Geoff Page Reviews John Kinsella

1 May 2014

The Vision of Error: A Sextet of Activist Poems

The Vision of Error: A Sextet of Activist Poems by John Kinsella
Five Islands Press, 2013


John Kinsella’s latest foray into what has become known as ‘ecopoetics’ raises many more aesthetic and political questions than can be resolved in a short review. As in his Divine Comedy: Journeys Through a Regional Geography (2008), Kinsella makes vivid and considerable use of autobiography. He and his family are presented as embattled eco-pioneers in a region already much destroyed by bad farming practices, partly multi-national in origin, and roamed over at will by township hoons ready to shoot up anything that moves.

Unlike those who threaten him, Kinsella seems to have made a close study of the flora and fauna of his region and is determined to do what he can on his relatively small property to preserve it (or restore it, in many cases). As a poet, the essential problem that arises for him is what kind of poetry can assist, or even document, such a struggle. To judge from The Vision of Error: A Sextet of Activist Poems and some of the books that have preceded it, Kinsella has developed a wide range of strategies, some more successful than others.

Tying these divergent approaches together is a kind of verse diary, carefully noting significant human episodes and natural phenomena somewhat in the manner of Thoreau’s 1854 prose book, Walden. ‘Wagtails are puffing their feathers / on sharp mornings, and a blue sky enhances the cold.’ In addition to felicities like these there are also rants at the behaviour of multinationals. Most of these denunciations are far from ‘poetic’ by any traditional definition. A fairly typical one occurs as early as page 2: ‘ … bloated cappo-egoists, mining-industry hacks, / disciples (enslaved) hungering for plasma, / plasma-screen televisions, new scramble bikes, / four-by-fours.’

Sometimes, and more happily, these outbursts employ an Old Testament tone: ‘They will come in the garb of heaven and promise / longevity for the planet; /They will come as scientists telling us what is good for us, / deleting all choice; / They will sup with the string-pullers; / They will take us to the nethermost abyss and shilly shally / on the borders of light …’ One can almost hear Manning Clark in the background here.

Of course, one is also aware of an echo from Walt Whitman. Indeed, a long-running and subterranean engagement with that poet (and also with John Milton, another political poet) runs along under much of the text. Unfortunately, the substance of these potentially interesting encounters is not greatly developed. There are only tantalising allusions along the way.

Most crucially, however, towards the end of the book’s penultimate poem, Kinsella notes: ‘Our four-year-old, in the delirium / of fever, said: ‘Dad, write a poem / to make them stop, to stop / them tearing down the tree’. / He has more faith in poetry // and people than I have, / though I’d like to honour his wish.’ In many ways the whole of The Vision of Error is an honouring of that wish — but the poet’s misgivings about his task (‘He has more faith in poetry … than I have’) are also well-founded. Political poetry which is overly simple and dogmatic will ‘make nothing happen’ (to misquote Auden slightly). Most rants are in this category. Even Kinsella is driven to admit at one point ‘I fear my own rhetoric’.

It is also true, however, that poetry which is overly complex and inaccessible to the ‘target audience’ has even less chance of ‘stop(ping) them tearing down the tree’, as it were. Lines such as ‘Rim                    Paste   Quake Crestfall / ‘vagus inter stellas huius revelationis’’, selected almost at random, may sound fine as incantations but they are not likely to change entrenched opinion, particularly among those unfamiliar with Latin or the works of Christopher Brennan.

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Geoff Page

About Geoff Page


Geoff Page is based in Canberra and has published twenty-two collections of poetry as well as two novels and five verse novels. His recent books include 1953 (UQP 2013), Improving the News (Pitt Street Poetry 2013), New Selected Poems (Puncher & Wattmann 2013), Aficionado: A Jazz Memoir (Picaro Press 2014), Gods and Uncles (Pitt Street Poetry 2015), and PLEVNA: A Verse Biography (UWA Publishing 2016). He also edited The Best Australian Poems 2014 and 2015 (Black Inc).

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