commute aka I need a haircut

convince yourself
into modes of wistfulness
such an al line
waiting for the 8.13
listening to john talabot’s
2012
house release
fIN play recurring witness
to the two sticks of the bolte
origins in burial imagined
but more fecund
& green
the alienation I’m
feeling is the condition
of my labour
on repeat
I need
a haircut
the salt breeze felt
dogtooth
inland across yellow
silo frottage
forearms burn & that helmet of hair
the commute is the best part
you can convince yourself of the commute
when this bad one is over maybe
you’ll miss the commute
but most likely you won’t
I couldn’t bear to face
the silentio profile
by the 100th 7/11
commemorated
corner
81 austerities published
in 2012 by faber
is something
like that happening now here maybe
it’s not permitted
culturally
retreat onus shift
the head of core design
resigned after the release
of the game in 2003
failures are so endearing
like cult classics
like hyper-care
personnel or semaphore
entering the workplace
vocabulary
a regular long black
just before midday
at slurpee stained counter
retreat
can you deliver
manage time
the apostasia of ’65
as if
material
to finger
the junta
james wrote of that breeze as govt subsidised divination
residency
the cold front after the bake out
eligibility
squatting with the used
cotton buds & cockroaches
on the western highway
orange brown
sweet soy
boy tea
at 9am
where it’s difficult to discern
music for managers /
which side of the pane
the enclosure operates
it’s tomb raider style
simulations of rain
of bouncing artichoke thistle
at 5.35
diesel rail
suspension pixel
I can & can’t be there
grey warm & the perspective
changes
cho’s suitmation
a means of withstanding
incisions and genre
page boy cut
slippage
it’s tomb raider style
c. 2003
& she/we are
in paris & it’s dirty
blue light evening
along the side
9pm carpark
sunday elm heights
early feb
the hot box haunts: apartment rooftops
train graveyards & day clubs
defunct star
when I next see you I’ll be
doing ok yea
I’ll say
doing just fine

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Her mother thinks she’s a lesbian

Mother: those books

Daughter: which ones?

Mother: feminist ones

Daughter: seriously?

Mother: you’re feminist?

Daughter: no, it’s white1

Mother: your books are about feminism

Daughter: half of them are by men

Mother: what about Bad Feminist

Daughter: that’s Roxane Gay

Mother: and I Love Dick

Daughter: you seriously think

Mother: the pages were marked2

Daughter: Kraus is a white woman’s dream

Mother: people will think you’re a lesbian

Daughter: because I Love Dick

Mother: yes

Daughter: really?

Mother: if they saw those books

Daughter: which ones?

Mother: in your room

Daughter: what people?

Mother: white people

Daughter: I’m not in the mood

Mother: they’ll think you’re gay

Daughter: you’re fucking hilarious

Mother: it’s not a joke3

Daughter: have you read I Love Dick?

Mother: you know your type

Daughter: or seen the TV show?

Mother: would have been speared

Daughter: the TV adaptation’s got Kevin Bacon in it

Mother: just the other day I was walking through the park

Daughter: just chill

Mother: there was graffiti saying KILL All GAYS4

Daughter: do you want some tea?

Mother: are you writing for gay magazines?

Daughter: –

Mother: I just want to know what’s going on

Daughter: –

Mother: your books and the scene you

Daughter: come on

Mother: I guess I’m not good enough

Daughter: we should just watch the TV series with Kevin Bacon5

Mother: maybe you’ll get a book deal

Daughter: what does that even mean anymore?

Mother: everyone’s gay, even on the TV, it’s cool

Daughter: like being relegated to the lesbian erotica section of the bookstore6

Mother: so, you’re gay?


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Elegy for Solid Snake 3.1

The Siberian desert is the first shock: that it’s a desert, green,
inhabited, malleable.
Now there is a shot of a transport ship: we become cinematic.

Talk then about consumption, thinghood itself as a battleground. We are returning to
the beginning. Remember the Alamo, once more, with laurels.

We lost contact with the boss some time ago. I would not expect
too much here if I were

you. The colonel is a member of the Brezhnev faction, and I want
to overthrow the government.

You only have a week, and if it’s not too much to ask for one more infirmity, the
universe is the father of modern sniping.

You were, of course, not born. You were instead
borne by another body; we all were I suppose. Playing these two roles doesn’t leave
much time for sleep.

We can be clear then: we are in the Cold War, or
we are watching it, you and I, playing with our bears, American or otherwise.

What we do here is history, what we have conceptualised here possible because of what
they did, and the technology they left us.

The End dies halfway through,
though, and he has lasted a century.

What are we to do after
the end of the
short century depicted
and
the birth – you yourself
are symptomatic here –
of another long one.

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eat the rich

rich woman

rich woman


I will eat your t o n g u e
I will eat your t o n g u e
t o n g u e

t o n g u e
g u e
g u e
u e

e

rich woman pick my f l o w e r

rich woman pick my f l o w e r
f l o w e r
f l o w e r

rich woman cut my d r e s s

rich woman wear my d r e s s

rich woman cut my h a i r

rich woman wear my h a i r

rich woman cut my h e a d

rich woman wear my h e a d

rich woman wear my h e a d

rich woman trick my l o v e r

l o v e r

l o v e r

rich woman wear my h e a d

rich woman trick my l o v e r

l o v e r

l o v e r

rich woman suck my f l o w e r

rich woman suck my f l o w e r

f l o w e r


f l o w e r


rich woman m i r r o r m i r r o r

rich woman m i r r o r m i r r o r


rich woman m i r r o r m i r r o r

rich woman m i r r o r m i r r o r


rich woman

rich woman


I will eat your t o n g u e
I will eat your t o n g u e
t o n g u e

t o n g u e
g u e
g u e
u e

e

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‘Three dots, pending text.’

Three dots, pending text. My weather is all out of alignment. The housing bubble is loosing sleep, rapidly, and I’ve moved onto domesticated swamplands. The backyard is made of concrete.

