Exploding Head Manifesto

0. a television soap opera and someone getting mugged

you know the tropes already: a guy in leather and a bandana and a too clean t-shirt and a bit too pretty and a knife on the screen of your tv set above the dvd player if you still have one next to the flowers next to the mantelpiece the graduation photos and the babies the coffee table with the local paper whereas

1. when I was a teenager I was asleep

and someone fired a gun next to my head

2. You’re having sex (that person you’re really into from the coffee shop) in the forest under a waterfall like an advert for tropical holidays and then a door opens in the waterfall a wooden door and there’s a doorframe and letterbox and a doorbell and a man is there ringing the doorbell and then you wake up and the doorbell is ringing in real life the world is full of men from Porlock

dreams are fussy about tying outer reality in with the narrative and they don’t care so much for logic they’re literalists but they’re anti-Vulcans

3. I opened my eyes and there was no-one there and when I went downstairs where the others were round the kitchen table they claimed to not have heard anything let alone a gunshot so it must have been a “nightmare” but there was no narrative, no dream at all

4. so it was less a nightmare more a gunshot in the night which nobody else heard well you put it down to just one of those things and when it happens again — and again — over the course of the years you put it down to one of those again and again things until you read about Exploding Head Syndrome aka loud noises in your mind when you are falling asleep or just waking up which must be what’s going on with me except it happens when I’m deep asleep and not dreaming

5. on a message board I read about a guy who heard a single bell a mournful condemnatory bell at moments of peak stress but for him it’s when he’s awake

6. I get tinnitus sometimes I’m a water sign I’ve had uber-vivid dreams but not lucid ones I’ve had premonition dreams too I get a bit itchy when people describe themselves as sceptics but it’s just code for being on one team, not being stuck genuinely in the middle, which is Fortean I guess, I guess I’m a Fortean. The problem with Exploding Head Syndrome is nobody really knows what causes it so I’m just throwing out things which might be relevant to a researcher one day and they’ll find this on a Google search and something I say might solve the puzzle once and for all the only bone I’ve broken so far was in my toe when I accidentally ran into a door when you accidentally run into a door people tend to talk to you in a gentle voice and they write to your psychiatrist or they did in my case

7. I was mugged for real three hours ago in real life shit I was so scared — that’s what a vivid dream is like filed away in your consciousness as actuality rather than safely stored as just a dream which on waking becomes distanced like watching a television soap opera and someone getting mugged

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Rat Chow

Reconstituted from selected chunks of John Ashbery’s Flow Chart

“… the top
of the volcano has been successfully glued back on, and who is to say we
aren’t invited?” — Flow Chart, p. 167

1.
The incubus awoke from a long, refreshing sleep.
I suppose it does congeal slowly. And the river
threaded its way as best it could, neither conscious
nor uncaring
, awash with sentiments in which
the Almighty once saw Himself,
and wept
.
Quick—the medication.
And while the fire-mind tries out its images on us
at some charm school in hell, and we can’t avoid
our reflection in these, come speak with me behind
the screen. I’ve been at this stand for years,
a thread of breath: that’s all
almost magical now, almost beyond belief. Just so,
some argue, nothing further remains to be done except
the higher echelons where the view is distant.
Not that I think for a moment …

2.
Here a man carries bags, I ask you. Ask, rather, why the clock
slows down. Smell it yourself he said my gosh. A dream from nowhere
mumbling the litany, unaware that the parallel daintiness
of the lives of the rich mentioned in the Bible
worked, like fish in an ocean
whose bottom is dotted
. Now both of us were attracted.
Tomorrow beckoned, and today would soon be then.
Hours,
years later, we were divided up among several participants,
and all that mythology of broken tracks, who make up
the electorate? Each day the ball was in its court. “You’re a grown
man now, but must sit in a tub, on a comfortable income and a few
puddles of camel-stale, jotting down seemingly unrelated
random characteristics.” Leave me here,
if that’s going to help. Always on the rim of some fleshpot,
if he is willing to exchange me for a hostage.

3.
In the real world
one is always setting out from, having in the meantime forgotten
this battle of stupid titans, things keep arriving from the florist’s.
And I in greater depths than he,” I suppose, know enough
not to insist, to keep sifting a mountain of detritus

like a shuttle. Something else, it says here,
will break fruitfully into oblivion. Another time I was just sitting,
universally misconstrued
in one’s lap, like a sandwich.
The ads didn’t tell you this. You see it is part of your plan,
to realise that sex has very little to do with any of it,
what’s coming, but that doesn’t mean I don’t have to like it.
I am prepared now for the drone that submerges
and always turns out to be rather nice.
We must be patient if we are to live that far, deposited
over there, not out of sight.

4.
I wanted to cry back at her: “Yes!
I feel their aura, Mother,
it shall fall into our hands and seem what
disingenuous? Maybe
only a small, other way of living
as one. And when a shining thing approaches,
symmetry is death. Try sleeping on it. And then
we’d have a nice
lumbering, tumbrel-like
progress across edifices.
Any day now you must
start something in the sky. And we’re supposed to get on
with
the logic these lines always left space for,
the grotty little amusement park one is
horrified at the prospect
of being immured in: mud and cosmetics.
Different forms of address. This stable or retiring room
or whatever you want to call it. You can feel it when the lake is up:
he’s ready to talk business. Yet one’s ego, for a time at least,
must be drugged or convinced with seabirds’ feathers,
and a smart-looking interior
. Meanwhile I have
received your postcard. It likes me the way I am,
baling others of us together like straw, for the speed
of light is far away
, and whatever is not glue
may be pressed into service as such.”
A kettle boiled happily.

