamilton Station Hotel with its neon on the blink versus the Hoshino
resort’s endamame on high, perched above the clouds.
Walking with my mother out the breakwater, as she casts her life’s segue
into and out of the human genome. There’s a Misao Okawa in us all,
drinking hot chocolates the way our ancestors made them.
You know we once shared a stage with Jen Cloher, who last year toured
to Tennant Creek. I remember speeding down the Sturt Hwy in a hotted up
red hire car singing ‘Lady Marmalade’, and nearly hitting a brumby.
Now, I’m hardly living in Detroit though a local shop sells pannikins
and Mason jars, the post-industrial as an in situ conceit.
There are small advances, like how I can now walk into a hospital ward
without fainting, read historical fiction, sleep in the same bed as someone.
I finished Burial Rites yesterday and finally switched the car radio
to ABC Classic FM, surprised the breakfast announcer ums.




again

discounting the eschatology of fail in
the eating & drinking corner (toranomon,
toranomon), your number, waiting for it
to be called, popular song continues
without you, everyone you ever wanted is
here to assist, insufferable diplomas
arranged on the wall & when the doctor
anaesthetises your inner ears you flail &
fall as horny as a teenager but what
you normalise returns & fades on the
ginza line, desire ranged along carriages,
& some time after, back in shimbashi,
a small tremor, two boys look out the window,
watch the signs swing above the ginza lion




unwanted, unwashed

japanese brides drink red wine in the rose
garden as hiro mimes concern, milking
his suave baby’s aplomb. i was
dreaming when i wrote this &
you’re going to the beach all day. shame
about the rain, about the platitudes.
umbrella town. café under the keikyu line,
11:38 am, it is saturday, june 11 in the
year of earthquake fever. you know how
we smell after sex? you wanna smell like
that now? i mean, in a little while? there’s
work to be done first. unwanted,
unwashed. you get used to the weird.
someone starts up their limousine.




switcheroo

the first time with a broken arm is
hardly duchampian, although
the circumstances approach
& you can, after a fashion,
make art from it, appearing heartless
or detached at best.

afterwards, the psychodrama returns,
amplified & obtuse in a third language.

what you miss most, if you stop to think,
is the thrill of quotation, life as
a series of in-jokes.

so to irony, yeah? you’re travolta &
you’re nic cage, the doves wheel
& teeter, heading skywards.




Coal and Cedar:

There’s a middle-aged woman painting abstract expressionism in Maryville
and a valley full of Rothko in the fluro vest economy, reminds me
of my OCD Down’s brother’s un-necessary wardrobe (a cos-play council
worker). Driving past the Diocese there’s the besser block housie hall,
the tribunal tucked around the corner (annulling). There’s always a local
Weegee with his point and click: the actual being virtualised and the virtual
actualised. I’m too lazy with a camera but sometimes I do notice a detail
that proves I’m not a replicant: the milk bottle shaped glass in the Deco Dairy
Farmer’s Building (now selling cars). Once, out on a boat on the harbour,
I caught an eel that nearly cut off its own blood supply wrapping itself around
the line (a bit like these poems). As the white whale, Mingaloo (with hardly a
barnacle on him), snuck past. Some of the old fellah surfers have eyes as blue
as the ocean, but you know it’s bogus, like un-signposted speakeasy bars
the public secret is still knowing what not to know.




saturday

it returned plucking flowers in the field
on the stroll road. (we were out of it,
your majesty, but you wouldn’t be
bloody dead for quids.) i went to newcastle
once, he said, inaccurately. now & forever,
up from betty bay, or sitting on the steps in
coogee, smoking furiously. it returned,
plucking flowers. life’s a shambles,
a friggin’ shambles. watching pokemons
watching pokemons fight with pokemons.
sometimes on TV. sunday, monday, off
on tuesday. in the field. behind on payments.
shambling on the stroll road. protocol?
protocol. tomorrow isn’t saturday.