My weather is all out of alignment. To explore the nature of rain I opened the door. For three days I lay blank pages on concrete, they collect the weather while I am out of the house. Testing what pages can store, what memories they hold.

To explore the nature of rain I opened the door because inside the workings of language clear vision is impossible. A crumpled line takes hold. You text to say you’re wasting your life at The Union, I’m watching the clouds gather. Predictive text fails to foresee. This site of turbulence is irresistible,
it’s in my belly,
in my weather,
like three dots, pending text.


Italicised line from Rosemarie Waldrop’s The Reproduction of Profiles: Inserting the Mirror.

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Forbid talk Hong Kong issu

Hi mate

can tell you somethi-
there are alot of
on the 30th anniver-

[picture: man
against tanks]

within an hour it
so i printed
and it went
i kept putting
ended up putting
it takes about 5 -10

i thought i was like
but no. it is just

I have temporarily

now all the chinese
me in the face

i assume that there
ie: if you see this

crazy huh

No it is just

however i assume
communist party

Because, i know
the chinese communis-
across adelaide and

If you were to reall
even say if your mom

Yes it is all chines-
maybe it is just
ora actually they
xi jing ping: ‘you

No this is at night
there are no staff
what is so hard
it’s not like they
like i do not part
says they will kill

there is no best

you either:
1. make a stand and
anywhere and never
2. remain apathetic
and live your pretty
3. join them.

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the feeling of holding a fight in your hands

there is always the question of the tackle. officially: all the contours are drawn around possession. every time the swans score at home a young-professional waves a flag for realestate.com.au. that’s not metaphor; they’re gameday partners. what’s a national league if not private property? there is always the question of the tackle. what it is; where it ends; where it begins. unofficially: a tackle could be nothing more than a palm rubbing a rib or the feeling of holding a fight in your hands. the leather of a sherrin. trading sweat. any index of the game shuffled between bodies that exists to simply say: i’m here with you. play on. there is always the question of the tackle. unofficially: a tackle could be a lure. an umpire with tactic might say that halftime and three-quarter time and full-time and quarter-time are about self care. it might even be true that you should rest and take a sip of water and be massaged and just breathe for a little. but that would miss the whole point of the intraplay: the regroup. the dissolution of self-enclosure when we meet in a huddle to pat each other on the back and breathe in unison and cling onto each other’s shoulders and whisper dirty things outside of the possible like not long now or we can win this or tackle hard. it’s the intraseason that reminds us that this we is never assured. in other words: hannebery is a saint now. all the handbooks tell umpires to be both proactive and keep their distance. all of which is to say: this is a game of multi-directional situational awareness.

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New Year’s Eve in Tasmania

that summer of 2002
on the eve of the new year
I was in Tasmania

sipping red wine with a priest
and my father

in a caravan park

his name (the priest’s not my father’s)
was Felix, or Sebastian,
something like Father Felix Sebastian,
visiting from India, on a world tour.

he said ‘the young people here are very mature’

he said this looking at my wine glass.

‘yes, I suppose it’s exposure to a thing
that matures one,’ I said, looking at his wine glass.

we downed our blood. the priest enquired
how many glasses I would tolerate
before I lost my mind. father assured him
that I was a rather mature young man.

soon after, the priest and my father retired
to separate cabins. it was new year’s eve
so I scuffed around
for something to do.
I switched on the TV,
ate many bars of Tasmanian fudge,
watched Monty Python’s
The Meaning of Life

as the clock ticked over to 2003
in a cabin between the priest’s and my father’s –
father snoring on one side,
the priest, perhaps, turning pages on the other.

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Getting Nowhere

after John Cage’s A Lecture on Nothing

under the fluorescent supermarket light
we gaze at the bananas
with our arms around each other
we are not married and it’s
a pleasure
to stand still
to not be going to a gym
or getting a foot in a door
or climbing the rungs of a ladder
to not be planning a career
or Going Further in a
Ford Focus
we are getting nowhere
right now
and it’s a pleasure
to never want these things
to lie down on one of the shelves
of pillows in the Home Section
and think
this is not our beautiful house

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For Katie West, after Clearing

when you almost catch the frog there is water underground
when that tree is whistling you are feeling well, because you listen
a dog eating grass might be doing better than you 

renovate that child living under your roof
yourself
and don’t come back until christmas
until whenever
until there is no measure

for carrying water 
for rocks
weighted and
kelp-bound

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Yolk Together Ruin

i

in the kitchen a woman tied a knot in a plastic bag over and over to cover a hole she tore in it minutes before. an hour passed and a man came through the kitchen door into the garden wearing the bag on his head. he was very pleased with himself and with the bag. then the wind took it. somewhere in greater sydney. somewhere in the belly of a whale.


ii

: imprecise   therefore   expand
: going   perimeter   expand
: rockfill   interpret   spillway
: gut   leftover   spillway
: paring   drape   ignite
: language   embargo   ignite
: yolk   together   ruin
: temperate   inside   ruin
: exacting   further   gather
: toward   after   gather


iii

the man came home from work to find that, once again, the woman had sold the bed. she told him that the bed was too comfortable, it spoiled them for when they had to sleep in other beds. he nodded and rolled a camping mattress over the floorboards. could she no longer stomach the plastic undulation; fucked face down on a water bed.


iv

in an enclosed section of the ocean
: trout   saltwater   misc.
: ghost shrimp   oil slick
in an enclosed section of the ocean
: algae   lipid   farm
: ExxonMobil   form
enclosed:   section:   gone


v

bananas drifted out along the rip tide toward the sea. a man reported seeing a bull shark swimming down the main street of goodna, queensland and into the McDonald’s. forever the geography a leaning torso.


vi

         in the sensuous expansion of water
392. come awake
393. the part of the body
         that waits for the blow
         : the head
         in the aftermath

