Somewhere in Patagonia

It surrounds me the vernacular, the buzz of your land,
when lights go on uptown, all hot and lovely.
We enter a vapour of enchantment, the mind forged,
all quarters pleasurable, becalmed; as though

when the lights go on uptown, all hot and lovely,
nightmares rush out, falling over themselves,
all quarters pleasurable, becalmed; as though
we never understand the lovely panic; how many times

nightmares rush out, falling over themselves,
where people are people, some alone, others together.
We never understand the lonely panic; how many times
in the dim light, we feel the knot, search the leftovers,

where people are people, some alone, others together
like spectral drops on the pavement.
In the dim light we feel the knot, search the leftovers:
a map of love, a deserted beach, a creel of stars.

Like spectral drops on a pavement,
stuck between strangers, your hands make treasure:
a map of love, a deserted beach, a creel of stars.
You mock instructions and forms to the point of celebration.

Stuck between strangers, your hands make treasure.
We enter a vapour of enchantment, the mind forged.
You mock instructions and forms to the point of celebration.
It surrounds me the vernacular, the buzz of your land.

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sue tameS MY BROTHER

sue tames my Brother for his media appearance
my Brother never appears on media as much of
what he knows is acquaintance-historic & accidental.
a good hero in black he never wears black at home
as home is a place was never the broken home
he wanted to come from; only the suits make him sweat
I came to understand his song the “ma ma ma ma ma
de ma ma ma el em land de ma ma ma ma mi madre dice que
la la la la la la sin un hogar negro nunca en Rocky costa nacimos
sumergido en el agua de los demás”
even though I did not speak « no hablo espanol » &
I can’t stand the thought of us growing cold together in Hobart
I never understood my brother’s need to push it push it
in the major key ’”cause I can’t stand no swelter”
we shared mulled breast milk in this swelter that
he mentions; together the chance to go swimming
before appearing on TV, on a stone sucking in salt water
we flee the heat by jumping in, without asking how many times
he has rhymed the reason I’m fleeing with the buzz of our “being”
by which I think he means the method in our
post-translation “up-brining” / sue tames my Brother
when I dive into the ocean as his song surrounds me
like total water and “get off me” but sue has ha tamed him
so he’s no longer rough-like

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I am more empty

Pregnancy test,
piggy bank
They bring the noise, and the day grows sturdy.

Don’t cook all your eggs in one biscuit.
You want to save it for some special occasion

Tongue stilled,
I walk through the city, plaiting up dreams.
ever the optimist,
i’m seeking resonance. The Z.

the mind circles its rotunda
twirling until Kingdom Come.

The relation between show & tell

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Fatality

The king goes under
for the third time,

the birds are not of this world.

Every ship that
ever set sail
or steered
beyond the known,

making landfall
on a beach
of bones.

~

Passing beneath your window,
tongue in my throat,

the wind filled my ears with
your name, like a curse.

Years earlier, in the glade, we spoke
of gold and wasted hours
(beneath the wasted stars
among the wasted flowers).

You kissed me once and

there is blood
but not a lot

there is pain
but not a lot

there are cries
but not many.

At the top of the hill,
sometimes,
the ground flattens itself.

Cows dying on these pleasant journeys;

The King silent in the deadly waters,
leaving things behind to eat,
like floating fish, blood pink in their blue
water, thin, dying on a shore of bones.

There is a good place to sit near here.

We sit lined in dim light
our hearts failing.

Your name in my ears, your
bones lining my ocean

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Beneath "Saw"

after Bella Li’s ‘You Saw Me First Isabella’

 

You, beneath “saw”. Your “me”, window-first.

Tongue Isabella stilled passing dagger; for

at indifference my “I” throat smiled you in.

Mistook spite. My “of silence”. Myself.

 

The ewe wind alone filled. You’re here.

Ears, Lorenzo. With my sound’s name.

Travelled from, like you, a lip’s curse, I rode

from (into) a lips forest. Quiet later.

 

For in the (the glade) slaughter we, (in met the

“again”, shade of “I”) a below-poison, we oak, spoke you

of above gold and beneath. Wasted the wasted hours,

stars among your (the black wasted nails) flowers.