superdemander

less an age than a phase, more transient,
earlier versions too frail to fail so here we are
& here we go again, waiting for a seat in
the smoking section to clock hourly updates,
temperature data in real time via sms
as if, once recorded on a spreadsheet,
the domain can be flattened & constrained,
retiring the risk of mistaking the model for the
system. last year was teal & this year is lilac
& next year you might conceivably finish, but
first, the official television of FC Barcelona &
so on, it’s hard to ignore the superdemander,
not that we’re more strung out than usual,
not that we’re actively thinking to ignore




russians

you have to get drunk to read
in translation, whitman via o’hara
via mayakovsky via the keikyu line,
usually you catch the 7:43 & transfer
at shinagawa. the kids are asleep
& europe is a hot mess while america is
only a mystery & later we can run
around the palace & debate ethics until
the cows come home, lowing quietly
as the skyline shifts & shimmies.
a tractor in otemachi would be a fine thing.
the best poetics are completely mad,
she said, just totally barking, otherwise
all you have are performance reviews.

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Sherri Cise

        Sunday, Monday. Summer, 2014.
        I loved eating fruit/veggie in the same/similar family. I was 25; it was 2013. I felt exhausted, unused—very nearly autoecious to the old gang. They would get it too, eventually, I suspected.
        An ongoing pain/burning sensation I described on my left ankle to them continued to tingle, though by mid-afternoon somewhat reduced—after which the pain/burning increased by dodges in former, procedurally locational sections of the leg.
        Lebiuy drove quickly. She closed in on the wrong restaurant, EBSCO CAM, ate. She fetched the tab. They got a bomb. Sjogren said they left. Passed away.
         ‘Don’t plant it. I wouldn’t worry about it.’
        Sherri was importable. I was very irritated for months, and if not, portending as much. And for what—for a Rid Ucoaz, for a hydrostatic pressure of blood (blood pressure)? Sure, 62 pp. remained in her clutch. It was Monday. The list colour evenings spleened, surfacing that was a cool setting in of incelebrity recurrence, remaindered saturations feeding the soil, a long week ahead collected in accusations, curr, scalding linings to the inferior labial frenulum—like plotting a confervoid treatment group?
        Landless bags each adult, appreciably prim. The log iodinate.
        Allen and Lebiuy worked hard. Festering hard. They got it after taking steroids or antibiotics, staying aerobic and weekend-bound or by barely being able to keep up with another 95 inhabiting the bunion Title. Dulcification. That bothered me. Snitches, meanwhile, felt comfortable and satisfied.
         ‘Conte et al., loosen your collar. Relax a little.’
         ‘Keep still, please. Katherine.’
        They slung on their boots grey, torrey peak. They overtook by reconnaissance and incidental storage these matters. I was exhausted for the second time that day, drained by police interrogation. So they could tell the ankle. They saw it. And they don’t just jurisdictionally apply you to a first-class location like Tampa, FL, I’m afraid.
        The searing. Oxygen cylinders clanked down the hall. A returned offer to impress or else I autotoxify the rest. To evade them, I had these spikes on forever and baboe them to the max. After 50 years experience of maybe GERD I’ve only had as much. It was late—after May.

        Never wear yourself out.
        Take Cialis once a day working.
        Take 21 hours off a day.

        Chapter 2. During $44.00 a point at least for six months, two different shower gels rewarded each quarter, alternating day-to-day. Signed.
         ‘The hotel. It’s actually a great apperception, that, refusing to explain further. Where did you learn?’
         ‘I only practice.’
        We were obtaining the world really badly; I’m not sure if that’s what’s giving. I feel dumb to life anymore at this point, basically. I’m in denial, Glynn. I have trouble talking, too. They are the majority of individuals no histamine or sulfite feeling upbraids.
         ‘What, was it something you ate?’
         ‘A barrel of pickled onions.’
         ‘On such basis as a life-changer.’
        Genomic premonition clicked into place. I struggled politely to leave notandum.
        Sunday.
         ‘Anyway, hi to all, and bless Glynn. She’s a signature example. She writes her name the same way every day.’
         ‘She fled the scene.’
         ‘Easy. He’s been drinking.’
        They sat him down for a while and left; oxide clung to my legs. What a mission. The wrong restaurant. Thick suede.
         ‘That said, signidcam, your neck and back, thigh muscles appear equally tense,’ Lebiuy warned, g his teeth, ‘then when the barometer moves I flare up big time and there’s nothing. An essential reading reccomendation, something to deal with otherwise. Chances are you are already eating vegetables and liking them.’