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Legitimate Fragment

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Magenta

Every single one of the rest had been violated.
We pressed ourselves against hide,
we pressed ourselves onto a yak wool throw.
I saw my ice capsule

float in the drained blue way above
and there was nothing for it.
Outside gravel chippings being swept
along a gouged track,
tar for subsumption
moiled in boilers
curtained in tar,
overflowed,
outside overflowed, hardening at the fringes
yellow sky seeped into, canopied
and hardened.
All or nothing, that was the sum,
steps faltered even though
isolated stars signal to be tacked up –
though underpinned by webs of
projections, as you were,
fall back, that’s your lot, surely is.
O split stopper always were my fallback,
all or nothing,
O split blind trunk fall back,
only to be cancelled or electromagnetic
pulse corrugating time dismantles sunders
pulse. Noli me tangere.
Just remove that mark
in a twinkling/ in a flash/
fields of power will be unconscionable
shrivelled tremor.
Every syllable has been marked
one and by one/
seeded with a confident up-yours
despotic idiom spills over.
Fall back to blockage.
Beyond the tufted field meteorites shower.
On the field rabbit shit.
Inside our tent air thickens now we huddle.
Our escape capsules long departed.
Geospatial analysts have their fix on us.

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High Tide

tide memory trains
down
the beach the sea chops
& eats itself
rocks doze
in purple sets of allthepossible
opens

the path back home’s washed over

the arabesques cooling
into space
on another turn it’s smooth as linen
a bed for the pelican a tomb
for each dream skewered
on the palms
their reptilian thrash

until the waves
go pelagic, growls
spliced with lanterns
from blackestdeep will they
find those naked feet
seduce their nerves the future

rests on the hairs of my neck
frizzing like dune
tuft
inept balloon
mountainous
earth what speaks is what moves
form
& cry
shy from a sloshing
the literature in flakes
& it emerges
frothed
gill of whose

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6-word stories (50 of them)

1. BBQ: Zero separation, bed being the body.
2. Title, to Come: Music, alive, a fruit of fingers.
3. Each and Every Morning, Electronic Cleansing: Click. Click. Click. No emails coming.
4. Eight for Six, Reduction: No agitation. Peace and quiet, please.
5. Mulberry Fields Now: People mountain. People sea. Haze, too.
6. They are Here to Clean It Up Again: Man plays sex during brain surgery.
7. A Ship is Singing in the Air: Publish him when dead, for free.
8. 6-word Stories Ought to Have Titles: Thinking someone else’s thoughts: mind surfing.
9. Happiness: To be unemployed, to be Australian.
10. That Chink Poet, Possibly: In 200 years, but not now.
11. Excerpt from a Foreword to a New Book in His Ancestral Land: Australia now home;
China: a non-home.
12. Missing You: Old rain. New arrival. A heartthrob.
13. History: Terribly wrong, something went terribly right.
14. A Cosmetic Future: Sky, injected with botox. Looking better.
15. Development a Hard Reason: Everything’s bigger in a haze, China-made.
16. A Secret Shared is: Freedom: a bullet force-bought to kill.
17. Always Excuses: US-made mistakes: innocents killed en masse.
18. A PhD Proposal: History of anger: Herstory of d/anger.
19. White and Fleshy: T. Te. Tea. Tear. Teary. T/ear/y.
20. Postmodern Ways: Love you so: credit cards please!
21. Futures: Heaven: a vast balance sheet. Missing.
22. Posthumously Published: Cigarette-butts, joined with a writer butt.
23. Post-disappearance Theory: An MH370 love, still to surface.
24. Mind to Map: Theories of deconstruction, and of destruction.
25. The Limit: Beyond sky. Beyond yuniverse. Beyond beyond.
26. According to a 90-year Old: Recipe 4 longevity: Eat less than thought.
27. Rain is a Birdless Affair: Dream in company; vacated by Dreamer.
28. Time to Depart to a Parallel Planet: Poetry is nothing but rubbish, transformed.
29. Once Were Lotus Feet: Shanghigh-heels. Shanghai eels. Hanging separately. De-sexed.
30. Art as Death: Boundary-crossed, living the death, as animals.
31. ‘His aim was dark to her.’
32. ‘We speak English in this country!’
33. Not lonely wolf; lonely orchid, thought-wise.
34. Serial monogamist; serial lovist; serial thinker.
35. Victorian middle-class, Australian middle-class. Little difference.
36. ‘The only retreat was her bedroom.’
37. People do and the skies watch.
38. Warning to men: she withdraws love.
39. The sky-mirror: reflecting a human haze.
40. Men-editors in China: Sex for publication.
41. National Teachers Day for national indifference.
42. Officials? No. A poet hates it.
43. Love: how much does it weigh?
44. In the eyes of Japan: Nanjing.
45. China of fake blondes: like West.
46. A restaurant toilet, of shat food.
47. Get to the truth. Say little.
48. Books translate into 书, that’s 输.
49. Like West, like China, vice versa.
50. Magazines of bullet holes. Word bullets.