 

Dripped with my silt. Black in

spite-mouth, of “smiled” itself.

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apropos (celebration instructions remix)

1.

relation between exposure
& strength: poppies touch
it

to the point of no hands

 

2.

sunflowers not anchored
by old coins

to make
art their invisible

 
3.

insect vision a
nonblind blind

their
treasure buzz

 
4.

celebration of husks
 
5.

the rain-
framed germination
clock

not the seed
instructions

 

6.

electric grains

soft
spools of
early seedlings
purple with the dark

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Endless, Beautiful, Exact

Paradise is here on a beach of bones a bell fracturing air.
This is no document of barbarism
of clotted blood and glowing flesh
its shine too bright for too long.

It is seeking resonance, the broken things,
falling sunflowers, the fractured pipe, strands of her hair
about to break into ash.

It is the air of atrocity,
a kind of garden like a flat sea cities burn behind us
thin with the need to escape. Maybe it was a mistake,
I can taste the blood still.

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The Parts That Poets Favour

Face Back Chest
Thighs Heart Hand
Blood Hand Thighs
Palm Thigh Bones
Genitals Ankle Bones
Tongue Head Womb
Nose Egg Nose
Nose Eye Lip
Iris Tongue Throat
Ears Lip Lips
Hair Mouth Nails
Foot Face Body
Blood Flesh Bones
Lymph Chest Blood
Breath Rib Teeth
Nose Lip Fists
Heart Back Tooth
Eggs Head Eyes
Hand Breast Heart
Lap Head Jaw
Head Spine Head
Hair Hand Skin
Eye Legs Back
Foot Soul Leg
Brain Temple Eye
Ear Hand Eyeball
Mouth Breath Bones
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Dialogue Reply

1.

Absence makes the heart go

in spite of itself.
I lack.

Dare not to think it.
Tried the word–
slightly ajar— a barbarity
larger than the house entire
holding everything together

Howl————- Howl———- Hello

heavy
with antiques, shoes, carts
clotted blood.

A kind of garden.

 

2.

The ship needs the sea.
The sea needs rain,
a net of names
solar system

And the sky is held.

When we said bread we meant hunger, soup,
a pot of tea.

This is love, the last
reality.
Wood fungi phosphoresce mixed with sky

thoroughly roasted and unbroken
Paradise is here

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Still Life

You enter the house but as an actor
A photographer in Bentleigh East
Likes technology but LOVES people
You kiss me once and try the word—love.
I lack, unlike the others, a menagerie of identities.
Photographs of air surround me.
Then the dogs cross the road, some alone, others together.
You, who call yourself savvy, defriend me. I can’t penetrate the cats’ in-joke.
Everything vegetates.
I’m seeking resonance.

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WA[RRA]NTED, [MIS]TAKEN (V)

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Read Jane Gibian’s “Wanted, taken”.

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at exactly 9pm

do all corner shops have to die
with peeling skin and
rusted chairs, shadows
where Christmas lights
once
rested
and spread magic
for ice-cream, car-ride-kids?

I am convinced the new moon
was shot there
like a bullet
streaking through clouds
and it’s now
about to break up
into ash

a solemn line of grandfatherly canons
fill a deserted beach
and when you pass them
traces of coals
blink from the sand

if you see a light in my office
at exactly 9 pm – come up
you’ll want to toast this
moment
watch me do this
empty my egg baskets
listen to me telling you

this is how you jettison a load
slowly
but with forgiveness too

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BLACK & WHITE LITANY

He is convinced his bullet points are monochrome
new moons when all’s said and undone.
He walks through a red door larger than the house entire,
When it grew dark we cried , the cry of the godforsaken gull

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Dogs in space (Remix)

Then somewhere in a kitten comes the lonely panic. The people are a people. The skin was of the dogs and the old woman greeting the wind, the noise. Then the others cross the dogs, their backpacks for viewing. It is barely dawn with one eye stuffed with the road of sleep. The bus lid is a dog otherwise empty and one shrieking foot something terrible. The others begin to arrive to bring litter with a wooden cart. Silently departs an old woman, an old man alone grows standing or sitting in the dogs doorway. And at the bus stop Patagonia blows tumbleweed like taxis on market day. The traffic lights dreams are strangers. When she stops against the day like evening, like its lee, boarded store windows as if her wagon there carries an axe with its corner, and another closes the lid on one wheel, pedestrian. Three dogs, some each other alone, arrive by the ledge of some of the passengers absence, near her cart ajar. She arrives like legs before the raw wind down a street vacant as, the dogs mill there of the next and are closed storefronts, perched with peeling. They and some corner shop props are one, sturdy there in the lights together, like others.

