Kay Rozynski Interviews Mark Tredinnick


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I say ‘nature writing’, you see a Hallmark watercolour landscape replete with furry animals and woolly sentiment. But is this really the extent of it? What the hay is nature writing, or what isn’t? Where is the line between the natural and the human and, if there is any line at all, who put it there?

If anyone can clarify, it's Mark Tredinnick, vice-president of the Australian-New Zealand chapter of the Association for the Study of Literature & Environment, and accomplished nature writer. Mark's poems have won a number of awards, including this year the inaugural Blake Poetry Prize, and he has written expansively in his essays on the ecology of writing, where he describes nature writing enigmatically as 'nature, writing'. I asked Mark, then, what it might mean to write landscape, and to trace the meridian of the natural world in his own work as a poet.

Kay Rozynski: Firstly, what on Earth is nature writing?

Mark Tredinnick: Nature writing is usually prose, mostly nonfiction, mostly lyric, preoccupied with what we now, in Australia, might best call country. Barry Lopez – whose work embodies better than anyone's what nature writing can be at its best – says that in nature writing the landscape is the story. We humans are in it; but we are not the story; not this time. The story is the fabulous, discontinuous making and unmaking and remaking again of one place on earth or another; the story is the impossibly ornate interconnections that pattern that place and make it what it is, a work never finished; the story is also what all that makes of the people who attempt to make a living there. In nature writing, country is foreground; people are background. Nature writing runs on geologic, not merely human time.

Nature writing is a broad church. It comes grand and it comes humble. It will be pretty daggy nature writing that merely appreciates landscapes and glories in the wonders of their furry and floral citizens; it will be clich?©d nature writing that expresses, in that same old sentimental diction, the tireless and tiresome old longing for communion with Nature. In a good piece of nature writing, we human beings are understood and represented as pieces of a place, and humble, glorious, generally alienated elements of the natural history of a stretch of country.

KR: In your essay on Robert Gray you mention that, as a harbour dweller, Gray could write 'gritty, hip idylls – some of them urban.' What might an urban pastoral look like?

MT: Pastoral, as an aesthetic, is a place and a point of view. (And one way to understand nature writing, of course, is as pastoral.) Traditionally, pastoral – and once upon a time all pastorals were poems – concerned itself with paddocks and fields and streams, with sheep and shepherds – with rural working landscapes, in other words. But pastoral can transcend its customary geography. For pastoral is really a cast of mind – an opening out of the imagination and the senses into the natural world.

In my essay I wanted to suggest that some poets, including Gray, might be understood as pastoral poets even when there are no paddocks in their poems. I wanted to advertise the uses of the pastoral beyond its usual country, I guess to suggest a kind of post-pastoral. The pastoral has been aptly described (by Terry Gifford) as 'a discourse of retreat' from the city – almost from the real world – and I wanted to recast it as a discourse of return; to reframe it for a very urban century of ecological crisis as a point of view that might let poets and their readers see nature in its wild order and eternity, in its animal-vegetable-geologic otherness. Even when all one can see is the brick wall across the lane.

KR: Jonathan Bate in his book The Song of the Earth argued that colonialism and ecological damage, such as deforestation, have historically gone hand in hand. This was clearly the case in Australia. But what does this mean in literary terms – how has writing the landscape in Australia impacted on the landscape itself?

MT: It is beyond argument that the pastoral project on the ground, which has so damaged the landscape – think rising water tables, ruined watercourses, decimated woodlands, lost marsupial nations – was advanced and justified by the pastoral project in the mind. That is, the pastoral aesthetic (the rolling hills, the brooks and pastures and glades, the nymphs and shepherds, a very English idyll unspeakably at odds with the actual country in most parts of this continent), carried in the books and syntax and DNA and on the tongues of the settlers, blinded them to how the country actually went and encouraged them, in the face of overwhelming evidence that this was not England and didn't ever want to be, to try to remake Australia to resemble Wordsworth's Lake District or something similar and to bear the weight of the huge pastoral ambitions visited upon the landscape. Pastoral preconceptions biased the first few generations of white Australians against the way the land actually went. An Anglophone pastoral encouraged us to clear; it told us rain would follow the plough, and other sweet bucolic lies.