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Current Update

broken rocks tick in us
brocken rock-tics
in us and out us
and around us
and picture the light to us
the pills, pils of a light
hammering onto the mould
inside us. how can i still be slinking around everyday life
and the grey music of tyres that grind earth
little, known dreams
of increasingly middle aged teenagers
glowing like life in a plant
though i get the impression there are new jobs and robots
the turrets of what is most possible
to keep off the cesspool of endlessness
in a forest of walls
and turn it into a delimited duck penis nevertheless
presumed to be infinitely extendable
but this is only one ‘me’s lazy decision
who pronouncements the stations
pronoun cements
propped on a shouldercake
and dreams of pain, dreams of shut up sobs
real dreams across deltas of flights
real shoulders to the fire
the greenness crumpling
spring waiting to come back in the head
or maybe not terrifyingly
blue sssssssss, fundamentally
angry lines of speed avoidant
with the red turned around /
breathing for awhile
breathing withor extracting the echoes
on some profit jag
oh yes, pronouncing them
this that and the other
as though ‘exploded hand’
whirred acceptable side-effects
tolerably racked
passively christ-crushing
just to stroll hurriedly
panic struck in the dryer swamp
commercial for water shock circus
between the skeletons of hazzard
drawn across freezing water
by the skulls of streets and bones
grinning ringtone of bone drawn
in desert root tomato cancer
left off, unheld
bizarre heroic actor-breath
pushing father on population
dream where you cut macron
population dream where you
dream where you cut
macron’s dream where you
cut macron’s population dream
by cutting macron’s dream
dream where you cut, cut where you dream
for a macron, for an accent, for a grave
for an indefinite duration of existing, people the on where you
cut and dream

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VULTURE PHANTASY

rocky headland of a bright
live face, tender hooked throat
this shaggy down these talons this crown
of more or less erect feathers this address
taut like a laundry line between substance
and medium, trying to remember a poem you say,
you’ll know it, it’s about
a chick who wants
this guy to come on her tits and he doesn’t really want to, she feels
upset about it, you say: it’s a really good poem
i’m like damn i dont know that one

they insert their beaks into a slit
in an ostrich egg, to get at the interior
holding the shells between their mandibles,
i explain, in ancient cultures, trying to remember,
there were no male vultures

stalking around the banned word “l * v *,” extracts from a more
rigorous dialogue, cheap and sentimental, like porn how
everybody’s always coming
so the narrative always culminates, knotted white
patterns of force, many symbols, an arc
of moveable acts, lessons at the end, a literalised recuperation
of the human spirit how trite and i
/… a prude for joy
call your dick the death drive, call myself a nuisance, looking at my phone
whisper have i shown you this

trying to remember, da vinci writes
he was in the cradle a vulture
blew thru and fucked him
in the mouth, with its tail, opening up: the future,
visions and deliria, tendencies, the problem
of flight, he was only a baby but it really happened
in a dream,
he later took to painting
but he never let it go, freud says,
because he wrote it down

dicks are not real just a thing we have in dreams;
“phallus” is a dead currency there is only “pants”
everyone wearing them feels a will to power, great discomfort;
look up “etymology dick coma,” words do not
keep us from deeds
scrambled by unserious activity
the search history manufacturing
a backwards glance, the past is
a wish, compiled later
with purposive intent, being but
cerebral the body is a shortcut to a symbol,
if there are no male vultures, i’m trying to remember, o yea:
these birds stop in the midst of their flight, open their vagina
and are impregnated by the wind

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skullcrushing

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Yawning / cologne

A “home game” helps to lose you – some of
my emotions all lopsided
in your room like Brecht, turning
upward,

To grow a hill
in your apocryphal
scene – only make tones
around me

Let loose
an ex boyfriend,
a homebrand sweetener,
not unlike
a quarterback,
domesticity ~ fantasy,

A fragment of
us is movement

/

Do you always hold a gaze this
fretfully? Are you not an alien thing?
A reconnaissance – or rather
all matted in person?

/

You’re never far

away, though I prick your thumb

on a map. Rub
your likeness throughout the spill, we’re

inked to be this ineligible. Uncanny,

really, that we 
proved coupledom

as the outcome, even

when the odds were weighed up.



Your sinew, there, at last, wrapped
in a silk
dress, showing off!
Feathered torso,
bright wide gaze, will
lock, or swap wardrobes.

What gets put on reveals

the notes we otherwise

wouldn’t notice



Love
in the time of
Viktor and Rolf

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Tantrum in a Supermarket

     I’m somewhere pathetic when I finally crack
like I’m at Laserforce or I’m patting a stranger’s dog
or I’ve wandered into a vape shop by accident
or I’m in the laundry items aisle

     I crack and the crack goes right up through me
     it’s not exactly ripping myself a new asshole—
it’s taking the asshole I’ve got and making it … way bigger
so that the wind rushes through me with an unearthly howl
     and as it surges outward
throughout all of humanity
everyone flees
     everyone runs to the sea
     everyone runs to the sea except me
     everyone wades in and drowns     and no one comes back
     I spend the rest of my short life     looting canned food and nice clothes
from abandoned shops in the CBD

     but in fact !     all of this is untrue……….I’ve been lying
     no one ever left in the first place     and I never even cracked
     I never crack because I like it here          I like to play my little games—
I like to tell my little jokes          I like to make my gentle threats
     there are people everywhere and I am always lying to them
like this : look at me !!!     look at me run when in fact I am standing still
     I haven’t moved for several minutes
     why does everyone keep believing me
     it’s not that I’m a baddie I’m just
always wrong

     and it’s not my fault ! in fact I have a congenital disease of wrongness
     I grew up getting severely bested in arguments     I’d be like   
losing my mind in the back of the car     my dumb little voice 
rising higher and higher     my sister smirking her smirk of righteousness   
when I was straining for some kind of point     like you know
exactly like pushing for a shit before it is ready          
     you can’t fucking take it back man     once you’ve strained enough
     I’d be so embarrassed if it was just my personality     it’s so fortunate that I
have my     congenital disease to blame

     oh no I’m lying again     sorry it happens literally all the time
     I wasn’t born with it
     I actually developed it as a public service :
     I have to cry wolf so the villagers     can get their satisfaction
I have to be wrong so that you can be right
     it’s actually……….charity     I’m doing charity on you         psych

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Crow

Wild as a black Darug crow
She is lead on a chain. Behind a horse, arse in her face

black tail, flies flicking

The man shouts, his eyes
on her breast. Ragged white fella dress

Handed a tin pannikin of tea. Blessed drink. A sigh.
She stares at his boots. Fresh from kicking?
Refuses to look, rather sees his smashed skull
thinks how she’ll flee. 