        Henceforth, a successful application of propranolol amex fit the bill—and to have been on a beautiful cruise. I took Ambien for 3 days at eight per. I reached at my gut a lot. I didn’t shit at all. A mere fungus living off sugar enzymes—and good luck with the Cise. I now use capsaicin (cut open a hot pepper and rub on my wrist for carpal tunnel). Katherine hears and obtains its reticular yowl; oral lichen planus, taste peption. Her expression harbored a constant frown. The toilet flushed before she sat on it—a final note.
        How right they were. And how bluudy wrong I was.
        I hear them going at it 24/7. Exercises by the gatheringly dilated benefit of this apparently flexible therapy, so I liked it—partially repetitive activities impeding HydroPeptic pacing from which one prepaid tucker of the lips and any other excluded further work programs or vapid inclinations therein denied: etiological factors, clinical aspects, an appraisal measured by their availability, concerned screeches saying twice that much.
        I chew gum, or continue to. I suck on ice cubes. I take antacids.
        The burn is hull killers too, as they tabbed greater than the fuselage or will against its p hard landing.
        I paced around angry and depleted. My right arm hurt. The sun, faded against the clouds, was halfway across the sky. More timestamping and occlusal analysis. Panting. I thought only Glynn tailored old people and succumbed to these exacting burn deformities by default, or at least the latter. O detached.

        ‘I’m Allen.’
        I’m 25. I’m 29. I developed burning mouth syndrome when I was 15. It wasn’t because of Xoom clothes, forthrightness and uniqueness, chore or solvent.
         ‘Are you trying to scare us,’ I pleaded, sobbing.
        Impediment to this painful program the shrill crack of the benzos, beerdom wool depression and a completed index of symptoms. Dynamics in light of the local cops people interviewed—or was I only taking Abreva at the time? It was 2010. I was a major player in the scene, held out as web fora local hero.
        In accidental fits of historicisation, inertia, bloviated ancestry, and here because a very small portion of the population comprises this work of Cordite and other toll-like receptors selling me vitamins—approximately 95 still various entities and personages—illusorily conducted, themselves unproductive and unapologetically circuitous, a nervous, non-surgical therapy for dental implants and co-composting. Just the touch. Your knee or leg surgeon who values you more will select one of the following options: the wearing of lighter clothing, being aware of various orally-induced treatments, flax oil, novel introductions of Ritalin, a wide toe box, injections of corticosteroid.
         ‘I don’t overlook these symptoms to give them comparable field.’
         ‘You have five minutes.’
         ‘Their job explained in finally needing more help around the shop.’
        I smiled, unsure of what to say. I went, ‘Can I help?’ ‘What can I get you?’
         ‘A greasy salad and wheat bread,’ I said. ‘Now.’
         ‘I used to eat Velveeta shells but can’t face them since the accident.’
        Padding or gums are a wet blanket. They couldn’t outwit us since the implant, though they’d occasionally get up highly sensitive people.
        Docs always shrugged it off. Xoom clothes had nothing to do with it. I love Xoom clothes.
        Tell me the point of starch levels acting up. I now eat only King Edwards or similar. If I stick to the King Edward types my mouth is fine by. Entity dedicace.

