My head spins – the audacity of coming so close to the Gods!

14 December 2009
My head spins - the audacity of coming so close to the Gods!
if that doesnt get our feet wet nothing will
take my sandals
wet feet, heads in clouds – beware the lightning!
The wax in our ears will melt, all the notes fall down.
The grime in our guts will be flushed. And we will rise, light,
only to have the hawkish words eat those guts – again!
O Prometheus, we know your plight.
Too many nights oozing with ouzo
how can we approach except with flames and offerings
chanting sungift. Someone falls fasting
gnawing gristle, talon gripped, bone in kris-beak
the stone wall cracking, peeling
And again that ouzo, promethean wax, a hand dedicating it to the fire, the too-close.
consumed we wait
an unhatched egg inside the Icarus pyre
eyes malevolently our oily sycophancy,
watching for the birth of wings and salamander immortality
sing tongue soar feet cry want only ask
fire up the band and swallow down the ash
the gods are the gods and will do as they will
not to mention who could tell if they don't
let us cross over that pink and white pedestrian
the imago of golden helen released from her eggshell,
       striped camellia crown, gown of pearled testicle,
       smile of eleusinian knowing
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24 Responses to My head spins – the audacity of coming so close to the Gods!

  1. Cordite says:

    with ten thousand comments we'll make it to Mars!

  2. Michael Farrell says:

    if that doesnt get our feet wet nothing will

  3. Jeff Klooger says:

    wet feet, heads in clouds – beware the lightning!

  4. Anthony DiMatteo says:

    The wax in our ears will melt, all the notes fall down.

  5. The grime in our guts will be flushed. And we will rise, light,

  6. Gregory Horne says:

    only to have the hawkish words eat those guts – again!

  7. Libby Hart says:

    O Prometheus, we know your plight.

  8. Fiona Wright says:

    Too many nights oozing with ouzo

  9. how can we approach except with flames and offerings

  10. Judith Steele says:

    chanting sungift. Someone falls fasting

  11. Kaye says:

    gnawing gristle, talon gripped, bone in kris-beak

  12. the stone wall cracking, peeling

  13. cmiwakeling says:

    And again that ouzo, promethean wax, a hand dedicating it to the fire, the too-close.

  14. valli says:

    consumed we wait

  15. gypsy says:

    an unhatched egg inside the Icarus pyre

  16. Greg Rochlin says:

    eyes malevolently our oily sycophancy,

  17. watching for the birth of wings and salamander immortality

  18. Judith Steele says:

    sing tongue soar feet cry want only ask

  19. anthony dimatteo says:

    fire up the band and swallow down the ash

  20. the gods are the gods and will do as they will

  21. Anthony DiMatteo says:

    not to mention who could tell if they don't

  22. Dianne Cikusa says:

    let us cross over that pink and white pedestrian

  23. patrickboyle says:

    the imago of golden helen released from her eggshell,striped camellia crown,gown of pearled testicle,smile of eleusinian knowing