Catullus 85

By and | 31 January 2013

translated by Charles Bernstein

Odi et amo. quare id faciam, fortasse requiris.
nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior.


Hate and love. Why’s that?, you’d ask
Don’t know, I feel it and it’s torture.



Richard Tuttle started off with:

All I do is hate and love. Why, you might ask?
I don’t know, but it is the cause of torture.



For reference I checked:

Louis Zukofsky:
O th’hate I move love. Quarry it fact I am, for that’s so re queries.
Nescience, say th’ fierry scent I owe whets crookeder.

Peter Green:
I hate and love. You wonder, perhaps, why I’d do that?
I have no idea. I just feel it. I am crucified.



There were many drafts:

Love and hate. Query: why’d I do that?
Don’t know, just sense it & it’s excruciating.

Odious & amorous. Hey: why’d I do that?
Beats me, just feelings & I’ve been crucified.

Hating & loving. Why do I do that?
Beats me, just feelings & excruciating

Odious & amorous. Hey: why I do that?
Beats me, just feelings & I’ve been crucified?

Hating & loving. Query: why do that?
Beats me, just feelings & I’ve been crucified.

Odious and amorous. Hey: why’d I do that?
Beats me, it’s just my feelings & I’ve been crucified

Odious and amorous. Hey: why’s that?
Beats me, just my feelings & I’m crucified

Odious and amorous. Query: why’d I do that?
Don’t know, just sense it & it’s excruciating.





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