        She complained she had numbness in the lips.
        I’ve been swabbed for yeast like five times, with nothing really happening, if ever. Nerves were damaged in the mouth, but how specific are they? So the spot on my arm will twitch three times in the hour, as opposed to once.
        A spittoon clanged behind them. Bootcut crotch seam bungled off equalling.
        My nerves go—they’re misfiring—they’re looking to Allen it feels like. I laughed. A neuro looked inside my mouth, detection as a practice familiar to the doctor in that failed moment. (A sidenote: I chew Spry gum. Deadly to dogs?)
        Thank you, that will be deleted.
        I remain a 39-year-old Vanilla Mint, and according to the doctor, a beat copy—a very healthy Sherri. All of my blood work is outstanding. It appears I am not deficient in vegetable/fruit.
        50/50 mouth medical content.
        2 factors, firstly hormones, and then a stuffy nose, which returns like a circle.
        1000IU Vitamin D reduces burning for a little while.
        2000IU Vitamin D reduced burning for maybe a few hours.
        6000IU Vitamin D (3 x 2000 spread out) relieved burning and also lower leg pain.
        9000IU relieved symptoms but mild heat discomfort.
         ‘Accepted,’ I gulped. The Rid Ucoaz took effect.
        Touchous affray duration snare flat by 4 to 6 surrounding cycle weeks germinacy. As either perennial or multidisciplinary research. My heart reached 70 far of 90% to be useful enough to keep me going. I gave up. I’m about 30% better mic’d up. The performance went spinal, or what I’m waiting to hear back about now—shoulders, chest sublorality, achieved by a foundational and self-confessed meeting of lipid groups at each week’s end, repetition, every level periodic form bulls act out in air injury, slowdown tab weary heads. Sherri peered up from her book.
        An audience went great. Abhorring one another’s programs, affluence exercise and walking in on them obviously forestalled a commentless ability, indirect food additive. I myself am often male. I’m not wealthy or bougie by any stretch, but it makes me feel better in a cool piece of furniture, brain crimped, sipping on cucumber.
         ‘Aptitude,’ I asked my friend Glynn. They are revising constantly, bothering the evidence—a realistic comportment of her distinct zygomaticofrontalia of Skyre, smattered, nudging the bar lower. She winced. They shoveled in.

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Well Tempered

Prelude: Instructions for Travel

When facing
a veritable quandary
insert hormone pellets

Gather the mob
at the bicycle
assembly point

Wish for a book at Powell’s
locate fancy beasts, a mosquito
cry hallelujah! then blackout

Imagine noir script starring
woman in red trench coat
coming in out of the rain

Take a pre-dawn taxi
to Central. Catch a country
train to Wagga Wagga

Shuffle to the buffet
car like Cliff Young.
Another poet always ahead

Play pool & the pokies
& belt out AC/DC karaoke
at the St. Mary’s leagues club

Search Sorbonne bookstores
for an English translation
of Les Fleurs du Mal

Slip feet into shoes
like a character
in Murray Bail’s Homesickness

Check bags from DFW to PDX
return seats to upright positions
wash hands before everything

Eat pub grub with JJ. Bring
BC coffee. Share the means
of production with AA


Fugue: Second Western

the symmetry of action/inaction means that
a Portland Prius and a Fort Worth pickup
will cancel each other out, but you keep going

west young man, keep tightening the buckle
on your Bible belt ‘cause that thing’s gotta hold
against the breaking drought against the clean

air corridors that threaten to rupture and pour
across this continent. I can’t believe that yours
is the only house in the neighbourhood without

a gun. Here, I’ve added one to your basket
you can bumper sticker this moment later
after you ride the bull/drink the whiskey/

sing a national anthem (choose one). Even
with drilled oil you can’t always get where
you want. In this town there are bus timetables

with holes so large that Lear jets are flying
through them. Lear Jets! Ave, Rex Caeli
And thank you sponsors for making every-

thing possible and also for the freedom
to choose unique flavours. Such as the Iraq.
Such as the Corona in best position i.e. inverted

and pouring itself into a margarita like a
clepsydrian apocalypse. You are personally
welcome, sir, but leave your constitutionally

monarchic ideas back in your own country.
And don’t come crying to me if some
liberal NPR-loving shyster tells you off when

your kids are noisy in a public place. Consider
this your first warning. There are people with
weird beliefs. There are decrees which we all

obey. There is a Segway like Apollo’s chariot
sliding across a white square, reminding you
to wear pants as the fountain shoots skywards.

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Jack Gilbert Gets ‘Foeted’

Anonymously they came for his bones
hoping they would still hang with some flesh.

‘Blah blah’ said one, and ‘Yes yes’ said the other.

Little too-mortal teeth ripping into the poems
they knew were not the truth of it.

‘Oh yes’ said one, and ‘Blah blah’ said the other.

Soon they were part of a pack that tore
and gnashed at the excerpted voidness.

‘Shitty shitty shit’ they all screamed, ‘Shitty shit.’

While Jack laid back and paid attention
to all they did not know in themselves.