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The Doomsday Song

(FOR FRIEDRICH NIETZSCHE — UPON THE DEATH OF SUPERMAN)

[PLAY ME]
[audio:https://cordite.org.au/audio/the-doomsday-song-bok.mp3|titles= The Doomsday Song] (0:55)


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Song not for you

after ‘Das Lied des Zwerges’ (The song of the dwarf), Rainer Maria Rilke


Crooked blood, stunted hands, cripple,
out of place – uncanny how small
thoughts can be, while I’m incomparable,
only a dwarf because the so-called average
person is taller. You ought
to just walk on by, but don’t. Ever thought
how inflated you must look from this

height? When I walk or shop, I’m inspiring,
it seems. Fantastic to see you getting
out
, you say, imagining waking
up in my body, the courage
you’d need not to kill yourself, stat.
How do you do live with that?
That’s me wondering back,
distractedly eating (wow!) a sandwich.

In my home, I’ve made it so I come
face to face with the cupboards and oven, belonging
as we all want it. I sleep in my bed (some-
times alone). At work, my cubicle’s longer
and wider than yours. True,
this isn’t much of a song –
but then it never was meant for you.

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from sonnet(s)

desire
rose
by
memory
contracted
with
a
sweet
thou
the
content
in
this
grave

called
so
those
poor
pictures
flow
our
bones
desperate
with
charms
and
past
death

rich
thriving
and
a
heaven
told
some
take
birth
accordingly
and
mirth
of
suit

consider
days
to
soul
serve
returning
light
patience
that
man’s
yoke
is
without
wait

thou
the
radiant
and
the
curtains
that
let
silence
wash
the
glares
of
influence

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What lies broken

after Dorianne Laux

This shard of Pangea’s shattered plate.
Long nights by the inkling of day.
Our front door’s rusted bell.
Tonic with the spike of gin.

Promises, innocence, childhood faith.
That mirror, my bright luck
splintered to slivers.
The pure road by the slashed white line.

Our world, threads unravelling
from its moth-holed weave.
My ribs and bicycle in the same second.
My laugh for weeks after.

Time into months, then minutes.
This sunset by winter clouds.
Your trust, dropped from my hands
like a china cup.

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Call Them Proof

Nature rides three horses at once
Thinking, self-pleasing, and running

We take on faith
Call them relics

Long-shot miniature ship at sea
Getting under way

Its own spooky distance
Replicated

Close-up shot
Deck of ship at dawn

Medium shot
Madison Avenue at night

Full-shot Empire State Building at dawn
People today have so much to fear

Silent inflammation
Acts like waves

How this weird thing can be true
Exterior sky and city at dawn

Medium-shot 1st airplane
Medium-shot 2nd airplane

Faith like any other
Next day science

Believer and heathen
Sentences till dawn

Put your hand on their hand
Explain the movement

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Misunderstanding

A kind of lust forces us back
:the sky, the city, all a misunderstanding. See how pale it is
a different place each time, familiar yes but rearranged
as fear.
The ride under our bodies kicks along. You are
no longer: disfigured in all the figuring and transfiguring.
Mile upon mile of the wrong beer,
the wrong wine. It is all so heady!

The handsome young arrive
to rescue us and spruik God and the value of Business School.

Is it any wonder our filtering organs choose this moment
to opt out with painkillers and ice-packs.
Face and eyes drift into bottles, arrange themselves on a shelf
to observe this latest attempt to represent the dark-star
of Empire in texta pen.

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VAGUS NERVE

like a star
who snuffs out
its own path
like a tsar
who wears a
many-beaméd trinket on his chest
like a target for a
Taser or a laser
-guided stent
quasaring throb that knocks
the breast
of the
ocean-going
vessel
fist-sized wren or
cardiac event
vein choked
with the plush that coats
the stag’s rack
stoked gland or glitch
pumping out error
in the constellation Lyra
the second-most glamorous star
the second to be daguerreotyped
and assassinated
stepping out of its car
galactic halflife
neural
leap
no wider than a
a single
bacterium
weak heir
‘s hairline
who chokes up at the opera
eyes glued to his lorgnette ting ting in the
operating theater where the gods all
cluster at the trompe l’oeil
dome and suppose an
even more monstrous eye
looks back
who can swallow the view whole a pupil
who can take the whole thing down
on his knees in the backroom on his back in the sacristy
and
vomit it back up
on the bar on the altar
on the street
outside the viper room
who
chokes on the skein
unwinding from his
bolt like a colt’s mane
extravagance, consciousness,
prize sheep that can bleat
through its cut throat
pleat
that can spread
like blood on the waves and
fetch a price that makes the wind rise
and hurl fleets at the future
nerves pinch at the side and
hold the garment up in rictus
grin and say alive
whatever’s too much is the
price
like a dog returns to its vomit
to appraise it once again
and cart it off
for a price
and the neck
of that doggy star
can bend

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Ruoy Ycnellecxe

Ruoy Ycnellecxe, Si ti Laitram Wal?

Ro na elbattegrofnu nossel?

Ruoy Ycnellecxe, Erehw si Nuhc Ood-Nawh?   Ruoy Ycnellecxe, Era uoy evila?

Si Nuhc evila?

Laturb Noitan!  Era uoy evila?

ㄱ—ㅏ—ㄱ— ㅎ—ㅏ—ㄱ—ㅖ—ㅇ—ㅓ—ㅁ—ㄹ—ㅕ—ㅇ— ㅇ—ㅣ
—ㅂ—ㄴ—ㅣ—ㄲ—ㅏ
?