In literature, the power of the pastoral has kept too many writers from finding the diction and the palette and the timbres they needed to get Australian landscapes onto paper. Our sentences for way too long have sounded like they have their roots down in a lush green isle, where some of the hills really do roll, and where arid means two dry days in a row; where desert is a pudding misspelled. A truculently Anglophone pastoral sensibility and diction kept the real landscapes out of our heads and out of our books until well into the twentieth century, when Judith Wright began to catch the lyric. In his poem 'Black Landscape' Robert Gray has a stanza that seems to me to realise how you have to listen to the land here, not to the poets we love from another land (where our language was born):

A crow was blown away, with a shout; I thought of having to eat
such dry fibre. Keats didn't know
all about those syllables, 'forlorn', who'd never heard
a sound like the bushfire's crow.

So Australian literature – I mean the white kind, the ballads and the various strains of pastoral we wrote for too long in the mother tongue, in the Queen's English – has been complicit in the pastoral colonisation of probably way too much of Australia.

KR: Discussing eco-criticism as an emergent field of literary studies, Peter Barry categorises nature along a spectrum from the untouched (deep space and so on) to the profoundly cultivated (garden beds, lawns) and observes that it is the former that tends to provoke the literary epic or saga. On the other hand, the end of the spectrum that represents heightened human intervention is often the setting for lyric poetry. Your recent poem 'The Economics of Spring' (Meanjin Vol. 67, No. 3, 2008) inhabits for me an area between the two extremes; or rather, it's the sum of them: it's certainly a lyric but it seems to open itself onto the full panorama of nature. The poem's speaker, who is a poet, appears to invite nature to inhabit the act of writing. Can you say something about what being ecocentric might do to a writer's process and creative choices?

MT: I'm not sure I buy Barry's dichotomy, interesting though it is. What I do in both the 'untouched' terrain and the 'cultivated' – say, in a poem set here in the tame old Southern Highlands and in my prose book The Blue Plateau (UQP, forthcoming 2009), where I deal with bigger, wilder and more sublime country (the Blue Mountains of NSW) – is attempt witness. Something actually quite intimate. So I'd say it's about lyric apprehension: putting yourself about to listen to country and to participate in it, through your work, as a dancer participates in a dance. In nature writing, one way or another, you try to let nature write. Speaking for myself, I feel for wildness wherever and with whoever I am. I try, in other words, always to remember the world, which came first (as I say in that poem), and let it into my words.

I've written a whole book – The Land's Wild Music (Trinity Univ. Press: 2005) – that answers your question, as I recall it. In that book, a meditation on what I call 'the exteriority of the very indoor experience of writing authentic witnesses of place', I emphasise the rhythmic, bodily element of the writing process – the dance, not always pretty, with words, the movement of fingers on a keyboard – and how vital those elements, often overlooked by writers steeped in narrative, are for recalling the rhythmic, musical dimensions of landscapes. You can write a narrative if you like, or you can write a meditative lyric, but if you keep writing to the rhythm you felt in the place, you're likely to keep alive the lyric of the country, and in this way invite the country to participate in the writing.

KR: It strikes me as interesting, though, that we talk and write about going out to be 'with nature', as though nature were 'out there' and human being distinct from it, entering and leaving at will. Maybe opposing nature and human existence, if that's what the pastoral does, was never amenable to the Australian landscape. Do you think the pastoral can ever escape being an imported mode here?

MT: Oh, it's way too early to give up on the Australian pastoral. We haven't listened hard enough yet. If I didn't think it was possible to catch the lyrics of Australian places in English prose and prosody, I wouldn't keep writing. Specifically, I wouldn't have written The Blue Plateau, which, interestingly, is being subtitled (not my idea, but I quite like it) 'An Australian Pastoral' in the United States. But I have no doubt my confidence is misplaced, and I know I'll fail. The country will always elude the book, or the dance or the song. Most things will – one's self, one's great loves – but most of all the country around you that is so much older and longer and less verbal than you are. One can try, though, and one should.

But the pastoral doesn't oppose nature and human nature; it notices that in much of our social, economic and even spiritual thinking, we have fallen out of, and with, nature. Not that in reality a split is possible: we are organisms, whether we like it or not; we are natural first and last, and cultural only in the middle. The exquisite challenge we face in Australia is eroding English – the tongue in which our dominant culture plays – to let it sing the way the plateau sings, or the desert or the high country or the harbour or the beach or the narrow lanes of Enmore. (It would be different if we were writing in a language like any of the Indigenous languages, which evolved on this continent, with the continent itself and its peoples.) All we have is a language imported fairly recently to a landscape that spent a long, long time becoming itself without ever hearing a Chaucerian or a Shakespearean, a Keatsian or a Wordsworthian syllable.