‘I’m writing now’ he said, ‘after much excitation.’

They went back to their grief with bellies
too full to lift their heads and confess.

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Cordite Ave vs. Electric Ave

I rediscovered these images from the Cordite vault this morning. Real photographs printed on photo paper. These were taken by David Prater in the final gasps of the 1990s I believe. Although the Cordite Ave (as threaded through Melbourne’s outer west) in these picture does not beckon with the same synthesized hedonism, water bongs, helmet-free motorcycle revving and rock-on-downing as Eddie Grant’s eponymous avenue, at least it is a real place. A real place with no promise of disco, what came next, or taking anything higher … just the indefatigable heft and sadness of industry and suburban warrens. Then again, maybe Grant’s avenue was based on facts too. It was one of the first 45-speed records I got with allowance money in 1982.

I’m quite sure that Cordite Poetry Review was not named after this avenue. In fact, I really have no idea what prompted Adrian Wiggins and Peter Minter to name this journal what it is.

So, yeah. That’s pretty much the end of this annecdote. But here they are nevertheless, genuine photographs scanned for your pleasure. They have a lovely Rain Man quality about them.

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Review Short: Jordie Albiston’s XIII Poems

XIII Poems

XIII Poems by Jordie Albiston
Rabbit Poet Series, 2013

XIII Poems might be seen as a snapshot of what Albiston’s main concerns have been since Botany Bay Document (1996) appeared culminating with, I think, Vertigo (2007). Her publications since the mid-2000s reflect on similar concerns but with more biographical tones. Albiston’s main interests have been history, limitations or framed lives, their voices and interpretations of them, often using easily located words to tie groups of poems (‘heart,’ ‘black,’ and ‘white’ feature in XIII Poems).

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Review Short: Melinda Smith’s Drag down to unlock or place an emergency call

Drag down to unlock or place an emergency call

Drag down to unlock or place an emergency call by Melinda Smith
Pitt Street Poetry, 2013

Melinda Smith’s Drag down to unlock or place an emergency call is her fourth collection, her work including substantial anthologisation and a number of prizes. Smith’s self-described aim is to for her poetry to ‘educate, inform and entertain … but mostly entertain’ (being the subtitle of her blog, Melinda Smith’s Mull and Fiddle).

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Martin Langford Reviews Maria Takolander

The End of the World

The End of the World by Maria Takolander
Giramondo Publishing, 2014

Maria Takolander has grouped the poems in this, her second collection, to isolate three slightly different impulses in her work. Because the central section is comprised of poems whose point of view underlies those of sections one and three, I shall deal with it first. All of its poems explore the dark and unforgiving nature of the world. Continue reading

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The Long and Short of It and That: Some Thoughts on Book Reviews

This post is in reply to John Dale’s recent piece in The Conversation, Here they are: the rules for book reviewing, and Peter Rose’s evisceration of it In defence of book reviewers in Australia, also in The Conversation.

Dale airs many grievances about current flora and fauna in the environment of Australian book reviewing, but there is one critter he un-cages that informs the entirety of his semi-light-hearted invective; his insistence that ‘It is generally acknowledged, however, that the standard of book reviewing in Australia is poor.’ It’s hard to know how to respond to such an incomplete observation, but as Managing Editor of Cordite Poetry Review, I do feel it is my duty (of sorts) to attempt one. Our primary criteria for reviews, long or short, are that writers must critically engage with the reviewed text, its operation of language, what the intent of that was, what the results actually are in their extrapolation, and cite passages from the text to support assertions. Clifford Geertz’s ‘thick description’ doesn’t cut it.

Cordite does all it can to avoid publishing what are ostensibly florid book reports (all too common in our Internet age and the unending spaces for ‘content’ it begets). It’s imperative to expand and, at times where we’re able, step beyond the proven coterie of poetry criticism in Australia. We also have reached out nationally and internationally for new critical voices over the past three years.