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Common I (DISCO REMIX)

I lack, unlike the others, a menagerie of identities.

I was a bright-eyed ingénue
at the agency after-party, coked-up, Scarlatti
played his cement rib,
the tulips were thoroughly roasted, narcotic, terse.
Who was Allen Ginsberg?

(The incline runs to golden water…)

Now I lap up macadamia fuzz: chukka
chukkachukka-chuk-chuk-chuk.
The ceiling bends in, elastic;
the illiterate sea streaks out with wild laughter.

I am passionate about the size and height of my desk;
the sky has become a pin-prick through the musk.
Take the broken things: to be built for fighting,
awful profundity in the wind;
your decomposition is who you are.
Ask the beads of chromosomes, how many times has
art rhymed with corazón?
Inky heart saltos huyendose…
you’re a tool.
The Mayans feel vanquished;
his bullet points are new moons.

I sleep with your mouth open
then the dogs cross the road, some alone,
others together, to the lonely panic of the pedestrian lights.
The cats have their conference,
and it is a most pleasant banter:
though is though, not that…

I become blind:
there is no doorman;
fungi phosphoresce, socialist and tarmac.

You saw me first.

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ZANE’S ORBITAL BRIDE TAKES A BULLET IN THE INTERIOR: Infinite Chest Scene

fifteen degrees scratching
but not a lot

you enter
but not a lot

the stranger looks back
but not a lot

toward three windows
but not many

slightly ajar
but only short

the frame becomes a house
but only one

a corridor wild with laughter
but not a hate

a dune collapses
but far away

above Nathan’s child
but not mine

elastic orange actor
but not him

the camera inclines
but not at me

swings, runs, slips
as you’d expect

to golden water
but not the death

you turn to a mirror
there is me
there is him
there is her

the ceiling bends
this is it

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DOGS IN SPACE 2

Somewhere in Patagonia, to the lonely panic
of the pedestrian lights
an old woman with a wooden axe
carries a cart, vacant as dreams.
At the corner shop, peeling skin
with one eye, she stops
three legs perched on something terrible.
It is barely noise.
Market day. The bus arrives on foot.
Then comes the mill, shrieking,
its windows boarded
as if empty. Dawn.
The people are stuffed with tumbleweed.
The dogs are still dogs—
some alone, others in taxis
their backpacks
ajar for viewing.
Traffic lights litter.
Passengers bring props.
The closed storefronts cross the road
greeting each other silently
like strangers standing
before the raw wind.
An old man grows sturdy
like absence. A kitten
departs like evening.

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INADEQUATE STOVETOP (REMIX)

i lap your macadamia stroll
i espy the roof rack of the world
i try on sunglasses, a sign of your formal awareness
anyway you’re bubbly, becalmed as wool

i find in my head no tartan gift wrap
i fuck around in your wax dreams, in your opinions
your vaseline affixed to my clothes
my jaw speculates

your gorgon girls venture nakeder
a shark net hole, a smoker, a maverick snorkeler
both you and i are fictional

i bend your spine like a talking point
we joust sand like djinns
the day bleaches your umbers

i am your footnote
i am your bank queue
i hunt your legs for thunder

you are my party spider
you are my lime tea, my vapour traversal
you’re a tool
you enter me like a detail

i am bereft of for-sale signs, side-paths
i am a picnic of wind
dwindle me, rub me with quarters
i straggle

you are the bream that flounders
i am you without worries
you blow across this sentence where
i am telegraphed whole

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Dogs in Space (Remix)

