When he enters the town

14 December 2009
When he enters the town –
and notices that mcdonalds has burned to the ground
he weeps – wouldn’t you? – weeps and hungers
he remembers the men standing in a circle of painted cloth
now they live in separate little gray boxes
“When was the last time you had a happy meal?”
When was the last time you were even happy?
Inquiring minds want to know
when he enters the next town, what
chance is there for any meal, let alone
ears to hear, minds to mind his mysterious
quest
for that easy to please, unremarkable self
he left behind some time, some town like
fallowed fields laid to rest
	this season done feast beheld
	wrapped to go again
Curtains are drawn, the sound of his roar the only sound
in that boxed man’s town
	a whispered anguished sigh
	dream broke spare a dime?
mourning the golden arches with withdrawing aches and shakes, he
rifles the cashier and ditches that family wagon, screaming in the drive-thru
But that was yesterday.
Now he hears whispers and a full on rumour that in the next town
	they’re marketing a brand new meal – even happier, even healthier –
        it’s a fair hike but he staggers on
maybe this time the little toy
will come with instructions written in Esperanto
the market place is silent –
        its cold square space threatening
with the refrigerator on hiatus,
        he embraces the Esky
full of beer and peyote tequila_the trees’ grin stretch the branches to breaking,
        the red rocks start barking, the thistles into nests of spitting snakes
a scene ripe for a Deliverance plot, for location scouts,
mouthing blessings to them all the burger king plots his course
And realises, with a start, that he has been here before.
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28 Responses to When he enters the town

  1. Michael Farrell says:

    and notices that mcdonalds has burned to the ground

  2. Jeff Klooger says:

    he weeps – wouldn't you? – weeps and hungers

  3. Bev Braune says:

    he remembers the men standing in a circle of painted cloth

  4. Anthony DiMatteo says:

    now they live in separate little gray boxes

  5. Gregory Horne says:

    “When was the last time you had a happy meal?”

  6. Libby Hart says:

    When was the last time you were even happy?

  7. adimatteo says:

    Inquiring minds want to know

  8. when he enters the next town, what

  9. chance is there for any meal, let alone

  10. Judith Steele says:

    ears to hear, minds to mind his mysterious

  11. for that easy to please, unremarkable self

  12. Judith Steele says:

    he left behind some time, some town like

  13. Betty Ann Galloway says:

    fallowed fields laid to rest

    this season done feast beheld

    wrapped to go again

  14. Curtains are drawn, the sound of his roar the only sound

  15. Betty Ann Galloway says:

    in that boxed man's town

    a whispered anguished sigh

    dream broke spare a dime?

  16. gypsy says:

    mourning the golden arches with withdrawing aches and shakes, he

  17. Meg Dunn says:

    rifles the cashier and ditches that family wagon, screaming in the drive-thru

  18. But that was yesterday.

  19. Genevieve Osborne says:

    Now he hears whispers and a full on rumour that in the next town they're marketing a brand new meal – even happier, even healthier – it's a fair hike but he staggers on

  20. hydrolith says:

    maybe this time the little toy

  21. Jayne says:

    will come with instructions written in Esperanto

  22. Jane Baker says:

    the market place is silent -

    its cold square space threatening

  23. Dianne Cikusa says:

    with the refrigerator on hiatus,

    he embraces the Esky

  24. patrickboyle says:

    full of beer and peyote tequila_the trees' grin stretch the branches to breaking, the red rocks start barking, the thistles into nests of spitting snakes

  25. Adam Aitken says:

    a scene ripe for a Deliverance plot, for location scouts,

  26. Betty Ann Galloway says:

    mouthing blessings to them all the burger king plots his course

  27. Yolly says:

    And realises, with a start, that he has been here before.