Spit forms on his lips, curled, pale and bloodless
Shoot ya! She had no fear of: shoot ya.

She climbs trees, to spirit places

Dissolving in leaves, bark, sap and tree heart.
Become a tree like her father, fly like crow
Totem carved in triangles
Incised his chest, raised welts of ash.

Not like this skinny white fella

Snake belly skin, feeble and cruel. Arms like worms. Bandicoot nose.

Shoot ya he says and she cannot be touched .

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These are the things I say

soon it will be time to turn off the TV, to make you piss and brush your teeth


to have an argument about getting dressed, which is an argument I have with my
mother about the slingshot of ageing and
how she never told me I was happy



it’s me standing on a small chair so that the time-gap between us expands like that from a needy mouth to a breast or another mouth

it’s my mother’s mother – my mother finally just that – leaving her again in a taxi for the airport and quiet, childless places
only looking back when a letter arrives to tell her that my brother, tiny then, peddled the dock of the driveway
our mother’s arms a jaw saying stop – she’s not worth it

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Pascalle Burton Reviews Jackson’s A Coat of Ashes

A Coat of Ashes by Jackson
Recent Work Press, 2019



One part is conceptualising and ordering the world and the other is accepting the world as it is. – Agnès Varda

Poetry tries to get at something elemental by coming out of a silence and returning us—restoring us—to that silence. It is one of the soul’s natural habitats. – Edward Hirsch


Jackson’s third book, A Coat of Ashes, published by Canberra’s Recent Work Press, is a contemplation about how the discourses of Daoism (or Taoism), physics and systems theory might be fused through the methodology of poetry. The collection springs from her acclaimed PhD project, which was awarded the Edith Cowan University Research Medal, the Arts and Humanities Research Medal, and the Magdalena Prize for Feminist Research. The accompanying prose component of her thesis offers a rich background of selected writers whose work is imbued by physics or Daoism, as well as her creative approaches to this book.

What compels a poet to unite and experiment with such varying discourses? It turns out Jackson was looking for answers about being and matter; what it is to be, what matter is and what actually matters. Her wager is that poetry, as mediator of spirituality and science, could provide deeper understanding about existing in a world of ecological and postcolonial turmoil. It seems to have paid off in this striking volume of work.

The language features and text structures of conventional scientific writing (impartial, technical, objective) and mystical writing (superlative, interpretive, repetitive), might seem incompatible to merge, and experimental poems like ‘Spangles’ and ‘That vast sea’, which incorporate and respond to cut up texts from science books and the Dao De Jing, do produce dissonant tones and styles. However, the organising element of poetry satisfies chance and we find it possible for facts, laws, theories and mysticism to blend and create new flows. Perhaps the relationship is not as troubled as we are led to believe. Philosophical Daoism, as Jackson says, ‘values silence, listening, humility, mindful presence and the shedding of ego and attachment’. This too, seems to be what Western science values; the self is suspended to allow for observation of the systems in which it operates and to which it belongs.

The poems in this book are deep, long breaths; an opportunity to stop and reflect or enter the room of a poet’s meditations. Despite the intermittent scientific insertions (quark, cambium) or Chinese fragments from Daoist texts (wu, dào kĕ dào fēi cháng dào), the plain and mostly quiet language of these works is gentle and subtle even when the content is grappling existential, environmental and social catastrophes.

In ‘One, two three’, Jackson applies the theory of a cartwheel to childlike nostalgia and a sense of forgiveness:

The child doesn’t know
momentum, centres, gravity. 
She blames her mother’s 

ski-slope lawn.

This poem also demonstrates Jackson’s excellent use of poetry to give and then take away, maximising space and silence:

Her father mows the grass

infrequently.

Space and silence are manipulated in the constraint-led ‘What is Tao?’ which employs a word-length stipulated erasure of Thomas Merton’s translation of the Zhuangzi, ‘Cutting Up an Ox’, where the motion of the space provides the rhythm of the meditation:

I feel    slow down    watch
hold back    move

Readers can refer to ‘On looking at the Pointers’ to see what happens when science and Daoism meet, and to the list poem ‘The Sage and the Physicist’ to find out what each is not. The Is and the Not are used frequently in this collection, either through affirmatives and negatives (can/can’t, was/wasn’t) or the naming of them, as in ‘That’:

the What and Not I saw
was That.

Dreams abound and become another way of watching emotions and reactions, like the apocalyptic opener, ‘The silicon lip of the precipice’ or ‘The other way, the long way’, which challenges the narrator’s inflexibility and anxiety. The use of silence in the final line of ‘The fundamental forces dream’ gives the reader a waking sensation, where blinking eyes search for sense, returning to the title or to the following page for continuity:

Hunger
is the fundamental force
from which all the others are derived,
    I said.
And there are accordingly five
fundamental particles.
The one associated with Hunger is called

Objects and animals are instrumental to the noetic quality of this collection, either through narrative, symbol, personification, allegory or metaphor. These include birds, whales, plants, planes, trains, chairs, cars, acid, bass guitars, dolls and dress shoes. A couple of gems, first from ‘on the path’:

a tiny sock
on the path
    BONDS
        it says

and from ‘between’:

there arose a beautiful horse,
brown and white with white-fringed feet,
but it wasn’t possible to speak with her.

