at the moonlight splayed, shot on the dirt floor, silver and soft.

14 December 2009
at the moonlight splayed, shot on the dirt floor, silver and soft.
we were shooting the les murray biopic & it was all going cheaply to plan
	(for cannes)
plenty of slow pans and montages – a bit short on action scenes
and I, like a lost hitchhiker, watching
all my lovers proving to be props in some
macabre film, in black and white. A sliver of light in the loft, three drops, hatching
noir thought-bubbles above John Howard’s latex scalp
he daydreams of ship building, of being a people smuggler
or something else, nothing to do with people, their syntax and derision:
a matter of semantics and position position position.
the fleshy innocent wolf morphed into mist
all the cue cards lost in a tumble
wrapped in the travellers towel, the make-up artist’s breasts pressed against 	his head
and he ordered three ships sailing by but cardboard was cheaper to come by
a trickle of red stained its beauty where the beast lay dead
still there were those who believed that once more it could raise its ugly head
from its place in the dirt ; shot & bleeding it lay still , one paw ambling 	through its guts
	(now on the outside) ; the redness lost in the B&W concocktion (thankfully) ;
fade to white; cut; print.
Why does the devil wear his trousers inside out? we ask.
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18 Responses to at the moonlight splayed, shot on the dirt floor, silver and soft.

  1. Michael Farrell says:

    we were shooting the les murray biopic & it was all going cheaply to plan (for cannes)

  2. Jeff Klooger says:

    plenty of slow pans and montages – a bit short on action scenes

  3. Bev Braune says:

    and I, like a lost hitchhiker, watching

  4. macabre film, in black and white. A sliver of light in the loft, three drops, hatching

  5. Anthony DiMatteo says:

    all my lovers proving to be props in some

  6. Gregory Horne says:

    noir thought-bubbles above John Howard's latex scalp

  7. Libby Hart says:

    he daydreams of ship building, of being a people smuggler

  8. or something else, nothing to do with people, their syntax and derision:

  9. a matter of semantics and position position position.

  10. valli says:

    the fleshy innocent wolf morphed into mist

  11. all the cue cards lost in a tumble

  12. gypsy says:

    wrapped in the travellers towel, the amke-up artist's breats pressed against his head

  13. Meg Dunn says:

    and he ordered three ships sailing by but cardboard was cheaper to come by

  14. Helen Cramer says:

    a trickle of red stained its beauty where the beast lay dead

  15. Genevieve Osborne says:

    still there were those who believed that once more it could raise its ugly head

  16. w.m.lewis says:

    from its place in the dirt ; shot & bleeding it lay still , one paw ambling through its guts

    (now on the outside) ; the redness lost in the B&W concocktion (thankfully) ;

  17. fade to white; cut; print.

  18. Dianne Cikusa says:

    Why does the devil wear his trousers inside out? we ask.