The photo is from 518기자클럽. This site contains photos taken by several South Korean journalists during
the 18 May Gwangju Uprising in 1980.


The Gwangju Uprising also known as the May 18 Democratic Uprising took place in
Gwangju, South Korea, May 18 – 27, 1980. Students and civilians rose against the
martial law and military coup of 1980. With the tacit consent of the U.S., the
South Korean martial law troops brutally assaulted and opened fire at civilians
of Gwangju. According to the UNESCO’s archives on May 18, during the uprising,
165 died, 76 went missing, 3383 were injured, and 1476 were arrested. And another
102 died due to injuries after the uprising. The May 18 Democratic Uprising played
a crucial role in building a populist movement against the dictatorship through the 1980s.
It continues to inspire resistance against political, social, and economic injustice.

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In-roads

Strange temples vie their architects.
Outside in the territory of birds
a carpenter is constructing a roof
as if today, tomorrow, legs might
escape into wings. We nest,
we break open, we give birth
to what we feed. In the compost,
molecules, imperishable atoms,
old lives razed and bodilessly
rephrased by an Earth that rejects
nothing. This year a wild sweetness
is growing my garden, self-sowns
ripening so vibrantly there’s a chance
for storage. The egg in my hand
is also ripe. It trembles like a
seismograph. Whether to breach
the shell. Which way the cracks
would run, which way the blood.

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Listening

Rain falls on the tin roof
I sit in the cold with a cigarette
Your voice calls as if from the green mountains
Your guitar plays
plucking notes from your homeland
though it is the heat of Manus Island that caresses your skin.
You sing my love
You sing your freedom
Your longing
A gift for me
I am alone listening
to your song
trilling against the wash of the Pacific Ocean.
Your guitar strums the triumph of a freedom yet to come
Your voice sings as a bird rising from the earth
I can do nothing but blaze in the beauty of this
In the beauty of your unlikely music.
Your song
plucked from a cage
bursts over the oceans
arriving like rain on a tin roof.

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24.

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Popping Candy by the Kerb

This suburb is getting crowded.
Trying to Pokémon Go with a Baudelaire avatar
and running into the usual night terrors.
Replaced footpaths, replaced neighbours,
discovering how to accessorise with greys.
Can we have a plebiscite vote
over the return of moon boots, fingerless gloves,
an end to food insecurity? My android
doesn’t recognise you or register
the small red monster hiding behind you.
Areas with leaves that fly up, not down,
are more likely to spawn the wild;
my water-type is nowhere near your grass-type.
Maybe it’s just a lack of chemistry.
I try to entice you to stay
but razz berries or a second life beret
just don’t seem to cut it anymore.
No lure module here but the pink petals
refresh. Tap, power up,
ignite your Great Ball. It’s all about the spin.
How to evolve from Shelley to Biebs,
aim for that 100-point Experience point,
sublimity’s swipe, the continual longing
to spend stardust, just to reach
those higher all-round stats.

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46.

the other day my friend was in the air she was flying to istanbul the morning of those bombs.

scorched horror for a sec then thanks to fb found out her plane had turned round in time dropped her off at changi. so thankful, blessings, she’d be ok but that dread moved in like

guess death has been stalled for another day. like

happy she’s safe between rails of dark glass and carpet taut

for now. i thought

about the flat pack where thankfully they did not lay her down and how performative or not performative my grief might have been. she does everything right yet there it is the carnal the pink danger of being in between

remember when it hit that fruit is an ovary out the window the pomelo tree

bloated and

they’re not much of a fruit but god that tree. you were already twenty four so not very bright but to be fair you hated listening you

knew in it your body like that is that is a real possibility that is a real possibility you

hear the female voice neutral accent neutral dialect announce one landing another leaving not yours but you listen now

So they dropped my friend at changi where the beers aren’t cheap but it’s 2016 bitches don’t get loaded sweat it at the fitness lounge feel

the tendons’ ends grip you upright listen to the string still itself and waiting don’t

stop the lounge the earlier you start the more you will shed

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Introduction to Kris Hemensley’s Your Scratch Entourage


Cover design by Alissa Dinallo, Illustration by Lily Mae Martin

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How can one write words about a poet? Last year, Kris Hemensley and I considered Émile Chartier (Alain)’s assertion that ‘men are afraid to complete their thoughts’, on our way to visit Greta Berlin, whom I had first met in Zennor as a small child and whose father, Sven Berlin, had enthralled a young Kris Hemensley in 1963 with the accoutrements of the artist and his first taste of red wine. And down by the harbour in Weymouth, we had already discovered a shared admiration for W S Graham. A framework was emerging.

Hemensley reads his poetry in a warm accent of old Hampshire and more recent Dorset overlaid with Melbourne, unconsciously abstracting his past. The words are uttered to hang as sudden realities on the air. There is an easy intimacy and a careful measure in this, for Hemensley has clearly not rushed the words he has chosen to engage us, and they have come to know their places well. One hears though that the ghost is never far below the surface, as he will break off occasionally to compose himself, his throat constricted by emotion. Apart from a chapbook or two and a CD, it is thirty years since Hemensley’s last collection was published, and one senses that only the combined weight of these new works can have brought them onto the page.