In some poems Jackson utilises a stream of consciousness or form of spaced-out, non-intentional writing. Language becomes tenuous or rambling or rhythmic or all of these things. See ‘lamps’ and its near-language-sense, such as ‘I’ve been curling to juice the drug dumps’, or ‘That girdle!’:

I at the surface don’t see the drip
I see the wave, not the jump
Ripples in the pooliverse
Someone says that there is no rock
   and that there is no rock is the rock
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PEACH Editorial

On 23 April 1979, Blair Peach, a teacher from New Zealand, was killed by a blow to the head delivered by an officer of the Metropolitan Police Force Special Patrol Group (SPG). He had been demonstrating against a meeting to be held by the Nazi National Front (NF) in Southall, West London.

Peach did not set out to be a martyr. He did not set out to die. His acting in solidarity with the community under attack that day was probably, had it not been for his death, as unremarkable as his less recollected actions, such as spending nights on the cold, wet street corners of Brick Lane to prevent the NF from holding paper sales. Yet the tragedy of his death, compounded by the ensuing miscarriage of justice, has been remembered as a galvanising moment of anti-racism in the UK, and has inspired a number of poetic works, including Linton Kwesi Johnson’s ‘Reggae fi Peach’, Bhanu Kapil’s Ban en banlieue, and Chris Searle’s edited collection One for Blair. In the early 1980s a Southall primary school was named after Peach. A touching tribute. Naming is touching. To name is to touch.

This edition of Cordite Poetry Review tries to remember Blair Peach on the fortieth anniversary of his death. But what is here gives little sense of who Peach was and what he did, and perhaps only a partial view of what it means to remember him today, when Brexit, Trump, the resurgence of the extreme right, Hong Kong pro-democracy, and the climate crisis dominate the news:

to erase. But the failing is ours, too. It’s what
the living do best. Last Friday, madness tore

(Gavin Yuan Gao, 'Letter to Blair from Home')

The Peach edition’s lack of Peach is not due to the poetry somehow failing in the task of representation that we seem to have set out for it. On the contrary, Blair is not here because poetry itself cannot do other than fail to represent, an abiding concern in Diana Khoi Nguyen’s Homecoming, which we are proud to present in this issue as a chapbook. A memorial can only represent loss, the absence of a person. It cannot reconstruct that person’s presence: their gestures, moods, and contradictions. What is here struggling to touch to Peach represents a longing for some of the ideals (dreams, even) that his figure has come to represent in collective memory: resistance, solidarity, anti-capitalism, anti-racism. In other, perhaps bathetic, words, a world of love, not hate. More than a mourning of a person, these poems seem to allude to how these ideals have failed in the degraded public sphere; failed through the degradation of the language that we use to talk about these ideals; and how these failures are inflicted on the body, which Harold Legaspi evokes in ‘No-one Listened’.

So many roads to inevitable failure. What then, of poetry and resistance? Poetry of resistance is not expressive only of resistance as an oppositional response to some external oppressive force or pressure. What exceeds these fields is what guarantees poetry its status as poetry: that which is not simply information, nor simply a call to action. What is poetic is that which perhaps even impedes that passage to action, diverts energy away from an event. Something in poetry always wants to say something counter to the poetic intention. Alternatively, catch yourself at a rally wincing as time-worn chants roll thinly over the crowd (when something something is under attack, what do we do? STAND UP FIGHT BACK). Your discomfort in solidarity, your need to maintain distance, is resistance enacted as linguistic repulsion. It is poetic:

Mammalian life trying hard not to exist as manky bandaid sandwich
The fillings that are served in the space between us, or the lost siren

(Ann Vickery, ‘Manky Bandaid Sandwich’).

As well as a word that remembers a person, ‘peach’ is a near-homophone to ‘speech’. In the saying, it fills the mouth with the impossible fullness of language. To say peach is to silence that first sibilant and break speech (is this why poets have used this word so much?) into something else. For us the word peach, thought of in this way, helps us understand poetry as a splitting off, turning over and spitting out of common language. What kind of common language is the law? M. NourbeSe Philip’s ‘If/Shall’ responds to law as the culmination of language as oppressive structure, by rupturing and breaking down the Treaty of Friendship and Peace with Morocco (signed in 1787, it is the longest unbroken treaty in United States’ history).

This assemblage of some 70+ poems might be read as a figure for the temporary assemblages of people variously referred to as a march, protest, a demonstration, a riot. Les Back referred to the inevitably temporary nature of such solidarities as ‘intermezzo’. Solidarity is like a dancefloor. Heterogenous and contingent, it will materialise and heave for the big moments. And dematerialise when the affective conditions change, when the moment passes, when the sound system is switched off. The bodies too are fragile, vulnerable, and, sometimes, bear the cost of the dance. Understanding the fragile, tentative nature of connection has informed our process of collecting the poems in this edition. This capacious, unlikely assemblage of poets such as Mykaela Saunders, Dimitris Troaditis, Misbah, O-Jeremiah Agbaakin, Samuel Lee, through its discontinuity and dis-identifications, illustrates the difficulty of assembly in the public space more broadly.

Blair Peach was not the only person to die on the frontline, and ‘this is the era of taking white men off pedestals’ (Sista Zai, ‘A Response to LKJ’s Reggae Fi Peach’). What then does it mean to invite poets to respond to the memory of Peach in 2019? Peach was from Napier, New Zealand, where Maraea Rakuraku was born and raised. Rakuraku writes with a parallax view of NZ history, culminating in an exuberant, discontinuous, polyphonic suite of three poems entitled ‘Kōrerorero/ the say-so’:

We may have been born in the same place, Blair
walked the same streets
perhaps, even known the same people?   
It’s unlikely, you shared a beer with Dad at the Pro,
or sorted peas, at Watties with Mum.      
Did you know about Te Kooti? and what happened to him at the prison? 
Did you trace the profile of Te Mata? 

(‘Named’)

Rakuraku’s final poem, ‘Ka whawhai tonu matou’, sees Peach’s memory woven into, and finally displaced by the resistance narrative of Rewi Maniapoto, 1864. In this PEACH edition, remembering ‘takes place’ in riotous discordance, making poetry a site for fuller, more complex representations of what it means to resist.

PEACE.