In Patagonia: an axe, a kitten, a street
The closed storefronts: vacant as traffic lights
An absence: barely dawn
On her peeling skin: dogs begin to greet her
Something terrible: a wooden cart with one wheel shrieking
Backpacks: stuffed with strangers
Taxis: stuffed with noise
The day: grows like a dog
The evening: crosses the road like a dog
Litter: a panic of light

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corduroy linesman

for pascAlle ginsbürt

 

when i was six years old
my mother made a corduroy cover
for my tongue / got me
to stand in front of the mirror
and repeat the word ‘manage’
until saliva had fully impregnated
its cloth ribs

importantly the corduroy was navy blue.

elected king
a fresh stick of charcoal
proposes its use from my bedside table
each morning / i am forced
to draw around my rare foot
onto a white floor
to prove who i am

importantly the charcoal is heart black.

who is i was
briefly inside a photographer
briefly inside my name
i ride the pony / through a biopic
that was an accurate quotation
from the only person in the world
who does not have my name

importantly his name is not mail box red.

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Particulunar (Eye and Spoon)

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On Creative Commons II

The notion that poetry is primarily self-expression has often seemed to me a seductive (but conveniently commodifiable) mistake. We all like to think that we are makers of language, but anyone poking around in the engine of poetry uneasily realises that it is just as likely to be the other way around, that just as DNA shapes our morphology, language is the shaper of our consciousness.

What, then, is the self that this language is supposed to express? Might we not be, instead, expressions of language, that parasitic virus that both makes and unmakes our humanity? Is it possible, for example, to actually possess a poem? Is it more that a poem possesses us? (Is this why something in the primitive lobes of my brain tells me it isn’t right to sell poetry books, that poetry should just be given away, like air?)

All the poems I have written are remixes of all the language I have ever heard, filtered through the accidents of my physical being. I am a pattern-making animal, and words have been my means of play: I make and remake those patterns, seeking not so much to express myself, but to find some kind of unexpected beauty, however fragmented, however broken.

If the pattern forms a resonant shape, it might strike a vibratory response in the mind and body of another; it might generate the complexities of conscious emotions – not only the emotion itself, but its intellection – that I call feeling. Art, it seems to me, can’t do anything more than that: but that is surely a great deal, in a world which so often seeks anaesthetisation.

The more a self intrudes on poetry, the less poetry is able to play, the less able to discover its own strangeness. A self nails language down, so it will behave, so the poem won’t compromise the vanities of the writer. It is poetry which walks naked, not the self: but try telling that to the self, who has constant nightmares about walking down the street in its pyjamas. This is why poetry aspires to a condition of anonymity.

These musings are, of course, prompted by the experience of editing Cordite’s Creative Commons issue. I loved reading the initial submissions, and was proud of the diversity, ingenuity and beauty of those selected. Reading the remixes has been a joy, a singular act which, in its continual echoes and variations, has felt a little like listening to a baroque ensemble. These individual works have, by virtue of their genetic exchange, become expressive parts of a single and vital thing.

I was most of all startled by the quality of the remixes: I thought it very high indeed. I hope it’s not impertinent to think that this reflects the joyousness of pattern-makers released to play, finding in their anonymity a liberated language, an estrangement from themselves in which they might create moments of unanticipated feeling and beauty.

In short, what you have here is a microcosm of how cultures actually breathe and reproduce, released from the constraints of corporate or individual ownership. I hope you enjoy reading these poems as much as I did: and my thanks to all the generous contributors, both the poets who originally offered their work, and those others who came to play on the creative commons.

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The man who finds himself amusing

Cara clowse in Cowse1

The photograph is a forest
and pin-prick enchantment.
Cords tighten.
Chords brighten,
managing running images.

Touch the invisible!
Hands buzz simply in a new direction.
I am empty,
strangling,
twirling, shivering.

Talk of meaning?
useless nothing.
Empty the hand.
Names of blood
evaporate.

Misread the bones!
Anachronism falters.
My throat trills your ears with a quietening curse,
the other identities as ghastly
as the cycle of nature.

 
 

1. Mediaeval Cornish — nowadays carrek los yn cos — meaning “the hoar rock in the wood”

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I will grab their bytes and they will secretly not like it

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I will grab their bytes and they will secretly not like it (1:16)

Produced by Klare Lanson

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