These poems relate to people in their places, and are inevitably auto-biographical, as all art is. They take us into deeply personal territory: the territory of sons and fathers, brothers and lovers; into the territory of war and its enduring shadows. The chapters are stakes embedded in the ground to mark what needed to be acknowledged. This is not a harvest of words but a mapping of fields, and paths, from impressions distilled through memory and reference to lexical imagery, ‘there where the sun catches your shoulder’. In journeys and perspective, nature is drawn as domains not only of sentiment and matter, but also presence and conviction.

Hemensley’s choice of language, form and punctuation is fluid. If fourteen lines are the right vehicle, then good. If an opening parenthesis is required, its complement may not be. Elsewhere running prose sits comfortably in the body of the work. And his characteristic use of the twelve-syllable line is there for the careful reader. Hemensley clearly feels a kinship with other poets, and the trusted place he grants them here has the character of homage. One must recognise that these people have been chosen: chosen by our senses. When Graham told me where the words came from, I did not expect to encounter the same source again. One must recognise that these people have been chosen by our need. The poet is the last artist, using our finest tools to assert that we are not lost, always reaching out to limn that which can only be ‘elicited by the living’.

We are afraid of our thoughts because they lay us bare, and that is how the poet stands, the ‘human witness’ making his or her statement. Hemensley dares to have a conversation with language, and language reveals the nature of what it is to be human. But how else can we complete our thoughts? We choose our brushes, we make our mark, foolish people judge us.

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Introduction to Chris Mann’s Whistlin Is Did


Cover design by Alissa Dinallo, Illustration by Lily Mae Martin

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Chris Mann read at Melbourne’s La Mama in the early 1970s, where he first impressed me as a bold exponent of a sort of critical, larrikin and compositional linguistics, and seemed very much at home in the theatre’s performance space, with its nascent egalitarian ethos. Some listeners I noticed may have been equally perplexed as intrigued by his well-timed delivery, his knowingly artful shtick and highly patterned patter. But I found it immediately refreshing – strangely empowering and full of a polemical vitality – as he monkeyed around with very new and homegrown language possibilities.

Perhaps my mind and ears had already been primed by the 1960s ‘cut-up technique’ novels of William S Burroughs, and the more upbeat Indeterminacy, John Cage’s 1959 series of one-minute stories with electronic music. To boot, I was also half way through my first reading of James Joyce’s influential classic, Finnegan’s Wake.

Astoundingly, amid Mann’s speech gestures and tics, and his relentless reflection and commentary on the nature of language itself, there were familiar echoes of the argot of C J Dennis’s The Sentimental Bloke. Mann’s work, indeed, celebrated the deepest grains of broad Australian usage, including its vernacular and slangy idioms – rhythm, pitch, intonation, everything.

Mann has often observed that Australia has a long tradition of ‘making do’ – going back to the Depression, to rural scarcity, and further back to Koori culture. Having scarce resources always makes necessity the mother of invention, forcing you to find highly innovative solutions.

Mann’s seriously playful excursions into linguistic composition range easily across high and low culture. Some passages sound everyday, concrete and quotidian while others are as removed and abstracted as the random patter of raindrops on a windshield. Or, like the restless non-specialist polymath he is, Mann will suddenly swing in and out of diverse fields of learning and scholarship: linguistics, semantics, economics, politics, cultural theory, physics, information science, you name it; layering quickly sampled snippets of all of the above …

Mann moved to New York in the 1980s, where he quickly formed alliances with other renowned composers and theorists. This milieu has proved enabling, furthering Mann’s artful elaboration of polemical tirades; fast boundary crossings between competing modes of discourse; his ever- changing writerly dynamic of assertion and refutation and of numerous ways to usefully disclose and disrupt the creeping conformity behind automatically received patterns of thought.

Some Jewish scholars have observed how the Western classical tradition favours the clear arrival at a perceived unitary truth. In contrast, the Rabbinic way favours multi-voiced argument that does not rely on any one conclusion. Within this inclusive, pluralistic approach – in which minority opinions are preserved, and truth contained in contending voices – you can both argue with God and win!

This alternative tradition provokes tantalising possibilities; ones emerging from previously invisible cracks between apparent truths. Hold the glass up darkly to scrutiny, and see fault lines everywhere, glimpsed most clearly in the shards, particularly those riddled by economics. One may detect, ‘the cult of repetition and the technology of agreement’. Or critique the aggressively deterministic sideshows of consumer capitalism, where market research is a sort of ‘designer theft’ and ‘user-pays surveillance’.

Pieces in this book sometimes read like blips in a particle accelerator, flung into each other at lightning speed to see what deeper thought emerges among exciting cognitive flashes of collision and conjecture. Other pieces can seem more attentive to sounds rather than sense. ‘The Box’, for example, becomes as energetic as a bees’ dance, and rather than being concerned with meaning (that ‘pissy little concnpt’) they orchestrate the ubiquitous buzz of language, an endless slippage and play of phonemes into textures of vibrating sound.

Walk through any mall, and see and hear. We now live in a ‘sampling world’, in which sensory overload conspires with the digital revolution, with media old and new, and with modern economics, to shape all our waking moments into a stream of micro-grabs. Reality has increasingly become a zone of cut and splice. If our society is currently putting narrative through a digital mincer, then Mann, through his wonderfully idiosyncratic shorthand, helps to reveal both how and why this might be happening.

All the above speculations aside, however, readers will interpret Whistling Is Did however they like. This excellent sampler of Mann’s uniquely multi-resonant work is precisely calibrated to repay your attention. So enjoy its free-wheeling charter to confront and amaze.