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System as Sociopath: Poetics, Politics and Nursing in a Letter from the States

Object permanence

Just like the cities staggered on the coastline
In a nation that just can't stand much more
Like the forest buried beneath the highway

Never had a chance to grow
.

Gil Scott Heron/Brian Jackson, 'Winter in America'

Christmas Eve on the unit. The nurses’ station is in the middle of a long corridor, consisting of a low counter about ten feet long. A couple of psychiatric nurses are seated at laptops on wheeled stands, looking through medication orders, writing notes. A psych tech does rounds, checking each of the 22 single rooms every 15 minutes with a flashlight to the ground and signing their initials on a sheet to indicate that the patient is in their room and either awake or asleep. Many are awake.

We sit awake with them, and there’s a shared sorrow on holiday evenings that nobody can explain but everyone feels. The staff is away from their family, and need to be there to earn money for debts and dreams. Patients would give anything to leave but, in most cases, would be walking into the smouldering and decimated landscape of their lives. It’s a tension we call safety, and it makes everything seem very still.

This night, as on others, I wipe tables and push chairs in, because dignity matters, and because I’m just passing through this life as a traveler strong enough to ignore the scorn attracted by anyone who cares openly, who sees the dirt on the walls and floor and tables and cannot erase the image. These are people with illnesses. This is a place of healing.

Near sunrise, a patient wanders out and we watch the sunrise with her through the filthy dining room window. Briefly, a kitchen staff member and janitor join us on their way in for day shift on Christmas Day. A lot of people say ‘Happy Christmas’, either religiously or sarcastically, but the secular sun rises anyway, settling the disputes on Earth.

The first few weeks, I couldn’t stop crying, driving home after every shift at the hospital. Empathy hurt and wouldn’t stop. Also, empathy made me bump into and up against every bone in me, and every structure in the hospital: leadership, other nurses. Actually, that was mostly all the walls. The patients liked me. I think I was not operating on a frequency where they couldn’t like me. I couldn’t see the bad in anything, anybody and so they had to shake me sometimes – the nurses, especially the older ones – to say things that didn’t happen, or didn’t get said.

‘No, look! People are bad. They are bad sometimes. There are walls. You don’t see the walls because you are outside of them but there are walls and we are inside!’ I thought they said ‘work harder, learn, keep up’ and not ‘we are afraid’, and so I worked harder and learned until the product of my learning was inescapable: we are afraid.

The wounded repeat the wound unless they staunch the bleeding. We like to call this ‘karma’s a bitch!’ or ‘Life’s short! or ‘TGIF!’ We like to think that the ulcer can be covered or soaked in brine, and that you don’t need to sit in the sun a while. We think ‘we have got to play the game to survive!’ and ‘everyone has quirks!’ I saw the charge nurse on a Sunday stop a 20-year old man from playing guitar for the sake of pure control over others’ temporary joy, and I heard what he said when he handed over the guitar to me at her behest: ‘Don’t worry: I know exactly what that was.’

Patients throw yogurt cartons, break our glasses, and even punch us. Not me, somehow, and I think because I was just passing through I was lucky, and ghost-like, and not believed to be a ghost by the patients. To them I was real, and to the nurses I was a mirror that said they were not the fairest, and, worse, said it kindly. The song I play driving through the snow on the way home from work varies, but it’s usually ‘Fake Empire’ when I am feeling good. The beauty of a job where one can ‘be real’ and get ethereal at the same time. Bump into walls. Pass through them. When it’s a night shift and you have a 3-year old daughter at home, all of this makes life, death and art seem absorbed, subsumed by nursing … and makes nursing enough creativity, I don’t need to write. The nurses would shake my shoulder, sometimes gently, sometimes brutally and say ‘No, you are wrong. There is good and there is evil and you can’t pick which one you are. It’s decided. Sometimes, in a fever, I would blink and look around me, and wonder where I was.

Shift work is fundamentally disorienting and dis-inhibits a person over time. This makes and loses friends. The good friends stay, because they look at you, see your face one day, and they just see you, and know you are all right. It works that way. They know because they are safe, and see your risk, or vice versa, and they ‘lend a hand’ as you lean into the abyss of a shattered life. Pull the patient out. Maybe bring them ginger ale or magazines. Maybe that’s what brings them out. This is how you can become an experienced nurse.

I never was afraid of the violence, except the psychological kind from my nursing colleagues, and it took a long time – four years or more – for me to understand that they weren’t less fair, they were mirroring what they had seen: that worse than dirt on walls, floor, tables and window on Christmas morning at sunrise.

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Australian Marginalia: Encounters with Australia in Raymond Roussel, John Ashbery and Georges Perec

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My little Charlotte,

You would not like Melbourne, for it is full of handsomes [sic] cabs. I adore it, for I love this form of locomotion. I have already used the candle-powered heater, for it is winter here; during the first part of the crossing, I think they would have melted without my lighting them. As my room faces due north, I have the sun all day. There are delicious oysters and as there is no ‘r’ in the month, it is the perfect season for them. One evening, I intend to eat kangaroo soup, which is a great Australian specialty. Horse races are a passion. There are seven tracks in Melbourne and every other city likewise; as for towns, they all have at least one. This is the home of Melba; her real name is Armstrong and Melba is a stage name taken from Melbourne. There are two beach resorts near here called Brighton and Menton. It’s really worthwhile to come so far so as to be able to make an excursion from Brighton to Menton, which I have done!

A thousand tender thoughts,
Raymond

The ‘Raymond’ who sends his tender thoughts is Raymond Roussel, the French poet, playwright and novelist. And ‘little Charlotte’ is Charlotte Dufrène, Roussel’s housekeeper and closest friend (after his mother, Mme. Marguerite Roussel, who had died some years before the postcard was penned). Based on the colour photograph, ‘showing a street of an extremely modern town, with fine buildings and a tramline’, Roussel’s biographer François Caradec has imagined that his hotel room overlooked Collins Street, its northern windows faced away from Melbourne’s city centre (Caradec 175). Yet this is a double fabrication, not only because little was known about the poet’s visit to Australia in 1920 – where he went, where he stayed, what he saw – but also because the postcard itself exists only in reproduction, described and transcribed by the writer and ethnographer Michel Leiris, with Dufrène’s permission, in an essay titled ‘Le Voyageur et son Ombre’ (‘The Wanderer and His Shadow’) published in 1935, two years after Roussel’s death.