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Ali Alizadeh Reviews Philip Mead

Networked Language: Culture & History in Australian Poetry by Philip Mead
Australian Scholarly Publishing, 2008

Once every decade, it seems, a scholar succeeds in writing an all-encompassing account of the practice and development of poetry in modern Australia. The 1980s saw Andrew Taylor's Reading Australian Poetry; and in the 1990s we had Paul Kane's Australian Poetry: Romanticism and Negativity. Now, Philip Mead, senior lecturer at the University of Tasmania's School of English, Journalism and European Languages, has provided what is perhaps the most ambitious and provocative overview of the agonistic and at times conflicting discourses of Australian poetry in the 20th century.

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Vale Dorothy Porter

Detail from cover image for Dorothy Porter's Little Hoodlum (1975)

I thought 'Well, fuck everybody' and wrote the book I wanted to write.

The second-last day of winter in 1997 seems so far away now, but today I remember it clearly. After her captivating late afternoon reading, Dorothy Porter and I found a corner in the dining room at the Varuna Writers' Centre, Katoomba, the daylight waning outside amidst steely dampness and the trickling departure of friends.

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GDS 27 Spoken Word Feature!

Splits, conflicts and difference within poetry are the zones in which the forward-thinking aspects of spoken word recordings continue to dwell. Sometimes, spoken word is an achievement that challenges our preconceptions of what poetry is, and what it can be.

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Pastoral Editorial

When we began throwing around ideas for this issue, the notion of 'Pastoral' first came up as a joke. Because ever since god knows when, for reasons that always seem to depend on one's thoughts regarding the generation of '68, Australian pastoral poetry has often been affiliated with the hackneyed, with the excessively sentimental, and with the sweeping visions of European imperialism.

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Dove Cottage

Wm turned in the night again
digging his heels into my hasty pudding.
(Dove Cottage Maxim 13:
You can never have too much oatmeal.)
Our first weeks here we made maxims – late into the night.
I use 'we' loosely, of course,
Although I did proffer some choice morsels
Dove Cottage Maxim 14 [rejected]:
You can never have too much laudanum.
Wm's recall of M Wollstonecraft selective, as usual.
Dove Cottage Maxim 7:
Never confuse theory and practice.
DCM 8:
Never confuse poetry with reality.
Earlier in the evening we had braved a brisk wind
To go lie in a ditch covered with twigs.
I thought it was pretty lame at first
But after the first couple of hours I got into the swing of it.
There are many ways to induce hallucinations
But lying in a ditch covered in twigs was a new one for me.
I'm still pissed, though, that we never get to play the games
I want to play.

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Back to the Farm

Eight headed hills sway
to the mad saddle laughing.
Kiss from stray strings,
hooked to the hum
of the porch.
Knees and ears,
fresh breath feathers,
four legged tears.
Owls spitting fire,
bathing spinach fence pies.

Tell me when it's time.
Tell me how to leave.

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Round Up. Make Nice

Shuffle and stop.
Dust to the sun, shakes, lusts for the moon,
grinning, takes off.
Boy watches closely, mad eyes wide,
and sharp and tongue

Boots move at a rumble of white,
holding hands with proud thumb prince
under nowhere waltz panic.
Grind their teeth,
Loose their feet and
Shout.

Slow lace choir smoke oils.
The machines that blur
day and night
swing almighty heavy orange hands.

Light of heart friends trade
damaged rope,
throw scotch bottle bookends.
Tireless light bulbs,
painted glue stories.

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Paddocks

Looking out across paddocks I fall
silent. Here is the expanse I wanted
inside myself. I am looking forward
to an unbroken horizon the sun

has disappeared behind. Say, I try
to fly there, opening and closing
a little wingspan of speech, wind-
blown pages from a broken spine.

I try
to fly there, opening and closing
a little wingspan of speech, wind-
blown pages from a broken spine.

Say, I try to say
my first name backwards.
Or call Now by the name Then,
and it does not come.