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Phillip Hall Reviews Judith Wright, Georgina Arnott and Katie Noonan

Judith Wright: Collected Poems by Judith Wright
Fourth Estate, Harper Collins, 2016

The Unknown Judith Wright by Georgina Arnott
UWAP, 2016

With Love and Fury by Brodsky Quartet & Katie Noonan
Kin Music, 2016


When Judith Wright died in 2000, at the height of Prime Minister John Howard’s cultural hegemony, Veronica Brady was called upon to deliver a eulogy at the public memorial held in Canberra. This eloquent and impassioned speech was reprinted in a national newspaper under the headline, ‘Giant in a Land of Pygmies’. In her eulogy Brady would evoke the monumental loss of Wright but also the legacy that would continue to sustain those left behind: ‘[Wright] lived, she loved, she suffered, she thought, she dared and she spoke for so many of us who feel, at the moment, pretty much abandoned. She didn’t just lead the people here in Canberra across the bridge. I think she has led all of us. She has brought us to a pinnacle of feeling, a pinnacle of hope. I think she has given us energy and inspiration for the long haul.’

A few years earlier I had eagerly awaited, like so many other devotees of Australian poetry, the publication of Brady’s historic South of My Days: A Biography of Judith Wright. I have long admired this scrupulously researched and beautifully written, five hundred-page recount of the life of a generous and inspirational ‘giant who lived amongst pygmies’. Twelve months after Brady’s book we had Wright’s autobiography, Half a Lifetime, edited by Patricia Clarke. And a decade further on we would receive Fiona Capp’s lushly evocative My Blood’s Country: A Journey through the Landscapes that Inspired Judith Wright’s Poetry. So in 2015 when I heard about a new Wright biography I was excited, but also suspicious of the hype suggested in the proposed title: The Unknown Judith Wright. Georgina Arnott, however, is an exemplar historian. She not only delivers on the book’s marketing buildup, but judicially positions her own text not as replacement but as essential companion to the biographies that have come before.

Wright distrusted biography as an intrusion into her privacy. Like all of us, she expressed some views and performed some actions – especially in young adulthood – that she would have preferred, with the benefit of hindsight, to have kept hidden from public scrutiny. As Arnott says:

Judith’s life story offers particular intrigue because it suggests that conservative and conventional upbringings can sometimes produce the most radical of thinkers. This book might add that, by extension, in some cases at least, even the most radical thinkers do not necessarily ‘shed’ the conservative traces of their heritage.

Arnott knows that she would have been unable to ‘convince Judith of the value of biographical research or of [her] particular approach to her life’. Arnott maintains, though, that her approach is ‘unapologetically historical’ and that her portrayal of Wright’s first twenty-one years is a very different version of events from those ‘oft-repeated narratives recounted by others’. As well as presenting a more human figure of the young Judith Wright, with all its contradictions, Arnott reaches beyond her subject to the historical milieu that she occupied:

[Wright’s] life story reveals much about colonial race relations; the gulf between expectation and reality experienced by early European migrants; early attempts to develop a distinctly rural politics; the difficulties faced by women on isolated properties; and historical relations between the city and the country. The final five chapters, which centre on Judith’s time at the University of Sydney between 1934 and 1936, and the work she produced there, tell of the class and gender distinctions embedded in Australian tertiary education; of the birth of modern Australian cities; the rapid social transformation which took place in 1930s Sydney; the liberties this transformation afforded to young women; the origins of Australian historiography; and most forcefully, the birth of modern Australian poetry – a birth largely brought about by this woman.

Arnott reveals that the Wright forebears were more involved in the act of dispossession – and of First Nations massacre – than Judith Wright implies in Generations of Men (1959). She also shows how Wright tries to make amends for this by writing Cry for the Dead (1981), but while this book does not shy away from the horrors of colonialism, it still does not forensically examine her family’s role in these events. Wright continues to influence the approach taken by biographers like Brady in retelling this family history by perpetuating the mythology that the Wrights won their prosperity against the odds by hard work. Wright also continues to portray her forebears as ‘moderate, careful and cautious’, especially in their relations with First Nations; but, writes Arnott, this portrayal defies the evidence.

Arnott argues that Wright’s time at Sydney University has not been recognised as the crucially formative time that it was. It was there that Wright came to maturity as the ‘quintessential modern woman’ – confidant, teasing, eager to fit in – but also reflective of her conservative New England values. It was at this time that she would encounter many of the ideas that she would develop in The Moving Image (1946) and Woman to Man (1949). And, a decade before her first two celebrated collections, her student poetry shows how important it was to her to evoke physical intimacy in words. As Arnott argues, Wright developed a poetic technique that:

worked to imply an innate, emotional and sexual connection between a woman’s body and the natural landscape. This alone was not new; what was distinctive was the bold assertion of a woman’s active subjectivity. These female bodies were not made purely receptive by comparisons with the land; they became alive, yearning, and even spoke their wishes. The poems of that first collection asserted a taboo subject: female desire.