Despite this patchy provenance, the Melbourne postcard has enjoyed a purloined afterlife. It is quoted by each of Roussel’s major Anglophone interpreters: including John Ashbery (Other Traditions 57), English poet Mark Ford in his biography Raymond Roussel and the Republic of Dreams (147), Rayner Heppenstall (7) and Ross Chambers (72). The postcard’s frequent reproduction may be explained by Roland Barthes’ observation that: ‘What proves the wonderful singularity of the writer, is that during (a) holiday (…) which he takes alongside factory workers and shop assistants, he unlike them does not stop, if not working, at least producing’ (29). If no firm distinction can be maintained between a writer’s vocation and their vacation, their productive and unproductive time, then any incidental writing he or she might produce – a diary, itinerary or postcard – can be considered part of their creative oeuvre. Roussel’s particular case is, however, complicated by comments made by him that have proved hugely influential in the reception of his work: ‘I travelled around the world by way of India, Australia, New Zealand, the Pacific archipelagos, China, Japan and America. Now from all these travels I never took anything for my books. It seems worth mentioning because it shows how much my imagination accounts for everything in my work’ (20).

These sentences come from ‘Comment j’ai écrit certains de mes livres’ (How I Wrote Certain of My Books, 1935), where Roussel asserts that he is the final authority on the meaning of his books, but that they say nothing about him. He manages this sleight of hand by revealing his remarkable, and much remarked upon, techniques for composition, what he calls ‘le procédé’. The following example is provided from a Boy’s Own adventure titled ‘Parmi les noirs’ (‘Among the Blacks’), written in the style of Roussel’s literary hero Pierre Loti: ‘I chose two almost identical (…) phrases’:

Les lettres du blanc sur les bandes du vieux billard…
(Those white letters on the cushions of the old billiard table…)

Les lettres du blanc sur les bandes du vieux pillard…
(The white man’s letters on the hordes of the old plunderer…) (3-4)

A minor substitution – billard for pillard – results in major distortion in meaning. And when the two sentences are positioned as the first and last lines of a poem, filling in the gap between the two sentences with the colonial tropes expected of the genre, the poet’s task becomes almost perfunctory, as he steers the narrative towards its conclusion in near perfect phonic symmetry. Another version of the procedure employs puns to determine the characters and narrative of a novel. A simple phrase chosen almost at random, ‘maison (house) à espagnolettes (window fasteners),’ passes through the procedure and becomes the homonym, ‘maison (royal dynasty) à espagnolettes (little Spaniards),’ providing Roussel the kernel of a story: two identical Spanish twins, shipwrecked off the African coast, fall pregnant to a local king and, when they give birth simultaneously, inaugurate two competing royal dynasties, each heir with equal claim to the throne.

Roussel travelled to Australia on the Narkunda’s maiden voyage from Europe in 1920, arriving in Fremantle on 15 August. He had disappeared from Paris some months earlier – without notice or farewell, a nephew recalls (Caradec 175) – but we find him on a list of passengers in an Australian newspaper, his name clipped almost beyond legibility: ‘Rouss’ (‘Passengers’ 6).1 Roussel had travelled alone, without the throng of servants ubiquitous on family holidays during his mother’s lifetime, carrying only a small suitcase of clothes and other essentials to be replaced or replenished as necessary. He packed light in part out of convenience, in part because he suffered intense anxiety over hygiene: ‘his general rule was to wear his collars just once … his shirts only a few times, a suit, an overcoat, a hat or braces fifteen times, a tie three times’ (Caradec 113). As intrepid as the poet must have felt (Ford suggests he had modelled the adventure after a love of Jules Verne, though he packed ‘even lighter than Philias Fogg’), Roussel – heir to a stupendously large haute bourgeois fortune – nonetheless sailed in luxury first-class (Ford 147).

With her sister ship the Naldera, the Narkunda was the largest liner yet to join the London-to-Sydney-via-Suez service and remained one of P&O’s largest ships until it was sunk by a German bomber off the coast of Algeria in 1942. High ceilings in the first-class dining rooms were decorated by a Royal Academy muralist, Gerald Moira, in neo-baroque cherubs, nymphs and clouds. A promenade deck gymnasium was equipped with hydraulic rowing machines, an electronically driven riding horse, and a nautical steering wheel with artificial resistance for passengers to play at captain (Fig 1). We do not know whether Roussel enjoyed these novelties. But they share a striking resemblance with the bizarre machines that populate his poetry and fiction – a wind-powered apparatus which organises mosaics of human teeth, or a glass prism filled with oxygenated water to allow for subaquatic breathing (Roussel Locus 19-40, 51-9).


The first-class gymnasium aboard the Nakunda (1920).

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Phantasmagorically Noh: The Blindness and Rage of Brian Castro Deconstructed

‘write prose and cut your margins,’
a friend and editor advised
— Brian Castro (22)

Blindness

The blindness presented here is metaphorical, if not phantasmagorical, for Castro calls his verse novel a ‘Phantasmagoria […] in thirty-four cantos’. For me, actual blindness in Paris is a curse. That said, the beauty of Paris belies the misery and grief of war, colonialism and slavery.

Some people argue that postmodernism itself has driven our society blind, and that it has taken cataclysmic events for us to see again, such as the atrocities of September 11, 2001 (‘I’m too blind for your masked ball’ [67], the protagonist Lucien Gracq says in an unposted letter [‘Snail mail is blind’ (196)] when invited to join the Club des fugitifs, the thinly disguised Oulipo movement, wishing instead ‘he had taken up the offer / of a residency at Varuna’ [ibid.], rhyming the Blue Mountains writers’ residency with ‘doona’. Undercutting with humor is a common postmodernist device.). Castro does not mention 9/11 but does other violent upheavals and wars, such as the Easter Rising, the First and Second World Wars (the notorious Vél d’Hiver, in Paris, now commemorated with a plaque) and even the Battle of Waterloo as a kind of battle of the sexes (45; undercutting again).

