So the story goes: Glámis, the bride

14 December 2009
So the story goes: Glámis, the bride
was a sad one when he was found by the tide
veiled seaspray, dead urchins
daughter of ambition, queen of blood
sickened by the dark fate of her deepest love
Sickened with herself. That it should come to this!
The flowering of waves on rock, her fruitless searching
for the survival, in part for the survival
in part searching, endlessly searching
and almost never finding, save for this last
sour sweep of jetsam from the seawrecked past
was the vessel of vision unevenly loaded?
At the tail end of dusk.
A siren song keening against the tempest of her mind
was she a bride still or must she seek out another
occupation – a teller of bridal tales, perhaps,
tailoring these veiled tears
Had been there before
A green Bette Davis sits under it
murmuring vain words of consolation
of sorrow, of tomorrows, of treasures lost and found and the fine
     edged abyss of bliss
The tint and glint of shimmering threads, of what could be a fair
     maidens bed never captured Glamis’ eyes–only the
     embroidered flags of Ran’s bellowing ships.
At length a white gull from afar alighted on a rock,
out of a small pale dusk at the edge of the world
and started chewing on a piece of seaweed;
she remembered this: storm-swept coastlines, her wine-coloured shorts
and sixpence worth of dulce in a small white paper bag
held in miscellaneous regard
undying grey lady gazing from the castle's haunted windows,
     the bridal chair left unseated,
     her bloodied bare arms torn like silk caught in briars
The seagull paused, cleaning its beak on the rock, and spoke in a clear, bell-like voice.
Take up your pride girl and find your strength of spirit, all is not lost to you.
     For within you resides all you need to rise up and seek out a new love,
     a new strength to keep the species alive and to refresh the stagnating joy
     in your broken heart.
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29 Responses to So the story goes: Glámis, the bride

  1. Michael Farrell says:

    was a sad one when he was found by the tide

  2. Fiona Wright says:

    veiled seaspray, dead urchins

  3. Jeff Klooger says:

    daughter of ambition, queen of blood

  4. Anthony DiMatteo says:

    sickened by the dark fate of her deepest love

  5. Sickened with herself. That it should come to this!

  6. Gregory Horne says:

    The flowering of waves on rock, her fruitless searching

  7. for the survival, in part for the survival

  8. Libby Hart says:

    in part searching, endlessly searching

  9. Penn Kemp says:

    and almost never finding, save for this last

  10. Sarah Davies says:

    sour sweep of jetsam from the seawrecked past

  11. Joyce Parkes says:

    was the vessel of vision unevely loaded?

  12. Sergio Ortiz says:

    At the tail end of dusk.

  13. Betty Ann Galloway says:

    A siren song keening against the tempest of her mind

  14. valli says:

    was she a bride still or must she seek out another

  15. Clint says:

    occupation – a teller of bridal tales, perhaps,

  16. Betty Ann Galloway says:

    tailoring these veiled tears

  17. Duncan Hose says:

    A green Bette Davis sits under it

  18. Greg Rochlin says:

    murmuring vain words of consolation

  19. gypsy says:

    of sorrow, of tomorrows, of treasures lost and found and the fine edged abyss of bliss

  20. Nova says:

    The tint and glint of shimmering threads, of what could be a fair maidens bed never capured Glamis' eyes–only the embroided flags of Ran's bellowing ships.

  21. Greg Rochlin says:

    At length a white gull from afar alighted on a rock,

  22. out of a small pale dusk at the edge of the world

  23. Max says:

    and started chewing on a piece of seaweed;

  24. Lizz Murphy says:

    she remembered this: storm-swept coastlines, her wine-coloured shorts and sixpence worth of dulce in a small white paper bag

  25. Dianne Cikusa says:

    held in miscellaneous regard

  26. patrickboyle says:

    undying grey lady gazing from the castle's haunted windows,the bridal chair left unseated,her bloodied bare arms torn like silk caught in briars

  27. Yolly says:

    The seagull paused, cleaning its beak on the rock, and spoke in a clear, bell-like voice.

  28. valli says:

    Take up your pride girl and find your strength of spirit, all is not lost to you. For within you resides all you need to rise up and seek out a new love, a new strength to keep the species alive and to refresh the stagnating joy in your broken heart.