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Review Short: Michele Seminara’s Engraft

Engraft by Michele Seminara
Island Books, 2016


In ‘Sky Burial’, a poem about ‘the secrets inside / that we shamefully hide’, Seminara offers a provocation: ‘So listen / why don’t we share them? / Cut our guts open / and air them?’ It is an invitation to confession, but the visceral imagery is also a confrontation, an insistence on exposure which characterises much of Engraft, Seminara’s debut collection of poetry. Indeed, Engraft is often focussed on conflict and opposition, on a brutal pulling away of surfaces to reveal – and at times, even revel in – pain, loss, and confusion. The consequence of such fierceness is a series of uncomfortable realities: the cruelty of love and birth; the violence of frustration; and the disappointing failures of self. In cutting open that which is hidden, and allowing ‘birds of carrion’ to feed on what is found there, Seminara constructs a hopeful, albeit macabre vision, in which ‘dark feelings’ might ‘transmute […] to food’. This suggestion of transformation and consumption (and even of transubstantiation) is gothic in nature, yet an apt metaphor for creativity; a kind of vampiric leeching. Certainly, in explicitly drawing on poets such as Shakespeare, Dickinson, Plath, Hughes, Bishop, and Lowell, as well as Kafka, Duras, Solzhenitsyn, and Joyce, Engraft is both polyphonic and parodic, including letters, prayers, homages, re-mixes, erasures, ekphrases, and found poems. The combination of so many modes and voices ought to be jarring, yet a synthesis is achieved in a repetition with difference that is as concerned with tradition as it is renewal.

Indeed, Engraft signifies a sequence of confrontations, including a contestation of history. Playing upon fairytale conventions and tropes, the body is ‘waiting / not to be kissed, but punctured / By the prick of a prying scientist’, exhumed from ‘earth’s wet memory’ to be entombed again ‘in glass and sold for obscene show’. There is again an evocation of metamorphosis and ingestion, of a body ‘devoured’ not only by a ‘potent pack of ancient wolves’, but also by a modern horde of viewers and consumers in an image of history and the self as object and spectacle. There is a sense of warning here, too – the voice of the Ice Age human advises, ‘what they may unleash they do not know’, a threat echoed in ‘All Dried Up’, in which an ‘old lady’ who waits ‘in this parched bed’ asserts a fiery prophecy of phoenix-like resurrection. The notion of revival, of the past re-animating, is also enacted in the re-formation of poems and narratives, such as Shakespeare’s Sonnet 15 in the eponymous ‘Engraft’, Hughes’ ‘The Rabbit Catcher’ in ‘Rabbit’, and the found poems sourced through the letters of Kafka, Joyce’s Ulysses, and Dickinson’s poetry. Through the re-creation of the words of others, there is a rich sense of new meaning and association, but also a caution against not trusting the self. In ‘Dear Ottla’, ‘The sentences literally crumble in my hands: / I see their insides and have to stop. / Only by listening to my innermost voice […] / can I survive’.

The literary allusions and adaptations in Engraft engage with the disquiet associated with reading and writing poetry, both in terms of performance and reception. Indeed, inasmuch as the collection is about grafting onto the works of others, it is also about anxieties of originality, and of being understood. In ‘poem by midnight’, Seminara’s poems are creatures sent out into the world to ‘disturb’, ‘unnerve’ and ‘observe’ the reader, sidling into ‘peripheral vision’ and slithering ‘in through / your too thin skin’. Writing poetry is figured masochistically as a constant vacillation between enslavement and pleasure. ‘Dear Ottla’, through Kafka, portrays the process as part torture, in which employment, noise and illness conspire against productivity. ‘Poetry’, however, offers an ecstatic vision of how ‘one word’ can ‘make your breath / draw in’, whilst ‘Dog’ presents a poet who is ‘Pulled forth by a line / of scent, my furtive soul craves / Closet verse –’

Such domestic frustrations are confronted vividly in ‘Mother’, in which marriage, motherhood, and love are not romanticized but reveal the violence and loss inherent in the most intimate of relationships. The conflicts here are both familiar and familial: a husband whose tongue is ‘foul’; the strain of a newborn daughter who ‘squalled for hours’. Childbirth and parenting are imaged as painful and depleting; a ‘suckling alien child’ leeches from its mother, the joy of growth tainted by the agony of being left behind, ‘still bound to suffer / your lot as mine’. Similarly, in ‘That house’, Seminara describes how ‘We’re the ones the neighbours / talk about/not to […] / it’s our truth erupting / spectacularly into the day’. These eruptions gather in intensity, the ‘heaving house’ a volatile space ‘tumid with the sickness of minds untempered’. In many ways, these are the striking failures of love, instances of the damage caused by neglect, loneliness, and misunderstanding. In ‘Zhuang Zhou Dreams In Pink’, a poem featuring a lollipop man who ‘leaks / over the edges of his stool’, Seminara questions: ‘How is it that we came to be locked / in these bodies, lives ossifying / into rings of fat, rigidity and suffering?’ Yet connecting with the other cautions of Engraft, there is an urge to resist the abyss, albeit with a cynicism that is as amusing as it is self-critical: ‘The doctor says my oestrogen is low. / She prescribes hormones to alter / the cruelty of my vision’.

There is something gratifying about the darkness of Engraft, with its attention to exposure, revealing sentiments and realities that are not cloying, but focused and analytical. In revealing the guts of things – of bodies, love, poetry and history – there is an investment in catharsis, too, as echoed by Kafka in ‘Dear Ottla’: he must attend to his ‘unfulfilled inner duties’, lest they grow ‘into a madness from which death seems a release’. Seminara’s vision may at times be cruel, but its starkness is also powerful and evocative, a refusal to avoid ‘life’s tremendous, bone-felt, incommunicable things’.