‘Canto’ is an Ezra Pound word (or a Dante word – after all, Castro does say his novel is written in 34 cantos, just like Dante’s Inferno). Similarly, ‘Duino’ belongs to Rilke; ‘mauvaise foi’ (‘bad faith’), to Sartre; ‘madeleine’, to Proust (Castro references this three times), ‘erasure’, to Derrida; ‘frog’, to Bashô; ‘archetype’, to Jung; or as ‘wasteland’ (65) – written as two words – belongs to Eliot. With regard to the literary process known as erasure, I wrote elsewhere that I believe ‘erasure’ – rature in French – is Derrida’s pun on his favorite lexicographer, Émile Littré and litté-rature. (It may have been taken seriously by Derrida himself as time wore on, and may be taken seriously by others to this day, but I am convinced ‘erasure’ started out as a piece of fun.)

Blindness is part of the paraphernalia of prophecy, the stock in trade of seers, the most famous of whom is Tiresias, a transgender man of Greek tragedy whose first gig was as advisor to Cadmus who, according to legend, introduced the Greek alphabet to people. A blind man is a stock character of Noh plays (signified by a mask), if we go from West to East. The mask allows for different personalities, impersonations, transformations, or a change of sex even; a mask provides for identity as well as disguising it.

Castro is not blind to popular culture either – he mentions everything from Giorgio Armani, Charles Aznavour, Jacques Brel, The Postman Always Rings Twice (‘the postman doesn’t even ring twice’ [173], but as Gilbert Adair maintains, The Post-Modernist always Rings Twice), ‘Sex and the City’ and the Adelaide Festival to The Big Issue, Charlie Hebdo, the Titanic (twice!) and the Tour de France bicycle race (‘the Tour de France / come through Proust’s Combray’ [133]). He can be high-brow, too, listing Tel Quel, The Maids (an outline, quelle qu’elles), Dangerous Liaisons (as lower-case text), discussing or mentioning Abélard and Héloïse (Abélard et Héloïse, Love Story for the Middle Ages), Pataphysicians, Pessoa, Pasternak, Proust, Adorno, Apollinaire, Bataille, Baudelaire, Beckett, Benjamin, Buñuel, Caillois, Céline, Césaire, Dante, Freud, Giono, Heidegger, Huizinga (Homo Ludens is a seminal work), Jabès, Kafka, Kant, Keats, Klossowski, Koestler (not mentioned by name), Lacan, Leiris, Marx, Milton, Modiano (should he be in the popular culture list?), Montaigne, Nietzsche, Ocampo, Queneau, Roussel (not Rousseau), Sade, Satie, Tolstoy, Verlaine, Whitman, et al. (A long list that could have been longer, for Castro is critiquing Australian academia’s love affair with French theory. That said, Jacques Derrida, the father of Deconstruction, is missing in person, if not in action. The closest we come is ‘Doctor Nietzsche [Philip Nitschke] / who would make a laptop available / replete with all the paraphernalia / to guarantee Gracq’s erasure’ [134; see above]. The parochialism of Nitschke versus the international stature of Nietzsche. Duchamp is also missing by name, but his cross-dressing alter ego, Rrose Sélavy, also a pun [éros, c’est la vie], is there. And let us not forget that Flaubert is on the front cover.) Lots of embedding in the text, such as ‘invitation to voyage’ (50), which is Baudelaire, of course. Mixing high culture with low is a hallmark of postmodernism. (Jokes are another hallmark – in-jokes or otherwise. So is nonsense.

As Jack Spicer once said, we do not have to be forced to nonsense, that it is another discipline. Mixing high and low culture, then, but keeping the demarcations a formalistic certainty, is a Western concept. I remember some years ago admiring a painting by Dawn Sime and foolishly telling the artist that it reminded me of batik. ‘It’s all art, Javant,’ she said, correcting me, ‘There’s no craft.’ ‘[L]anguage without craft limits the ego.’ – Brian Castro, p. 68. Ambiguity. In the East, the borders between art and craft are not so clear; besides, it does not matter. In other words, such distinctions are a Western construct. For an example of mixing high and low culture, I found a later poem by Kenneth Koch, a precursor to the postmodernists, where he has excessively juxtaposed the Acropolis with Coca-Cola, Homer with Jack and Jill, Pinturicchio with a fruit-juice seller in Hawaii, Dostoyevsky with Walt Disney and Herbert Hoover with Popeye. Castro has done more or less the same by putting Rembrandt and Mr Mouse [167], Sparta and Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde [‘Dr Jekyll in his hide’ 162], Virgil and ‘Roger the dodger’ Caillois [8], etc., on the same pages. Charles Bernstein, a leading figure in the L=A=N=G=U=A=G=E movement, has stated that [post]modernism’s theory, being full of ‘elisions and evasions, obscure references [and] logical lapses’ is the kind of poetry that appeals to him, and appeals to many.)

Blindness as academia. Blindness as a disability overcome by art. (‘Jorge Luis Borges, who was blind for a large part of his life’ [179], a corollary to Beethoven’s composing music when deaf, etc.) Blindness as not recognising certain facts. (‘Not to notice that, not to see how love would end because of the rapidity of communication, is a special form of blindness’ [170].) Blindness as silence. (‘[Gracq] felt in need of secrets and silence’ [18] or ‘I remember that silence was the best communication’ [175]. Even American avant-garde artist John Cage gets a guernsey: ‘it was enough / to make silence meaningful’ [117].) Blindness as a kind of Bergeresque not seeing – on the last page of the verse novel, ‘Gracq grows blinder…’ (214). Having said this, Castro does not overdo the blind analogy, mentioning blindness just five times – and ‘blindness and rage’ (‘dying into writing was … well … / both blindness and rage’ [10]; ellipsis in original), four times – in the text.

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