So how do we match a title up with a reviewer? Three primary concerns: reviewer interest, reviewer impartiality, and sympathy for the poetry being reviewed. By ‘sympathy’ I mean that a reviewer should have at least some interest in the aesthetic a collection purports / embodies, or has kindred knowledge of the tone invoked or the subjects covered. We’re Cordite Poetry Review: we do a lot of them. The function of our reviews isn’t solely for your entertainment, as Dale claims should be the primary purpose of a ‘good review’. Rather, we provide as steady and as critical a look into our literature as we can, all inputs considered. Squinting up your eye and peering into a microscope isn’t the comfiest of operations, but it’s worth it.

Dale does have a valid point via his ‘local problem’. In our occasional hunt for new reviewers, invariably a smattering of reviews from our endeavour just scrape by, even after extensive but negotiable edits, and we publish them in the interest of diversity. Some we have to reject. But the sizeable majority of reviews we publish articulate what we seek … and would pass Updike’s five rules that Dale mentions as well (though I don’t fully agree with his first one).

If you’ve launched a book, then we won’t be retrofitting the speech into a review. We also won’t allow authors to review themselves, which we get asked more often than you might imagine. And not by a kilometre’s worth of mile are we able to review every new poetry collection noted on this list. We maintain this page to let people know what’s coming up in general. It’s not exhaustive, but it is extensive.

Critics like Lucy Van, Bonny Cassidy, Rosalind McFarlane, Maria Takolander, Andrew Carruthers, and Kate Middleton are excellent … and they are so precisely because they consider and deliver exactly this sort of literary engagement. Every time. And there are another 30-40 critics who deliver equal quality in their own voice for Cordite Poetry Review. This list grows each year. To say ‘the standard of book reviewing in Australia is poor’ makes sense only with a myopic read of our literary criticism.

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Analogue Bodies: A Conversation with Tom Lee and Zoë Sadokierski

Analogue Bodies is a collection of essays by Tom Lee, materialised as set of illustrated books by Zoë Sadokierski. The project looks at different parts of, and events within, the human body and historical ways of depicting and making sense of them. It aims to humour and, on its day, to educate. It was presented as part of the recent Emerging Writers’ Festival 2014 at the Wheeler Centre in Melbourne.

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David Dick Reviews Ken Bolton and B. R. Dionysius

ThreeferWeranga

Weranga by B. R. Dionysius
Walleah Press, 2013

Threefer by Ken Bolton
Puncher & Wattmann, 2013

Ken Bolton and B.R. Dionysius emerge from different traditions, respectively: a New York School sense of everyday occasion punctuated by the presence and shaping forces of contemporary art (Frank O’Hara and James Schuyler are clearly present in Bolton’s diction); and a modernised kind of Romantic pastoral, littered with juxtaposed objects of the natural and contemporary world. Yet, at admitted risk of over-generalising, both of their recent books can be seen to be dealing with notions of how to write memory in poetry: how to write a poem to be honest to the process, even the implication itself, of remembering. How can language be used in the service of this retrospective vision, they ask; how does language, shaped by differing poetic forms, illuminate, distort or neutralise it?

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Review Short: Melinda Bufton’s Girlery

GirleryFrom the lolly shop of the good-time Hades girls

Girlery by Melinda Bufton
Inken Publisch, 2014

The title of Melinda Bufton’s debut collection, Girlery, asks to be read ironically, but is in fact quite apt, bringing to mind a repository of all that is ‘girly,’ in the same way that a reliquary houses relics. Alternatively, it could be a verb: something close to a feminine form of tomfoolery. One imagines a stern injunction to ‘cease this girlery at once!’ With titles such as ‘Dealbreaker,’ ‘Bumper Book for Girls,’ ‘Lollyshop’ and ‘I will call you smitten because it suits your crazy eyes’ among the twenty-three poems collected here, both these associations are appropriate.