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Review Short: Antigone Kefala’s Fragments

Fragments by Antigone Kefala
Giramondo Publishing, 2016


When casting an eye back at Antigone Kefala’s oeuvre, one finds a poet of the surreal, who has delicately combined reality, folklore, and dream state. She has expressed the trauma of migration and diaspora in hallucinatory ways; she once merged the ache of an old country’s absence with the comfort of myth, and heightened the contrast with dream-like and often disturbing symbolism. Her first book in two decades is titled Fragments – fittingly, given Kefala’s documentation of the cut-up, kaleidoscopic existence of migrants.

Her innate strength is that no word is an afterthought. No line is solid and fixable. Instead, lines are exposed, as if unearthed from underground, to be raked through with questions. The opening poems are abrupt, and convey a tender wistfulness. In ‘The Voice’, she writes:

This return
the past attacking
unexpectedly 
in the familiar streets.

Kefala, the daughter of Romanian parents who lived first in Greece and then New Zealand and Australia, has reached a point where the unfamiliar has become the familiar. The past that she forged in this country – now a place of safety – preys upon her, and catches her unawares. She relates these pivotal moments of emotion with restraint – she holds back, whether for our sakes or for hers.

In ‘Photographs’ the speaker expresses ambivalence. Kefala reminds us that recalling the past is often a jarring experience. You long to drink from it, but it is also a poisonous craving. There is a daydream feel to these poems; they seem to drift into one another like clouds, presenting rather than commenting. In ‘Dreams’, however, there is the enticing Surrealist presence, albeit in a clipped form. The poet envisions a presence in a ‘long dress of silk’ with crystal teeth. Again, the past intervenes:

And then
we were in the old house
full of a silver light
As we came in
someone was plucking
at an aluminium sound

By the second stanza, the scenario has become fantastical, as the speaker and the vision walk on glass, below a ‘mass of naked crabs and chickens.’ Words are not to be taken at face value in Kefala’s work, and she questions the vision:

How come? I said
before we had clean water.
Your fear, she said
changing the place.

Kefala suggests that fear persists, no matter how well acquainted you are with death. She acknowledges the phobia of time that haunted her last collection. Having written of time as lead, time as stolen by others, time peeling things away, she now comes face to face with it, and the results are illuminating.

Part Two is infused with snippets of the natural world that are at once both peaceful and disturbing, hinting at her environmental conscience. There is a deep seeing, whether it is of the demise of ringbarked trees – ‘a scattered army, eerie ghosts/left there to face alone / the mornings and the nights’, or walking by a bay ‘in the apocalyptic sunset / that left / gold orange strands / on the dark waters.’

The book’s flickering impressions create a lulling effect. They provide a connected commentary on the beauty of a sudden moment. ‘Summer at Dervini’ is one such example. The brevity of each line-break emulates the ‘folding of the sea’, and evokes an air of seasonal haziness. The final image recalls the romanticism that Kefala weaves into much of her poetry:

At dusk
the fishing boats
massive dark stones
planted
in a field of moonstone.

These poems are intensely visual. If any readers have regrets about not savouring such moments, Kefala presents them with a neat blueprint.

In the third section one finds longer poems drawing out the intensity of a lifetime’s worth of grief and loss. ‘Anniversaries’ sees the poet reveal emotion in an unexpected gush, as she contemplates both the beauty and sadness of having lived and loved. In ‘On Loss’, she reveals a sharp appraisal of death:

This cut, this total
final cut
like a dead weight
that presses down.
Death needs no one
comes wrapped 
in self-sufficiency.

Much of the collection is concerned with her ageing generation. Those who ‘briefly forget the fatal prophecies,’ wait out their lives in hospitals and homes – ‘the same spent, white faces / under the discoloured high ceilings’ – and yet, they live, and live bravely. She touches upon their frailty in intimate detail, such as in ‘Birthday Party’, where she writes of a friend who has been transformed by the process of ageing:

She was waiting on the couch
very pale, white dusted
incredibly small now
folding inwardly
not coping with her glasses
that had grown
to a giant size.

The very act of these elderly friends gathered for a birthday party and noting each other’s fragility, ‘an exaggerated edge / to our caring’ is a defiant one, and the poem is a strong homage to their spirit.

Kefala’s characteristic fondness for myth is evident, as she writes of pilgrims who wait for a spiritual moment at a waterhole, and in ‘The Fatal Queen’, presents a nameless monarch, who ‘watched us from a dais’, a sort of eternal Medea:

She seemed suspended
above the cliffs…
impatient, inside her
all was set
for the last killing.

These are distilled poems, concentrated in essence. In one of the most captivating moments in the collection, ‘The Piano Tuner’, Kefala displays a candid wit. She writes of a passionless piano tuner:

Sounds were flat things to him
they did not give him vertigo
raise him above…
He would place them according
to some metal rule.
And I, who thought the trade
required perfect pitch.

T S Eliot writes in The Waste Land of ‘these fragments I have shored against my ruins’. This was a time when long-held values broke apart, ruining a generation who no longer believed in certainty. Eliot speaks of salvaging fragments from the debris, and such a process haunts Kefala’s new collection. She faces the disintegration of a life, but the fragments of her past and loved ones are elevated. The poems drift and offer no resolution, only the potent energy of articulation.

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