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Variations in the Pupils

Say it is a pink deceit, the dawn sky,
a trick of light and atmosphere
shaped in the eye. The outlook varies

depending on whose eye we look through.
Yet for every eye it is true enough,
trawling over peculiar surfaces

until the landscape is commonplace,
bathed in a hot haze that plays
at the edges, until objects swim

on the road, in drought.
The bones know a heavy rain
will soon fall.

Say it is a grey illusion, that soon
the clouds will be bruised purple
and we will turn in our candlelit smallness

to our haphazard guesswork,
counting the seconds
between lightning and thunder.

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On Reading ‘Learning Human’

This blunt nosed wombat, greedy mega-faun,
transforms obstacles to sustenance, chews
his way through your front door, your doormat
on his back. Rudely, he celebrates
daggy mud gloves, or parades in pleated rain,
a stray feather stuck to one ear. He can
even whistle his way inside a mechanical warbler.

On boiling cloud days the whole landscape is
his change of clothes. To gloss the painful
rift between the self and not, what's truly
seen is mouthed, tongued, brightened with
the spittle of a word. More, he fumbles
into its sleeves; leaks soul stuff, as only
those for whom the flesh is also raiment can.

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Lamentation

o murray o murray
break (bending)
the forgiveness of things

what you (air and water)
what you (bread)
the place you lie down

threads of the sheet that covers
as if given for our breath
drinking (food in us)

here this night's morning
things burn out past giving
(too tired to forgive)

the murray the murray
heavy metal of retreat
a bellow to set the flesh on

edge a leaching (some things
need to be held back)
the sediment lift

ash of excess
seep spoil bone and flesh
the invisible density

of dissolution the silent lamentation
of a drowning fish
the o of loss

o murray o murray
a gull and a swan
from different vantage

one skimming squawking
one all dip and glide
and underwater webbed motor

bogged by
drinking food in you
(given

for our breath)
spoils bone and flesh
drowning the word in you

the murray the murray
in the beak of a gull
threads cotton and rice

too tired to forgive
and sea (does it know)
bends and breaks

ready to admit
the heavy (lifted) metal
o murray o murray

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Post-colonial?

All that is white in us in not pure nor
(but driven to the breath of) snow that falls
when the day turns cold. Our wanting all
belonging (in this place), is even more

the colon's gesture: already who bore
too much the saying of what we have called
selves (the being here of us) a creek a wall
(the snows melting) the water over. Or,

tomorrow you find us building a hut
of limbs and thatch, stripped gum, old bark, fragrant
litter of leaves, the floor dry and crawling.

Tomorrow you find us building a falling,
the odour of crushed ants, the living urgent,
assessing loss (a lean-to, its skin shut?)

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Overlander Ode

If May were to call a spade
a spade, would Spade hover
over tenets and terms, flatten

freesias, ferns, friction, fiction,
to strike stretches of Pater-
son's Curse or Salvation Jane

and kangaroo-paw terrains, so
burying the bloom labour and
language could claim and cover?

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practical project

III

sweet Persephone knocking on the ceiling
love your meads and love your flowers
should they be at the door
with my sheep and dogs round white boulders
chancing upon
ivy and impatiens
while flakes bind the ankles
of your sovereign sleep
dragging me towards the top of this building
 
 

II

you hear names they never knew
ivy and impatiens
yet can't remember
snow tiptoes on the valleys
blanket upon blanket
lost and found between satellite dishes
red centaurs take their time
indifferently repeated
while your alkaline soul turns over
a fragmentary signal
in the world of small changes

 
 

I

kneel for no cause
smile with no purpose
endless supply of grandmothers waving
petals and ties
the passport i forgot
dial hold step aside
and kiss on a grass-green pillow
the music will start in a minute
a window to a house with a door from the summer room
ivy and impatiens
with burnished clay riesling bells
there is almost always a slope however slight
a window
looking down to
blind whispers of
two fences clothes pegs guests in yellow and blue
above the silky dreams of insectivores

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Shift

the same drought part of the australian bush as yesterday only waking to a flash flood

water sliding the balding hill and shifting my inner landscape to a kind of environmentally aware comfort zone the top soil gone I am challenged to build something reverent look my family over for similar signs but it's hard to tell the rain gauge is the centre of attention walk on water or drown –

the plan for the tower is almost real enough

to put down on paper

there'll be soft places to dig the footings

a greening before a ripe moon

enough blood

to set the first stone in place

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