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Review Short: Chris Wallace-Crabbe’s my feet are hungry

my feet are hungry

my feet are hungry by Chris Wallace-Crabbe
Pitt Street Poetry, 2014

Readers of Australian poetry will expect a new collection from Chris Wallace-Crabbe to be a work of erudition and wit. In this they will not be disappointed. Wallace-Crabbe is entirely in command of his craft and possessed of intelligence that does not waste itself in trivialities. Continue reading

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Philip Mead Reviews Corey Wakeling

Goad Omen

Goad Omen by Corey Wakeling
Giramondo Publishing, 2013

How do you hear the title to this volume of poems by Corey Wakeling? Goad Omen: two words that really slow you down as a reader, make you dwell on their unnatural pairing. Three dipthongal, molasses-slow syllables. They sound like a slip of the tongue, a conversational mishearing, or typo that should have been Good Omen perhaps. Continue reading

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Feature Poem with Judith Beveridge: Calyptorhynchus funereus

I know bird poems have become almost a cliché in Australian poetry, but I have a great fondness for the topic and so I couldn’t resist Dimitra Harvey’s evocatively brocaded poem about yellow-tailed black cockatoos, Calyptorhynchus funereus. Astute observation is at the heart of this poem, the poet’s careful pinpointing of particulars is what makes it so memorable, but the poem is so much more than just descriptive, it evokes many tones of mood and it richly maps the birds to landscape, weather and to folklore. Right from the start the birds are linked with death: ‘Your plumes are as black as the dresses and jackets/ we wear at the edges of burial plots.’ And later, ‘each wingbeat scores broad arches in the wind/ with the measured pace of pallbearers.’ The dark undertones in the poem burn off any hint of sentimentality and the birds quickly become augers, not only of death, but of the life-giving force of rain. The way colours are used in the poem is one of its attractions, the stark blackness of the birds is set off against ‘they sky’s bayberry vellum’ and at sunset when ‘the sun decants its port dregs’.

What I enjoyed most is the way the birds intensely haunt the imagination of the speaker. This poem is an excellent example of how the poet, through attention, exploration and invention, discovers the images and metaphors, the rhythms and sound patterns which open and reveal a unique set of meanings. To my mind, poems created without a basis in feeling, however artful and clever, are ultimately dissatisfying. We can see in Dimitra Harvey’s poem how the poetic imagination depends upon emotion, so that by the end, the speaker’s deep connection to the birds allows for an expansion and activation of knowledge. – JB

Calyptorhynchus funereus   (Yellow-Tailed Black Cockatoos)


Your plumes are as black as the dresses and jackets 
we wear at the edges of burial plots. I've read stories
of the storms you portend; how you are a cipher

to an inch of rain. For weeks, I've watched you plane 
the sky's bayberry vellum, seen falling light transpose your silhouettes 
into a straight-cut script I've tried to sound out -

a susurrus of fricatives spattered
with quick cool vowels. And when you've tacked low
above the house, I've studied your lean, cleaver-knife

tails; how each wingbeat scores broad arches in the wind
with the measured pace of pallbearers. Now, as the sun decants
its port dregs, your squeals ricochet from tumbled 

bloodwood trunk, shed wall. Tomorrow, 
squalls in the north will blast
down burry clouds. You'll slow-sail in, moor

to the needled limbs of the pine in the yard. You'll flex 
your crests at the gum-scented westerlies, and unpick
cones for their seeds with your feet, your bills. When you

flutter out your wing I'll learn that the ridge of its underside 
is a craquelure of lemon. The yellow thumbed on 
behind each of your polished eyes will flash like roman sun 

medallions. I'll read stories of high summer and drought, 
of roots cracking with thirst, flowers opening dry buds 
to the deluge. But tonight, after your bodies dissolve against

horizons seeping all the reds of pomegranate seeds, I'll stand
and listen to the ticking of night beetles - my tongue smarting 
with the honeyed-metal piquancy of rain.
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Review Short: Paul Magee’s Stone Postcard

Stone Postcard

Stone Postcard by Paul Magee
John Leonard Press, 2014

Unlike the recent Australian governmental fervour for signs of title (British, monarchist, hierarchical) and their accompanying anathemas contra entitlement (Australian, social democratic, welfarist), poetry titles struggle with self-authorization and singularisation. Continue reading

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Review Short: Christopher Barnett’s when they came/ for you elegies/ of resistance

when they came/ for you elegies/ of resistance

when they came/ for you elegies/ of resistance
by Christopher Barnett, Wakefield Press, 2013

Christopher Barnett is an enigmatic figure: an exile and outsider, an active and proud Socialist, Australian but long based in Europe because of feeling, as Mark Roberts asserts in the book’s foreword, ‘profound disillusionment with Australian society’ (ix). Continue reading

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