The valley of his youth is going slowly bald

14 December 2009
The valley of his youth is going slowly bald
El valle de su juventud va lentamente calvo
A sad fate in any language
for, the sky opens up and loosens river slicks
whereas the breasts of his love could belong to the moon
and god knows she was one frigid chick!
the names. and the prohibitions.
Those unspoken words that talk volumes through a suggestive glance.
So, what if an empty gesture was now his only friend
The trough of youth sending up smoke signals
like the mist rising off the river while the mountain hides in the air
of hot-geysered hubris, dam this landscape of testosterone and
stubbled grass, where cattle break turned table legs in bunny sockets
while elephants rest in empty back pockets, and in their shoes
a lather of lust and essential sweat, black floods
as you see a host of compensations
signed upon the wall
	reservations old men made
	warhooped-angry cries
the battle lines drawn, young men cry “fuck it”
girls and women rid their hair themselves in screwed anticipation
devoid, as he himself, of the living image, pictured now in memory.
And so all are hairless
the little fields of the valley floor have climbed its sides
	as broadacre paddocks that burn under a hard sun.
	Cattle hooves cut deep ridges into ground
	where wallabies once played invisible games and
	possums swung in branches while owls swept by
	on powerful wings and tiny bats danced against the moon.
so you see, the landscape is a toupee –
	to cover thus the valley of his youth
	And it doesn't matter if it's going bald
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22 Responses to The valley of his youth is going slowly bald

  1. Michael Farrell says:

    El valle de su juventud va lentamente calvo

  2. Jeff Klooger says:

    A sad fate in any language

  3. Bev Braune says:

    for, the sky opens up and loosens river slicks

  4. Anthony DiMatteo says:

    whereas the breasts of his love could belong to the moon

  5. Gregory Horne says:

    and god knows she was one frigid chick!

  6. the names. and the prohibitions.

  7. Libby Hart says:

    Those unspoken words that talk volumes through a suggestive glance.

  8. Greg Rochlin says:

    So, what if an empty gesture was now his only friend

  9. adimatteo says:

    The trough of youth sending up smoke signals

  10. like the mist rising off the river while the mountain hides in the air

  11. Michelle Leber says:

    of hot-geysered hubris, dam this landscape of testosterone and

  12. Sarah Davies says:

    stubbled grass, where cattle break turned table legs in bunny sockets

  13. while elephants rest in empty back pockets, and in their shoes

  14. Judith Steele says:

    a lather of lust and essential sweat, black floods

  15. valli says:

    as you see a host of compensations

  16. Betty Ann Galloway says:

    signed upon the wall

    reservations old men made

    warhooped-angry cries

  17. gypsy says:

    the battle lines drawn, young men cry “fuck it”

  18. Meg Dunn says:

    girls and women rid their hair themselves in screwed anticipation

  19. Helen Cramer says:

    devoid, as he himself, of of the living image, pictured now in memory.

  20. And so all are hairless

  21. Jane Baker says:

    the little fields of the valley floor have climbed its sides

    as broadacre paddocks that burn under a hard sun.

    Cattle hooves cut deep ridges into ground

    where wallabies once played invisible games and

    possums swung in branches while owls swept by

    on powerful wings and tiny bats danced against the moon.

  22. Dianne Cikusa says:

    so you see, the landscape is a toupee -

    to cover thus the valley of his youth

    And it doesn't matter if it's going bald